Madara's One Piece Adventure

Overall, it's okay. Madara isn't very OOC, and the plot is quite interesting. There are two poisonous points for me: 1. I thought Madara should walk sideways except for t0, but in the end he couldn't kill the golden lion? 2. There are a group of women around Madara. When the author wrote this part, it seems that the small head tends to dominate the big head. Although this is probably not a shortcoming in male videos, I came to see Madara, not to watch the story of small heads [face covering] Overall four stars, no flaws at all

Come on, the subject matter is good, but don't say that Madara's lover is the girl who was rescued. By the way, I would like to ask the author if he can update more [please update]

I think this book should be rated 8.5 Or above. Nicole's plot about Madara is not considered OOC. It can only be said that the author added drama. I started watching Naruto in the first year of junior high school, and have been working for a year or two after graduation. I have also read novels and various fan fictions for more than eight years. Although I can't give a rigorous summary, I can still see the good and bad. Even if you look at a few highlight clips, you will notice that Banye is so handsome, he is domineering and he doesn't understand anything. This is the image in my mind of Madara's sudden arrival in another world after the Fourth World War. I think every arrangement is very reasonable. You can criticize the author for the Nicole part, but Madara is very reasonable.

Ahhhhhh, this is really a masterpiece among Tomato fans! ! ! It's really good-looking, and it fits the image of Madara in my heart very well. It doesn't have a bad character! ! The author's writing style is very good! Let me see the spot in my mind again. He has a new family, new bonds, and new travels here. Although it is over, his road is still not over. He is a gentle Ban, a proud Ban, and a Ban who has expectations for his children. Madara's journey on the new road was particularly perfect. The process was filled with laughter and laughter. There are many contrasts between Madara's characters. The image of Madara is also enriched and is special. Is what is expected. Let me once again see the traces Madara left behind in the world of pirates. I don't have much influence on the ending. It just means that we haven't seen his future path. The dialogue and guest appearances between Hashirama and Izuna (or should not be guest appearances) are more enriched. Later in the extra chapter, Banxin's family saw him again, and it was full of laughter and laughter.

The writing is good, but the battle plot feels a bit boring. I can't say that Ben's character is 100% restored. I can only say that it is about the same, but it also has a unique flavor. I remember Peach Rabbit only appeared in a few scenes in the anime, as if he didn't exist at all. But to write this book with a completely new identity and character, I think there is no more suitable original character than her. I think Nicole's role is okay. It's really difficult for an ordinary woman to participate in a dispute that is almost entirely filled with monsters. The only dissatisfaction is that the offline method is a bit unacceptable. Gouzi has nothing to say, he can stand up to any situation, and can scold anyone. The scenes where he and Taotu scold others are my favorite, it's so interesting. Originally, I wanted to give it four stars, but when I saw Taotu kneeling on the ground and hysterically shouting "Dad" at the end, I cried, and the tears were a little strange, but it really touched me. After thinking about it, I think about this scene, so I will give it five stars. I read it again after a year and a half. Alas, I feel more stamina when I devote myself to reading.

It's really good-looking, but Madara's current setting is too invincible. When will there be a concept fruit for Madara to fight hard? Madara is just a Hashirama, and I don't agree with the lack of a 1v1 battle between real men and Hashirama in the pirate world.

Come on, Uchiha Madara in Naruto is so handsome in his five battles against the entire ninja world. Since then, he has been his favorite character in Naruto [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

It's good-looking, and Madara in it is both hot and cute.

A very good story, especially in the portrayal of family affection, is very rare in online literature, and it is not just online literature. In recent years, there seems to be no other family-centered work except Spy Playing House. Diary of a Foreign Country is also one of them, but this is not so much about family, but more about the estrangement and communication between people. The character creation is very good. Needless to say, Ban Ye, who is the protagonist, his emotional changes are the core of this book. The supporting characters are also well portrayed, and you can feel their will and spirit. Even if there is the shaping of the original work itself, this shaping is still excellent. The villains are also first-rate, especially the Golden Lion and Yimu. The image of a hero heading towards the top and the king of the world who is restrained and living a little crazy are all very well portrayed. The design of the plot is actually quite good. The character changes at several important points are also well done, and the daily parts are well written, so when the points are reached, you can empathize with the characters. The writing style is overall excellent. Although the visuals and fighting parts are average, the daily parts are humorous, and the emotional parts can also show emotions. Also, even though it is labeled as an invincible style, this book is not really a good read. It's not that it's too weak, but it's just that the focus of the work is not there. There are a lot of daily parts in this book, and it's also a comedy. Moreover, the ending is somewhat regrettable, but it cannot be considered a pure and enjoyable work. So although I think it is a very good work, it is best read by readers who can accept regrets.

It's great, there are a lot of funny plots in the early stages. What impressed me the most was Mom's Rush, and Garp was even more anxious hahaha, but once the novelty wore off and started to dull, I didn't have much desire to read it anymore, probably after 60%, but that doesn't stop it from being a pretty good book [I understand]