From the Start, I Advanced to Nascent Soul Ancestor

Not bad! The writing style is good, but the immortal novel pays attention to generosity, which is not highlighted in some cases, and the protagonist whose evil is highlighted is more suitable as the basis of a refreshing novel. You can take a look when you are bored. The author still needs to improve, come on

The dark novels written by you are not too much compared to mine. They are really good. The protagonist's character has already begun to resemble my demonic power. It's just that we need to work harder to catch up with the great love in the heart of Dao.

It's pointless not to score points. This book itself feels very good. Really true. And isn't this just about releasing the inner darkness and achieving the effect of refreshing writing? . . Cultivation of immortality is nothing more than human nature. One kind is being too ruthless and another is being wanton. In reality, absurdity does not need a reason, but in novels, darkness becomes something people question. People live just to live, and it is best to show their holiness in front of others. For every ascetic, none of his peers died tragically at his own hands, and his wealthy partner became his wedding dress. The knife cannot be sheathed when it sees blood. When you take it back, it becomes a drop of blood dripping from the tip of someone else's blade. Then why not indulge, why not be afraid of death? In order to live, they grovel and linger; because they live, they force good people into prostitution and do all kinds of evil. . . This is what I want to say to those who are slightly disgusted by the plot. . . To be honest, this novel will definitely not be read by too many people, and not too many. Therefore, the author can update slowly without rushing, or he can start a new book at the same time, delete some of the more explicit content, and write about cultivating immortality, with just the right amount of bad money, without trembling. The author doesn't need to pay too much attention to those who criticize. After all, some people are always self-righteous and cannot accept reality or darkness.

But don't be fooled by his rating, I just watched it overnight! ! ! The protagonist is really ruthless, and he doesn't want anything when he is ruthless. Unlike other villain stories, where he fights with other protagonists to the death, and ends up losing none of his relatives, pets, or other things, but this one is different. It shocked me so much that I was convinced! This book is really beautiful. When I came in, I still had the feeling of trying it out. I didn't expect to find a treasure.

The description of the world of cultivating immortals is very real, and the feeling of reading this book is only experienced in the legend of mortals cultivating immortals. In the eyes of those who have read too many cool articles, they may think it is very poisonous, but it is indeed a very good book, so it must be praised with five stars. Come on, author, keep updating more The Ninth Elder of the Zhatian Gang Taishang March 9, 2023

Let me review this book. I like to encourage new books, so no matter how bad your book is, I will give it five stars. There is nothing to say about this book. I feel that the author writes about a person's emotional changes in an exaggerated and real way, just like he exaggerated the inner emotions caused by various reasons that you and I encounter in life. Well, that means that although your writing is very real to vent your emotions, readers don't like it very much! But on the other hand, this may be an innovation! After seeing too many positive images of the protagonist, I felt that it was too unreal. The protagonist of this book is very real and exaggerated. This may be the reason why your rating is low [face covering], because you may not appreciate it. But to be honest, this kind of novel about cultivating immortality and fishing for family development is still good [Like]

The writing is very good. It is among the best in dark literature. I feel that the protagonist is very suitable for the world of immortality. He is not limited to emotions. Although it is a bit dehumanizing, I feel that it is nothing in the world of immortality. It is a pity that the update has been discontinued...

Yes, the writing is very good. Maybe the author will not see these words, but I want to say that writing is a kind of exercise for myself. If the author can persist, then I will definitely reward you heavily in the future. Take this as evidence

A dark fairy tale, very interesting

It tells the true story of cultivating immortals. It is flexible and flexible. It is very satisfying to my appetite. It is not like other novels. It is about the emperor or the realm of gods when I am under 20 years old. This book is very good. I fully support it.