Ultimate Notes: The Iron Triangle's Golden Finger

A new stolen book that you shouldn't miss. The heroine is sweet, salty, and domineering. To Wu Xie, she's a bit leaky. To Xiaohua, she's a caring little cotton-padded jacket. She occasionally has some skin, but overall she's quite obedient. To Zhang Qiling... Hey, I want to know and read it for myself...

It's okay, just watch it as a light comedy about stolen pens and changes. The shortcoming is that the plot is a bit jumpy. It's not necessary to travel through time several times. You will remember it for a while and not remember it for a while. If the heroine has a strong family background, then she can write a light comedy and it's pretty good. There is also the problem of the author's writing style. It doesn't matter if the plot is briefly mentioned. After all, we have read a lot of the main text. In fact, this is good, but the author writes too many personal thoughts (), and there are too many requests for votes at the end of many chapters. There are also dialogues. Names must be written in front of each dialogue. If you are reading the text, it will not have much impact, but if you are listening to the text, there will be a lot of repetition, because some of the character authors have pseudonyms and disguises. You also have to type () to write the character name, so it sounds quite confusing. At least 1/20 of the number of words contains the name of the character at the beginning of the dialogue. I hope that the author can learn from other people's works in future works and change this habit, so that you can clearly distinguish which character is speaking when listening or watching at the same time, and it will not affect the listening experience so much. Come on, author, the plot is still very funny, and the writing is quite good👍

It's very interesting. It's one of the best fanfics I've ever read.

There are 200-word chapters with tail numbers for 1,500 words. For example, the author (Xiao Fengfeng): "Member ➕ Update × 2" Author (Xiao Fengfeng): "Today I welcome my tenth member (Ting Yulan), welcome to join, I will definitely not let you regret joining the trap! Your ➕ will be updated tomorrow!" Author (Xiao Fengfeng): "This month ➕ the daily collection is 128 plus one update, more than 298 ➕ two updates, one member is lit ➕ two updates, two members are illuminated ➕ five updates, flowers are collected every day 888 ➕ one update and the statistics are added the next day, and updates are added the next day." If you can write three or four hundred chapters with one million words, you can write more than 800 chapters, one-tenth is still a water figure, but it does not affect reading, and listening to books will not work.

It's very interesting to watch. I won't lose money if I invest in it. Great support for the author. It's already over. Couldn't the author write more extras? [Almost crying]

It's very interesting. I added a month's membership in the story book to follow this book, and now I find that it's also available on Tomato. It's really great~ In short, Jun Ling wanted to watch her father travel back more than ten years ago to have adventures with Ultimate Evil and the others (she was only a little older in the current time at that time). Later, when she returned to that time and space because of the laws of time and space, everyone else was not allowed to read it. I remember her (but it is in the memory of the protagonist group), so Xiaohua adopted Xiaoling'er during the Sand Sea period. Later, Xiaoling'er traveled back to the past with her little brother. When she came back, she traveled to the wrong space and went to the restart without her (... In short, Xiaoling'er is a second-generation immortal with a great background, and helped her novice father heal a lot of regrets. It's been a long time since I watched it, and I don't remember many of the specific plots. When I saw it on Tomato, I just picked it up from the previous update. I just read other people's comments that it was about going through a tribulation and being struck by lightning and returning to the ultimate period. Oh well, I didn't even remember the specific plot. The restart part was gone after I caught up with it before. I haven't updated much after waiting for a long time. The updates are too slow.

I like it very much, it suits my taste

It's super pretty! The heroine is capable, has a good outlook on life, and is protective of her shortcomings! Occasionally a little domineering! I really love Liao! Although the heroine is very naughty, she is never ambiguous on important matters. She is decisive and fierce in doing things, just like Xiaohua! Still a little group favorite! Anyway, I love it! But there is one thing that I may not have figured out during the transition. Even we don't know when Wu Xie and Xiaohua regained their memories? To what extent has the memory been restored? Does the heroine know the plot? When did the heroine travel through time? Everything else is pretty good! Anyway, it's not a loss if you invest in shares!

It's my type, good reviews

CP Zhang Qiling [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] I think it looks pretty [Blowing a kiss]