Death Dungeon: A Million Yuan a Day
死亡副本，日薪百万
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 226k Words
- Genre
- Unknown
- Subgenre
- Unknown
- Updated
- 2mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
117Chapters
29Reads
3Listens
13.2kReads · all time
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Reader comments 8
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It looks great, but why does it change to first person later? Although the first-person perspective is more immersive, I still prefer the third-person perspective. There are no major problems with the logic of the whole book. I have not noticed any minor problems. Occasionally there are a few typos, but overall there should be no more than 10. As far as love is concerned, the second world is not bad at the moment, and I look forward to its future development. I hope the author will not stop updating. (I don't have many long reviews. This book is really good, but not enough people are following it, so I'll leave a comment. I hope the author won't stop updating. I really like it)
The setting is pretty cool, and there are a lot of foreshadowings in the early stages. The relationship between the two develops at a pretty fast pace, right? Feeling, but "getting along" is relatively smooth and smooth. To be honest, the plot of the dungeon is very common and not outstanding. The appearance of the two heroines is quite obvious, because a lot of physical descriptions are used, and there are many places where the first-person and third-person perspectives switch back and forth. It looks weird and confusing. It is not logically obtrusive but lacks rigor. The writing is okay, and there are no obvious highlights. The two heroines also have cookies. If you are looking at the storyline of Infinite Streaming and the older heroine, I would not recommend it so much. The props and skills involve "not many". This is because the number of uses is not specified or it is not many. Then I am 100% sure that the main perspective is ↓ p 0 O Right [Working on draft] But if you are looking for dual heroines + unlimited flow, this setting is actually quite rare, and this book is also quite good and edible.
One update a day is too little, I recommend 500 updates a day [smile]
Good looking (♥∀♥) author, please come on, come on, come on [love] [love]
It's so good. I love reading it. Good luck to the author.
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
The plot design is good, but I suggest the author to tell readers who have not read this book that the person names switch frequently and they can be modified appropriately [Blow kiss]
Why haven't you updated it yet🙀? It's very beautiful. Come on!