Above the Immortals

Ermao is good at writing sweet stories, and the last two novels were particularly sweet. I hope this novel won't be tooth-ache-inducing. The male protagonist of this novel has a pretty good character, he is a madman, quite novel...

Super sweet, super sweet, no knives at all, all sugar without knives. The author's other two books are also very sweet. I recommend you read them both. The protagonist is also very good-looking. She is the kind recognized by crazy people. She will criticize the protagonist my new wife. If you want to read a sweet article, you can't miss it. The refreshing article is very good. If you want to read it, add a bookshelf and send two cats to the sky. Believe me, trust between people, absolutely refreshing sweet article [shy][shy]

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No, buddy, you are really strong. You are improving significantly from one book to another. The plot of Guizhan is good, and the group portraits of Zhenyao Pass are well written. This Immortal surpasses the previous two works in these two aspects. I look forward to your new book. Looks good!

The language is very similar to that of Zhen Yao Guan and Gui Cha, which is more cheerful and humorous. Most of them are short sentences and very brisk. Ermao's writing style is also good, and the lyrical sentences with some truth are also very good. The character creation is also very good, with typical images of typical environments. Su Yang, Cripple, Fool, Tongtong, Qiu Ge, Wednesday Dog, etc. In the background of the black street have very distinct images (look forward to the character development in the later stage) Needless to say about the plot, from the point of view of the demon town and the ghost mission, the outline of Ermao is very complete. Some of the stories and dialogues under the main line can make people watch it again and again for a long time. Regarding the issue of the heroine, many people are very concerned about it (including me). There is no heroine in Guizhan, but there is one in Zhenyao Pass. But if you really read that book, Time (the heroine) is more like Yu Sheng's comrade, a shadow. They don't speak much, but they always accompany each other. I say this not to convince you that it is good to have a heroine, but to prove that Ermao can have this kind of emotion (although Yu Sheng and Time are hardly emotional dramas), so please feel free to enter. If it can be seen, there are a few small problems. 1. Is the word "yun" repeated too frequently? Moreover, the semantics are vague and different people have different understandings. Changing the expression will also reduce the reader's fatigue. 2. Ermao's twelve swords are also very famous, but readers take this as a joke, and the author cannot use it as a joke. If you attach too much importance to the sign of knives, it will only become "knife for the sake of knives" or "sameness". Death is the sublimation of the character, but it does not necessarily require this touch of color (in fact, it is also stupid by the knife, I hope it will make them better... But if the plot really requires it, Ermao can just follow his own pace) 3. Take the plot in the book where the cripple reveals a secret to Tongtong. Is the cripple's language too lyrical? It may be okay from God's perspective, but starting from the character of "Cripple", this shouldn't be something he can say. Maybe we can try to figure out the character's language instead of the narrator's language. Finally, I wish "Above the Immortals" better and better, Wuhu!

I hope it can be as sweet as the last two books [laughing] It's really, really sweet [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Come on, from the beginning of Guizhan, to the Demon Suppression Pass, and now, I hope that if there is a female protagonist in this book, it will be clearly stated. I hope it will not be like the Demon Suppression Pass, which is uncomfortable to watch. Come on, give me a five-star rating first. I was always worried that I thought I was going to stab Tongtong, but then I turned around and stabbed Monkey... Really, I cried to death

I'm not literate enough to read the whole book. The protagonist is sickly and decisive in killing. The background of the story also fits the characteristics of the protagonist very well

Warmly recommended, no swordsmanship in the whole text, sweet text, decisive killing [like]