Above the Immortals

Ermao is good at writing sweet stories, and the last two novels were particularly sweet. I hope this novel won't be tooth-ache-inducing. The male protagonist of this novel has a pretty good character, he is a madman, quite novel...

Super sweet, super sweet, no knives at all, all sugar without knives. The author's other two books are also very sweet. I recommend you read them both. The protagonist is also very good-looking. She is the kind recognized by crazy people. She will criticize the protagonist my new wife. If you want to read a sweet article, you can't miss it. The refreshing article is very good. If you want to read it, add a bookshelf and send two cats to the sky. Believe me, trust between people, absolutely refreshing sweet article [shy][shy]

Brothers, please read this, this is a sweet article about a child suffering from cancer who works hard to live in a place where neighbors are harmonious, harmonious and friendly. It touched everyone on the street, especially the only doctor on the street, who kept researching for the child and only wanted to cure the child. There is also a person with a low IQ who cares deeply about the child and is the child's patron saint. There was also a lame man who was extremely caring for the child and often became jealous of the doctor. There is also a man named Shen Hou who loves that child very much and is willing to sacrifice his life for that child. So, brothers, this is a little sweet story about life. The whole text is free of charge, so feel free to read it. This is a sweet article! Sweet article! Sweet article! ! ! ! ! Say important things three times

It's so sweet, there is no knife at all🔪, the author is so friendly [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry ][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][ cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry ][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][ cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry] This is only a few chapters, give me back the monkey

No, buddy, you are really strong. You are improving significantly from one book to another. The plot of Guizhan is good, and the group portraits of Zhenyao Pass are well written. This Immortal surpasses the previous two works in these two aspects. I look forward to your new book. Looks good!

I hope it can be as sweet as the last two books [laughing] It's really, really sweet [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Come on, from the beginning of Guizhan, to the Demon Suppression Pass, and now, I hope that if there is a female protagonist in this book, it will be clearly stated. I hope it will not be like the Demon Suppression Pass, which is uncomfortable to watch. Come on, give me a five-star rating first. I was always worried that I thought I was going to stab Tongtong, but then I turned around and stabbed Monkey... Really, I cried to death

I'm not literate enough to read the whole book. The protagonist is sickly and decisive in killing. The background of the story also fits the characteristics of the protagonist very well

The whole story is succinct, the content is sweet, and the protagonist is cute. Coming from Gui Cha and Zhen Yao Pass, it is absolutely true. Especially sweet.

Warmly recommended, no swordsmanship in the whole text, sweet text, decisive killing [like]

Hmm... Ermao is a "newbie", please support me [smile] I hope this time it won't be as sweet as the first two books, too sweet is not a good thing

After watching it, I really like the male protagonist. The underworld is very similar to Sin City. Highly recommended. I feel that Ermao has regressed and is not as good as the previous two books.

Ermao's new book, I love it so much 😍 The protagonist is Kuangbiao (because the protagonist doesn't like others calling him crazy, so let's call him a pervert, hehe). A good doctor who can cure people to death has returned to the underworld. Now the person next to the perverted protagonist has a kind and pure little boy (Tongtong is currently working as a cleaner at the underworld clinic. The protagonist has been influenced by him. He is not as crazy as before, but he is still crazy [face covering] [staring]) emmm, maybe it will be sugar in the future [laughing] After all, Ermao is a writer who is good at sweet articles [laughing] The protagonist has great fighting ability and the world view is not clear yet, but I am looking forward to it hehe [adoring] The protagonist is a wise and crazy person [admired] whom I love to death. Tongtong is the absolute favorite of the group [blowing kiss]

It's really, really beautiful. The entire text is succinct and extremely heartwarming.

The early stage has a bit of a shadow of the previous work, and it feels like it's not a clean game. The villain's IQ is also a major feature of Ermao. The first two works have top-notch villains. If possible, I would like to see the creation of multiple high-IQ villains with multiple lines. The villains are like immortals descending multiple times. They are suspicious of each other, but together they put pressure on the protagonist. It's just a personal opinion. If you see this, you can think about it and see if it's feasible. More importantly, you should follow your own pace as an author. Personal opinion, don't attack me (dog head saves life)

After reading it, I still feel a little bit confused, but it feels like it should be like this. Alas, this may be the immortal. Recommended reading, a very good book. Unknowingly, such a long time has passed. From the initial lawless underworld to the top underworld in the world, the existence of Tongtong is crucial. I feel like there are still a lot of holes left to fill in this book, such as what happened to the little fat man in the end. The ending feels like a sudden amplification of the move, and there is a slight sense of dissonance. The plot in the early stage is very exciting, but it is a little weak in the later stage, but it is still a good book.

