Magic Journey: The Musketeer on a Broomstick

Haokang, but in the early stages, Elaina was too aloof, and Lorraine was so timid that it took over 100 cards to perfectly use her magic (and even then, she had to steal it from Hilo). These could be improved. Also, the pacing was a bit slow, and the protagonist felt more like an observer. The romance arcs could be improved by giving the protagonist more involvement. It's a good read as a slice-of-life story. Keep up the good work! 😋

The author's writing is excellent; the first-person narrative was truly refreshing. I just don't know why nobody's reading it. And the author's perseverance certainly deserves this rating! 💕 Keep it up! Don't stop updating!

I've read the first five chapters and they're really good! 😘😘😘 Keep writing, and I believe I can get a score of nine or higher. Okay, I've read up to chapter 60 now, and I'd like to share my impressions. I feel like the main character and Elaina interact too little, making them seem like they don't really know each other.

It's very good, considered top-tier among fantasy novels, but the updates are too slow. If they could write an ending, it might be on par with *The Other Shore Flower*.

Based on what I've read so far, it's good; the character portrayals are quite good, which is top-notch for Tomato. As for the later parts of the text so far, the writing style isn't great, but it's good enough for Tomato Music. And I have to complain about how few people are watching.

The writing is quite good; at least it's one of the best among the fantasy novels I've read (so when will it update?).

Excellent, well-written, with few major errors, and no grammatical mistakes so far. Overall, I'd give it four and a half stars, but I can't give it four and a half stars, so I'm giving it five stars directly.

It wasn't like a novel, it felt like a dream I experienced firsthand.

It's pretty good, I recommend it.

The male lead didn't seem very involved; the beginning felt more like a slice-of-life anime than a romance, but strangely it was quite good. Its popularity shouldn't be this low. This is really good! It should become a huge hit! Hurry up and become famous!