The Naruto Road: The End of Chakra
忍界之路查克拉的终结
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- Anime Fanfiction
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- Naruto: Searching for the Sea, Taking on Gundams火影查海拉专打高达Alternate title on Fanqie
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Since he's not a member of the Hokage's faction, going to Konoha is practically suicide, isn't it?
It's bizarre. A time traveler establishes a country and is then harassed by the daimyo and their allied ninja. He wins the first battle, demands ransom from the ninja, and then abandons the daimyo. Then the daimyo suddenly unleashes the Five Kage, Jinchuriki, and the Allied Forces. He can't handle it, and he even loses two brothers.
One star seems a bit too much to me. The younger brother is dead, yet they haven't wiped out Sarutobi and Shimura's clans, and killed everyone related to them. It's too much; I really can't watch it anymore.
It's too strange for him to go to Konoha after starting like this.
Five daimyo wanted to destroy you, and you defeated them the first time, yet you did this? You didn't even bother to cause them trouble, giving them a second chance. And then you lost two brothers the second time, and you still didn't seek revenge? What kind of transmigrator is this? You have the strength, your injuries have healed, and those five daimyo are such formidable enemies, yet you didn't even kill them?
6. My little brother is dead, he doesn't even dare to fart!
The plot is too convoluted. The protagonist could have saved his brothers but didn't, possessed power but didn't seek revenge. The new transmigrator knows the plot but doesn't know to meet the protagonist. He has the strength to unify the ninja world but doesn't know to do so. Furthermore, it feels like the plot is being padded out to reach a word count.
The second half, saying that he would seal chakra for the sake of the whole world, is hilarious. He didn't even seek revenge for his two younger brothers' deaths. He sealed the chakra and the Kaguya clan on the moon just threw stones at them. They're all like planetary bombs. Let's see how you defend against them. You can seal chakra, and you can seal gravity too?
This book falls apart after the deaths of two younger brothers following the founding of the nation. To keep readers engaged, a ninjutsu technique to resurrect the two deceased brothers must appear shortly later in the story.
That's weird, it feels like a primary school student writing an essay.