Divine Realm? It's Just a Dessert Shop

It's a very interesting theme and setting, but the protagonist's character sometimes feels fragmented, but I don't think anyone minds it too much. The protagonist is a gentle and principled person, but he also chose to show a calm image in order to open a store. He is a strong man who likes to watch others eat the food he cooks, and he is known as a believer in the gods. However, some detailed descriptions, such as the protagonist often using "oh", "la" and "~" as the end of his speech during dialogue, coupled with an overly proactive service attitude, will definitely weaken this strong temperament and make him too down-to-earth. But when it comes to portraying the protagonist as a gentle and kind store owner, it is not always the case, because the protagonist is often described as pretending to be indifferent and unafraid of a strong person. He does not smile (when he is a store manager), but speaks with a service tone of "Oh!" This fragmentation is especially evident during times of conflict. When someone comes to cause trouble, the protagonist says, "Okay kid, I don't want to talk nonsense with you. Let's bring in someone who can talk to you.", And then throws the person out directly. After the teacher came in, the first exchange between the two groups was ["Let's take a look. What do you want to eat? If you have anything to do, let's talk about it after eating." Shi An stood up, just when the teacher opened his mouth to say something. The teacher had no choice but to hold back the words that came to his lips. It seemed that the atmosphere was good now and he was ready to explain. No matter what the protagonist's personality is, at least at this time, the protagonist's appearance is a principled and strong image. The second exchange was after the food was served. When the teacher was communicating with his students, the protagonist interrupted [Shi An said helplessly: "Teacher, no blood is used in this pudding. The ingredients are very simple eggs, milk and sugar."] At this time, his tone softened instantly, and he suddenly took the initiative to explain patiently. The third time was the teacher's misfortune. The protagonist did not speak and showed indifference. Only after the teacher showed weakness did he describe it. The teacher was slightly relieved. At least he was temporarily stable. Alas, he was destined to offend the family behind Pede. This entire confrontation shows some fragmentation in character performance. The protagonist is in a subtle confrontation with the teacher here, so as the provocative shopkeeper, the protagonist does not need to actively use a downwardly compatible soothing tone to communicate. If he wants to communicate gently, he should not be silent to the teacher's words later. As a long-time teacher at the school, I should be able to get a glimpse of the protagonist's personality. However, the article does not describe the protagonist's personality that the teacher detects from the language, and the author may not think there is a problem. Personally, I feel that if we want to strengthen the feeling that this indifference cannot conceal the gentle nature, we can better reflect it by describing the protagonist's demeanor and having customers take the initiative to ask questions before explaining. Reduce the use of words that soften the tone and limit the protagonist's service attitude to ordinary communication rather than pleasing customers. In this way, the protagonist's external performance and inner world will have a stronger sense of unity. The above are just some personal feelings. Apart from that, the orcs and the protagonist are quite cute. It doesn't matter if you don't care about their personalities. I hope the author can write better and better.

Forgive me for not being able to describe this novel with my poor words, but the whole novel gave me a warm and warm feeling. I really like this rhythm. The description of the food is really superb. The soufflés described really feel soft across the screen... And this article is not as mindless and refreshing as some of the Mary Sue novels of Red Persimmon. It gives people a sense of gradual progress. The interaction with the orcs is super cute, from not being on the same channel at the beginning to the family-like interaction at the end () Who knows how to interact with Xiaobai (that one) The interaction between cats and cats is really super cute and surreal. I will also take the opportunity to sneak into my own cat owner haha, and the world view is well established. The orcs' inferiority, cowardice and fear and anger towards humans are due to the continuous attitude of humans towards orcs in this world. This perfectly makes up for the reason why the orcs had a stressful attitude when they first met Shi An and those orcs who refused to go to the human (Shi'an) shop. Shi'an's candy shop made everyone better and better. I was healed repeatedly, and I directly followed the latest chapter. Every character is vivid. For example, Shi An doesn't like live meat from the market and likes to buy frozen meat in cold storages. If he posts it online, he will definitely be attacked by fake netizens and say, "666, why are you pretending to be a virgin when you already eat meat?" But I think this is exactly the characteristic of our protagonist. Being different does not mean being different, but a line that belongs to the page of one's life. There are also people who like to buy frozen meat. Also, when it describes Shi An alone and doesn't want to cook, I really resonated with him! I just eat it casually by myself, but when my friends are with me, I will cook it carefully, which is really a sense of accomplishment! Only when you love a character can you describe each of his characteristics in such detail. Finally, I wish Shi'an's candy store will expand! The author is getting more and more five-stars!

