The Outcast: I Use Reverse Life to Unite All Beings

The heroine said she was Lu Linglong, but she was ambiguous with Feng Shayan. [Smile]

If you don't understand anything about the plot, you can ask rational questions and the author will still try his best to reply. Thank you all.

The writing is very good, I hope the world in the novel will unfold slowly.

Look, kid. Overall, it's pretty good. The protagonist's image is perfectly created, and the characters who appear in the plot aren't too abrupt. The protagonist's arrogance is shown by the contrast between behavioral performance and inner activities. Pay attention to @. Come on, the author and Laodeng will update quickly.

Yes, the author is indeed getting better at writing bit by bit. I feel that the overall combat power has improved. Overall, it is not bad. Maybe the protagonist seems a little too forbearing, but considering his age and experience, it's quite reasonable. I hope the author will feel more comfortable writing later.

I still think the author made the protagonist's character more like a gentleman. It looks more comfortable and looks like a fairy born from the world.

The writing style is much better than most one-person fanfics. The author is great and will update quickly [laughs]

Why is it so great? As a fan, the pace is a bit slow, but the writing is okay. I give it 4 stars to encourage you.

Just two words, beautiful

Very nice, but a little lacking