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The thinking is rigorous and logical, excluding some minor roughness and flaws in the details. It can be regarded as an edible masterpiece. In the later stage, he kept suppressing it, turning the protagonist into a grandson. Anyone can step on a true successor, and belittle and ridicule him openly or covertly. So after the protagonist reaches high-level qualifications, will he have to face another bunch of ridicule from geniuses with earth-level, heaven-level spiritual roots and special physiques? Why are the routines of male videos like this? The rating is still too high!

Five stars, must be five stars. This is the best book I found on Tomato. Apart from the minor flaws in the early stage, it is a typical book that starts low and goes high. Although the progress is a bit slow, it is really interesting and interesting. From now on, it depends on whether the author can maintain his level in the middle and later stages and achieve a smooth landing. Generally speaking, after this book becomes popular, there is absolutely no problem with a score of 8.8 Or above. In fact, I prefer a high-scoring work of 9.4, But again, it depends on whether it can be implemented smoothly in the middle and later stages. The current progress is still in the novice village, or even in the warm-up stage of the mid-term, and has not yet reached the climax. If the climax is written, the high-scoring work will definitely be stable 👍 Kids, the plane crashed. I thought the game was warming up in the mid-term, but I didn't expect it to be the climax. It ended before it even started. 😫 It's sad, it's a shame, no wonder this book hasn't reached 8 points yet. [Grudged] Since the beginning and end of 1v9, this book has started to go downhill. It's been daily, daily, and then all kinds of "chicken soup" water characters. The description of fighting is also not good enough. Especially the 1v9 part, fighting, fighting, there are a lot of psychological descriptions + chicken soup, all kinds of "oaths", it is exactly the same as a feeling of "everyone thinks like me, I am a xx", and then suddenly snap, soon, I win, and then it is over, it is really exhausting to watch, if you just stop and delete the pile of chicken soup psychological descriptions, the look and feel will be better than this, ugh 🤦 After reading the latest chapter, I felt that the author was a sign of failure. The main plot was slow to advance, so I mentioned it to my friends every now and then. I really have to ask, "Brother, don't you have an outline?" Why did it give people the feeling that I couldn't write anymore, and I didn't know how to proceed with the plot after that, so I had to grind out the word count? 🍉 I can only say that it's a book maintenance. Although the author's style is very laborious to write, before the protagonist reaches the golden elixir and the main plot is not advanced, the book's rating will probably not be high, especially the follow-up version seems too torture [laughter]

It is a very good novel about cultivating immortals. The protagonist is portrayed as a villain because he is too greedy. As we all know, too much is too much. Being greedy is one thing, but being too greedy is another. It can easily arouse resentment because the protagonist does not take his own life seriously many times and wants to gamble to make more money. What is the difference between this and the author's emphasis from time to time on the difference between 90% and death? The left and right brains are fighting each other. When the protagonist is greedy in the plot, it will give people a sense of providence.

The writing is quite good. The eight-year-old YY beauty mentioned in the comments is actually okay. I don't really like it. It's just a life-saving strategy for a mortal who has no resistance to face the Qi training overhaul. As for the names of Qin Shuiru and He Yuzhu, it is indeed a bit confusing. The author said that it is too troublesome to come up with names. I can accept this, so it's okay. The standard has dropped a lot compared to the previous ones, especially when it comes to the Qingjing Sect. The storyline is actually fine, but the description is very unflattering. The protagonist has always been defeated because of greed. The author may have wanted to write a plot like He Shou was fried and was blinded by a big forest tree, but in fact, from what I saw, I just felt that the protagonist was too greedy and short-sighted. Although the reasons are given later, I can only say that I no longer feel happy. Now that I have established the foundation, it is still the same. I can only say that in Tomato, if you write like this, you will suffer a lot.

It is a very pure type of oriental immortality. It is very suitable for literary novels. There is no mechanical routine of immortality. The plot is reasonable, the characters are well created, the writing is smooth, the structure and setting are pure and unique. It can be regarded as an above-average work in Tomato. Please keep updating.

The writing is good. Except for the protagonist who is snatched away by the author as soon as he leaves the house and the beautiful girl who really thinks that he has a good middle-grade spiritual root, the rest of the book is pretty good. There is no stereotype of other fairy tales or mindless upgrades.

The writing is very good, but the story about the indigenous son of destiny made me laugh to death. The protagonist used the evil spirit of the main world to build the foundation. He has already become a human, and he can dominate immediately. As soon as he becomes a human, the master calls out to rebel.

It's not a hodgepodge of traditional cultivation of immortality. It's about seizing opportunities to create cause and effect. There are a lot of conflicts in similar settings. The good points are that the writing is decent. Nine out of ten books are written by AI🍅. If someone can write it in a big environment, you can probably read it. The character of the protagonist is occasionally a virgin. Those who pursue pure blackness should not be able to read it.

Love to watch. Let me tell you what you like, it's a bit confusing, I hope it can support the author. 1. The protagonist's character is realistic and the golden finger is suitable. The protagonist is an otaku who prefers cultivation, egoism, rationality + greed for money, with a kind face and an evil heart. For example, when I interacted with Chu Feng, I thought I would fall into the trap of becoming good brothers, but later I discovered the differences between the two. The pitfall was that the protagonist, as a practitioner on the Tao, also has a heart to enjoy loneliness. 2. The worldview of this book is relatively dark when unfolded, but the author reveals it layer by layer. As a pawn in front of the protagonist, he will often be interfered with and become a pawn on the chessboard. But the strange thing is that the author's description is still relaxed and freehand. I read it from the beginning. Logically speaking, this is considered "combat power", but I feel it is reasonable and very readable. It is awesome. 3. The shaping of Qingming Demon Sect. The growth paths of the protagonists in many novels are as follows: they enter a small sect, then become the mainstay, and finally discover that this small sect is a lonely large sect, revive them, and lead them to the top. And in this process, there is always a villain ticket, who is powerful and spares no effort to suppress it. In this novel, the villain is actually myself. I am the most powerful sect from the beginning, and the training method is very interesting. I am not allowed to kill each other just because I am a demon sect. There are rules. This is the way for a sect with centripetal force to train newcomers.

I think this book is really good. Someone in the comment section mentioned its overwhelming power. I would like to refute this point. In this world, the protagonist is already considered a genius among geniuses. Most of the protagonist's shortcomings are actually calculated by the superiors (not targeted, just needed, and it happens to be there). The protagonist is a convenient downgrade). I think the 7.3 Of this book is low, about 8.8. If you can calm down and read it slowly, it can even exceed a 9. Anyway, it is much better than the 9 points recommended by Tomato (many 9 points are written like shit). I think the disadvantage is that two books a day are not enough to read.