Magic Journey: The Musketeer on a Broomstick

Haokang, it's just that Irena was too cold in the early stage. Lorraine only needed more than 100 pictures to use her magic power perfectly (I still grabbed Shiloh's). It can be strengthened appropriately. In addition, the pace is indeed a bit slow. The protagonist is more like a bystander. In the love chapter, the protagonist can be changed to have a sense of participation. It looks good in daily writing. Come on, work on it😋

The author's writing style is very good, and the first-person narration really stood out to me, but I don't know why no one read it, and the author's perseverance is indeed worthy of this rating [heartfelt] Come on! Don't stop updating

After reading the first five chapters, I feel really good [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]. If you write it well, I believe I can get a score of nine or more. Okay, I have read Chapter 60 now. Let me tell you my impressions. I feel that there is too little interaction between the protagonist and Irena, which makes me feel that they are not familiar with each other. Then I only watched the series, and I felt that the protagonist in some chapters was useless at all, and passed by as soon as I opened and closed my eyes. It was not very interesting. At present, Irena's portrayal is too little. If I exclude the subjective impression from watching the series, then I feel that the heroine in this article is a very cold lady [face covering] [face covering], not as lively as Irena in the series.

It's very good, and it's considered top-notch among the Demon Brigade fandoms, but the update is too slow. As long as I can write the end, maybe it will be on par with Higanbana.

As far as what I've read so far is concerned, it's good. The characters are well drawn, which is top-notch in Tomato. As far as the following text is concerned, the writing style is not very good, but it is enough for Tomato ( And there are very few people who want to complain, but it's also true that anime like Witch Journey and Problem Children Are From Another World haven't been released for a long time (sad) Witch is a bit better, Problem Child is almost not popular at all now

The writing is very good, at least it is the best among the Demon Travel fanfics I have read (so when will it be updated)

Excellent, the writing skills are good, there are no major mistakes, and there are no grammatical errors after reading it so far. Overall, I give it four and a half stars. However, I cannot give it four and a half stars, so I will give it five stars.

Not like a novel, like a dream I experienced personally

Very nice, recommended

I feel like the male protagonist has no sense of involvement. The previous episode felt like a daily routine and not like a relationship, but somehow it felt pretty good. The popularity shouldn't be so low. It's really good. It should be very popular. Hurry up and make me popular.