Middle School: My Desk Mate Is a Stunning Beauty

How should I put it, the plot in the book is very good, but the details are not particularly accurate. And in some places, it is obvious that I wrote it for the sake of writing it, and it is not the so-called deep love that comes naturally. Hope you can work harder! ! ! !

Stars will be replenished later depending on the situation. The writing style cannot be said to be amazing. The details are pretty good, with a slight idealistic color. The storyline is very good so far, close to reality, and I can continue to watch it (excellent). However, there is no special emphasis on blurring out those unimportant characters, such as classmates, teachers, etc., There are always just a few people in this book. The world view of the novel still needs to be described (currently I think it is a fly in the ointment, just a personal opinion). I would like to give some suggestions. My idea is to let the male and female protagonists go through a relatively big thing (difficulty) so that they can rely on each other and gradually develop feelings. The progress should not be too fast. After all, love should not be too hasty. Come on, author.

It's worth reading. It's a fresh article on campus, inspiring and healing. (I hope there will be no swords between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, and the normal daily emotional line will develop slowly like this, without any bloody plot, let alone any big villain [face covering]) There is no poisonous point (for me), the three views are very clear, the protagonist Xiaoshuai (not handsome or very handsome), the family is well-off... Come on, author! [Sending Hearts]

What kind of school is this? You study in the dormitory late at night, and you can go out to the snack street at night. It's so cool.

The content of the story is relatively real and in line with public life. The characters have distinctive characteristics, the logical thinking is relatively complete, and the language expression ability is strong. It is very realistic in describing the story content of the male and female protagonists. This novel is worth recommending. I hope the author can strengthen his training in pen and ink and enrich the content of the novel's campus story.

In fact, for a student like me who is about to enter high school, this book feels very close to life and reality. The description of the characters is not one image that runs through the whole book, but a continuous and in-depth description. Not only for this book, but also for the author himself, it is the change and growth of this novice author. As the author said in the article, regarding the portrayal of my past, the sublimation of my past and future, and my personal character, there is actually no one in the article whose character is similar to mine, but I just feel that it looks very comfortable and not so irritating. This is actually an advantage of the author. Then this book is different from most of the books I have read. It tells the story from a first-person perspective. It was not very attractive when I first saw it, but gradually, it made me feel its charm. This charm is not there from the beginning, but is carried out step by step, which is a very good thing for us readers. But... The author, you update too slowly, and the update is not enough to read. I hope you can speed up the process. The other thing is... Don't be unfinished... Don't be unfinished... Don't be unfinished. Say the important things three times. The main reason is that the only "Dragon" I watched was almost unfinished. Okay, I'm exhausted. By the way, the author saw it, remember to take a good look.

The author writes very well and has a strong sense of immersion. It seems like personal experience at first glance, but he is still not very proficient in writing or details. Finally, where is the author from Anhui? Maybe it can be used as a ball tie-up

@Xiaokangouzi I still hope that you and your Le Yue can be together. Even if we are separated by thousands of miles of mountains and rivers, we will still go to each other. I not only hope that the ending of the novel is happy, but I also hope that the ending between you and her is also happy. You have to work hard, Gouzi, are you willing to let Le Yue marry someone else? And if you still witness the whole process, will you be willing to do so?

A very good flow of literature. I hope the author can make up for the regrets of youth in the novel [Chigua]

Beautiful, the article is very in line with my taste. It has developed since high school. The relationship is also the kind of hazy love, not mixed with interest disputes, pure love. I hope there will be no knife [cry][cry]