It's great. It gives me a feeling of Wind in the Willows, that warm feeling of rowing on a river in the summer to go to an unknown place for a picnic, painting your new home, and then running out to meet new friends and go on adventures with friends. Just like this book, it's really well written! ! I like food, and I also like animals. I think of freshly baked bread, even the holes in the bread are brushed with honey, golden and golden, and should be paired with a cup of strong tea. This is a good dinner, and can let the captured toad tell a story. I think of friends going out after a quarrel, and then I met a kind person who had another big meal, special food? Brought back a lot of memories Catch up on the latest in one go, super nice

It's very good. It's non-toxic and doesn't have the kind of idiots who go around provoking people (it's very fun to dance with one finger but there's a lot of plot). The relationship with humans and animals is very warm, plain and interesting. In short, this is a book that animals like you.

A very good book that combines Western fantasy, fantasy world, orcs, and the Golden Finger system. It goes to a different world to open a store. The rules of the world there are that orcs are inferior to humans. Orcs must rely on humans to exist because the gods prefer humans. Otherwise, the orcs will become irrational monsters and attack their companions. An orc who has a master will not lose his mind.

Daily life, no CP, western fantasy, food, magic, gods, orcs, these elements, I really like it at the beginning. As the plot unfolds, the narrative of the story shifts to the perspective of other beasts/humans, and I like the protagonist's gradual upgrade process more. The story follows the protagonist, and I don't want the protagonist to take on too many things and take care of too many things. Many new characters appeared one after another, and I was a little confused. The plot setting is okay, the protagonist is biased toward the savior (especially kind-hearted), and the next step should be a hot-blooded episode. The descriptions of food make me crave it [laughs].

Yum, yum, yum! ! ! ! All kinds of delicious food, the beasts are plush, the food is fragrant, the beasts and the store manager are also very warm, and occasionally there are some small dark side feelings that are very knife-like, just like fairy tale books, very dreamy and beautiful~casual goods~easy to heal~

Super pretty! As a person from a world where everyone is equal, the protagonist's instinct to treat every intelligent creature that can communicate is engraved in his bones, and it is this gentle treatment that becomes the key to saving the orcs and the world. Although the story of this book is slightly lacking, the plain and warm feeling is a great style in itself. The various orcs in the main character's shop really irritated me. In fact, the last online extra is a true portrayal of me. There are so many cute and human furries in front of me, how can I resist being ruthless?

This book can relax my mind and body for me. When reading this book, it feels like the whole person is in a relaxed and warm environment, and one can unconsciously involve oneself in it. I particularly like the relationship between the store manager and the furries, and the store manager also has a very good personality. There is no other situation where he is condescending and seems to be equal but is actually too arrogant. The store manager is not like this. We watched him grow up little by little, from being alone to having his first customer to having many partners accompanying him. Moreover, the store manager's gentleness is always consistent, and he cares for every kind soul equally. This kind of character who is very gentle both on the outside and on the inside is so popular. Reading this novel, it feels like my whole body and mind have been purified. Immerse yourself in it. I really, really, really hope that the author can write more articles like this. Of course, the main reason is because the author's writing style makes people feel relaxed. No matter what the plot is, it can make readers feel physically and mentally happy. And every character in this book is so cute and lovable. I read and update this book every day. When I open this book after school, I feel as if the fatigue from a long day of school has been washed away.

Overall, it's good, but my expectations for the protagonist were too high at the beginning, because at the beginning there were some descriptions of the protagonist pretending to be cold, pretending to be a worldly expert, and acting more cautiously. I would think that the protagonist would stay calm when there are guests, and would also think more and plan. I discovered my own problems from some small things, and said that I should be more careful next time, but there will still be small problems that shouldn't happen, and I will occasionally be careless, but basically at critical moments, I know that if I say too much, I will be wrong, and there will be no problems that expose my ignorance of the world. In this strange world, it is better to be cautious. After all, this is not the kind of cool story where the store manager is completely invincible. The protective shield can only distinguish good intentions from bad intentions in the early stage.