A Dog’s Long Road of Cultivation

I originally wanted to give 5 stars because the subject matter is novel and the writing is okay. In addition, it is not easy to find books of this quality in 🍅. But I am still afraid of misleading other book friends and making others expect too much, so I still give 4 stars. Of course, 4 stars is not low. At least 🍅 there are not many people who can give 4 stars. Come on, author [cover face][cover face][cover face]

Come on, the writing is okay, but the style of painting has become a lot bigger since I opened the spirit.

The article is described from the perspective of a dog. The characters in the previous article are very vivid and lifelike. The overall layout is biased toward history, making it easier for people to feel immersed in it. Highly recommended! ! ! ❤️ ( ⚫︎ー⚫︎ ) Balalala~ ＼ /○\ / / / ヽ \ |// \Վ/ ―イ /\ /

The first chapter at the beginning, that is, the first 15 chapters, is very beautiful, the writing is delicate, the narrative rhythm is comfortable, and the story of an old and loyal dog moved me. Then there is the second part. I have read Chapter 30 so far, and I have some complaints. The protagonist, as a local dog, has acquired the common sense of humans on the earth because of the system... Well... When the system came on the scene in the second part, I convinced myself to read it as two stories, which made me less uncomfortable with the sudden change in the style of painting. However, it should be a matter of personal preference. It is really weird to speak English under the background of ancient immortal cultivation laid out in the previous fifteen chapters. Although Wu Shigou is still the loyal dog of the Wu family, I personally think that as a dog, it has human knowledge and acts according to human thinking, which I find strange. All in all, it's still pretty good.

Let's put it this way, the writing style tends to be like all living things, the characters are flat but unified, the language is half text and half white, and the scenery is used as language before speaking well, but after speaking, there will be some sense of fragmentation of the previous writing structure. The shortcoming is that it is systematic [laughing and crying] If I write about cultivating immortals alone, I can dig deeper, especially the front is well polished, the rhythm is slow, the language has the obscure chewing taste of half text and half white, and there is also a delicate local style, dog design, and character design. The social structure is relatively stable. There are words in the first few chapters that really describe the true feelings, especially between Feng Yuxi and Wu Shigou. The part about going to the kitchen is good. It was mentioned before, just like before, but it has changed a lot. There are no memories inserted. It is very light and very profound. When I read this paragraph, the situation of a dog and two children going to the kitchen to steal food has come to mind. Maybe I also raised an old dog that passed away.

It's very interesting. I haven't seen such a good book in a long time. Good luck to the author.

The writing skills in the first volume were perfect. After I opened the spirit, I said it didn't look good because I thought the style of painting had changed. But I thought it was quite interesting [laughing and crying]

A very nice book. The trick to trick a dog into killing him made me laugh to death.

This dog is good-looking. It can't be said to be time travel. It just has the original three views of the earth. I can't comment on it, but it's just good-looking, the writing is natural, the story is okay, the plot is good, and the arrangement of the eleventh training is eye-catching. It's really fun to watch The low rating is because of Tomato's new book mechanism, but you can see that most of them are five-star. Highly recommended to watch. (The author is very good at writing)

The first few chapters are just the finishing touch and very attractive. The rest of the book is also very good and well-written. The ending is a bit sloppy and rushed. The only flaw is that the middle part is not good in terms of emotions, which is Wu Kaijiang's Peach Blossom Land. Because there are too many and too complicated, I wish I could just hang on to him if he is a woman. There are some occasional surprises, but not many. To be honest, this is one of the few books that I can read from the beginning and continue to follow it until now, without giving up or stopping in the middle. I hope the author's next book will be like this, so I'm here to see you in the next book.