"18-Year-old cute author" and "first time writing a book" certainly have to support it [laughing evilly] The books recommended by the author of a sweet novel like "Zhenyao Pass" must also be very sweet and leave us with good memories, right? @

Very good-looking, I really like the madman, hahahaha, I love this perverted protagonist so much Super pretty

"A newbie writing a book for the first time" "Author of sweet articles" Ermao I thank you, it's so sweet hahahaha

Chapter 73 has been updated. It feels very good, but it lacks a little passion and artistic conception... How to put it, it's like a tempting cake locked in a tempered glass box, but you don't have the key... It's very uncomfortable. What should I do? I can't hold on anymore.

Books written by Ermao all have a characteristic, that is, they do not make people feel separated. Although some books are very good, there is often a section that is not good to read, and then it happens to be that section that many people feel bored and choose to abandon the book. But Ermao's books are different. Although the overall rating is average, the content of the book is also average, and there is nothing particularly surprising. The beauty part (but there is still a very passionate part) also happens to be this stable performance, which has become the characteristic of Ermao Shu. Whether it is a ghost mission or a demon-suppressing pass or this fairy tale, it is always the same. It can always give full play to its own strengths smoothly. The plot is pieced together very compactly in the passion, so that people will not have a strong sense of fragmentation.

It's such a cute little sweet story that I'll laugh out loud in the middle of the night. The protagonist travels to the imperial city and mingle with everyone. The laughter never stops! The warm-hearted supporting characters vividly show the truth, goodness and beauty of the world.

Personally, I feel that this book is like an evolved version of God-Slaying. The content is impeccable, especially the part about the Blesser. I completely denied it at first, but later I realized that there are good and bad aspects. From the aspect of writing about dead monkeys, Ermao is still as kind as ever, and likes to write some warm scenes. The position and number of the Fuxi Bagua in this book are wrong. An unknown person reminds you that the first 100,000 words are the Zhou Wang Bagua. This book has content and interesting things. Lovers of warm writing must not miss it.

Okay, okay, Ermao wrote this, right? It's so sweet. I read the two books without skipping a chapter. It's so sweet that it's so sweet. [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry]

It must be given 5 stars. Based on my understanding of Ermao, this novel must be very "sweet" Dads, give it a thumbs up and let us send the two cats to heaven.

The book is very good. The protagonist seems crazy to others, but he is still very good to the people around him. He is a bit possessive (toward Tongtong). Up to now, I have not understood how strong the protagonist is (there are few battle scenes). He has not received the blessing yet, but he can do it at any time. In short, it is very good. Come on, author! ! ! [Code to live][code to live][code to live]

It has to be said that Xu Er continued the blood and passion of the previous works, and added Su Yang, who has a mixed image, but overall the thoughts and emotions expressed are not as good as those in Zhen Yao Guan, especially the protagonist's image is not full, and he is not as three-dimensional in my eyes as Yu Sheng; it can be said that Xu Er's world view in this work is very stretched. It is a big novel with many characters and a lot of things to express. However, this kind of novel especially tests the author's writing power and control. It is easy to collapse if you are not careful. However, it can be seen that the characters written by the author are a bit too strong, that is, the changes in emotions and attitudes are too drastic, and a few characters tend to become facial expressions. Finally, I hope the author can write better. After reading so many of the author's works, I can only say that the author is not suitable for writing group portraits, but is more suitable for writing multi-threaded character expressions. I understand that the author wants to show the faces of the group portraits, but he cannot grasp the rhythm of the writing, and the plot arrangement is not reasonable. As the saying goes, if he blindly pursues reversals and dazzling skills, the final result will inevitably be inferior. Regarding this novel, I can only give it 3.5 Points, which can only be average and not as good as the previous novel.

It's really good. Ermao's character portrayal is really good.

Online novels are like the stage of life. How you get on stage determines how many cheers you can win, and how you get off stage determines how big a role you are. The subject matter of "Beyond the Immortals" is also considered novel among novels. I am very optimistic about this novel and hope to surpass the achievements of the previous two books. The author of the novel is like a martial arts master. A novel demonstrates eighteen kinds of martial arts. From the beginning alone, you can see the accumulation of lifelong skills. I think Ermao is a master. Those classics of the past all have an evocative ending. Although "Ghost" and "Suppressing Demon Pass" cannot compare with these mountains, it is not easy to write two million-word works, and they deserve a beautiful evaluation. Everything is difficult at the beginning. Online novels are a hundred miles long, but the beginning is the most difficult. I hope the author can work hard. The author and the reader have a long-lasting relationship. The author is like the clouds at the bottom of the stream, and the reader is like the pines on the cliff. The clouds step on the morning sun and say good morning to the pines, and the pines sing in the wind and accompany the clouds into dreamland. The clouds sometimes come and sometimes rest, and the pine trees are always there no matter it is rainy or snowy, the author's works always accompany the readers. The new book "Above the Immortals" currently also has a good plot, and I am very much looking forward to it. Finally, I wish the author a successful new book🔥🔥🔥

Big cheers for the author [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] It's really super super super super beautiful! I chased from the Demon Town to the Immortal, witnessed the changes in the rest of my life and the growth of Su Yang, and felt the author's grand outlook on life and world. Please believe in yourself, gold is always shining and you will never dim! [Sending Hearts]