After Failing to Conquer the Naruto World

It's the plot and routine that I like. This is one of the few books I've seen that writes about Indra, as well as the relationship between Hatake Sakumo and Akasaka no Scorpion. I'm really looking forward to it. The author is very active. I'm not good at words, but if you have friends who are good at words, you can reply to the author. (Don't pay attention to the comments below, they are my message to the author) Also, the author is too reserved. We perverts are not very happy. The author might as well be bolder, such as Indra and Uchiha Izuna, Senju Tobirama and the time traveler, Mitsuki was born early, Orochimaru and Kimimaro or Orochimaru and Yakushidu.

Come on, work hard, I really want to see Minato. I found out that the protagonist is a boy. I was shocked, but we were still together. However, the protagonist left, and Minato went dark. He looked for the protagonist, and then played in the dark room.

It's well written, I hope the protagonist can give Minato a real love interest Now that the plot is written, it's okay to fall in love with Kakashi [face covering]

I will still read this book again. Although the author's handling of the relationship between the three people is a bit sloppy (maybe my comments made Dada change it and ruined Dada's original outline. Damn it), but as for the description of the characters, I can only say that it is great! ! ! Moreover, the large text makes me feel the tenderness that cannot be expressed in words involuntarily, and the writing style is super delicate! ! Especially the extras, I love every one of them. I look forward to other extras or system things that Dada will publish next. In short, I will always support whether it is this book or the next book of Dada. So come on, Dada [fly kiss] [fly kiss]

I hope the author's ending won't be too harsh (≧∇≦)/

Very nice! ! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] (See the comments written on Chapter 31) Then I would like to make a small suggestion to Dada. Dada's descriptions of the protagonist in the article are all "girls…". Could you please change "girl" here to "boy" or "boy" or write the name of the protagonist? Because the protagonist is a boy, writing "girl..." Always makes me feel like I'm watching a romance [face-covering][face-covering] Of course, this is just a small personal opinion. Other than that, I don't think there is any problem. The writing is great! ! ! ! [Love][Love][Love][Love]

I read the comments and finished reading it. The writing is quite good, but the author is a female college student. At the same time, there is a Yiduidi episode in the middle. There is still an ending, but there is only a small part of the story. I don't have enough brain cells after reading it. When did the protagonist get Minato's first kiss?

I'm so happy to see someone who writes about Watergate

It's very interesting. I like Minato's Attack but I don't dislike Kushina. After all, although I like Minato very much, the love between my parents in the original novel is also very sweet. I just like this logic. It's not bad to be with both Minato and Kakashi in the end hahaha The extra is also very interesting, but I was so teary-eyed when I watched it at night, damn it! It's the suspected card-carrying literature that was almost be. I also liked this cp before, but a wife from Old Ford who wrote very well almost made me into emo. That wife was good at writing but she only likes to write about sadness. She said that be can make people more impressed. QAQ, in the end I quite liked it. I even want to see the author write a new article! ! ! I support it. I like it very much. I am also a college student. Hahaha, I have to go to eight in the morning almost every day. It is so difficult. Come on, author!

I personally hope that the protagonist and Minato will be together, but when I think about them being together, how will Naruto be born? In the end, the original partner remained intact, so it can be regarded as Be in a certain sense. So if the protagonist and Kakashi are together, will it be the same as Be? [Wronged]