The Outcast: Tales of the Thirty-Six Thieves of the Jia Shen Era

It's still very good, but I didn't watch the flashbacks of the supporting characters. Of course, it would be better if the pace was faster, especially the scenes of fighting the Japanese. There's a story about a guy who leads a group of people to fight the Japanese. 😂

The author skillfully connects the protagonist with the cause and effect of the Jia Shen year, creating a sense that everything originated from the author's own actions. The writing is delicate and fluent, and the plot feels novel and plausible. It deserves a five-star rating and encouragement (keep it up!).

It's not invincible, not mindless, has no female lead, and no system. Unlike other one-person fanfiction, which all start from the Luo Tian Grand Ceremony and are all formulaic and formulaic, I've read other fanfictions, and none of them were readable. The protagonist's personality is well-developed; he's not the typical loser type. The only problem is the slow update speed.

I've read quite a few fanfictions by this author. Although he's a new author, the quality is pretty good, with few flaws. It's above average for fanfiction; you can check it out if you're interested. It's quite good.

It's going well so far. I wonder if the protagonist in this timeline will visit the Tang Sect. The Battle of Mianshan and the Sky-Piercing Cave are arguably the key events in eliminating the Jia Shen Rebellion.

It's a pretty good fanfiction. There are no cheat codes or systems. The protagonist is calm and collected, and his cultivation focuses on improving his life force and overall health. The plot fills in the gaps left by the original work. It's quite good, but the rating is low. Such a low score suggests someone is maliciously manipulating the rating.

Hey bro, I think this book has the potential to be a hit. The plot is actually pretty good, whether it's Liang Ting in the early episodes or the Lu family mansion. It's just that the fight scenes are a bit lacking. Also, don't forget I was one of only a dozen or so people urging for updates back then! 😳😳 Keep it up!

Hope to see what happens next

This book ranks among the top few of the Under One Person fanfiction I've ever read. The only flaw is that the final chapter, which returns to the modern world, is too short. The author could have chosen to transform into primordial Qi and start over in the womb, similar to Feng Baobao, only losing her past memories but not completely. This could subtly influence the plot at crucial moments.

It's all alright, but there's no need to delve too much into the past of characters like Liang Ting. After all, this isn't a comic book, and writing it like that in a novel would easily make it hard to keep the reader engaged.