Villain: I Awaken as an Evil God on My Deathbed

Take it easy and don't get reported.

This is a real stallion! What a vulgar evil god

It looks good, but it may be reported, so can I update it ten times a day [smile][smile][smile]

Vulgar, brainless, novice writing style, obsessed with beautiful women and unable to walk, a loser mentality, a hundred years of past and present lives have been wasted

He is ruthless and inhumane. He will not even let go of his children for the sake of strength. He is a brainless bloodthirsty demon who overestimates his own capabilities. He is as strong as an ant and does not hide his development behind the scenes. He will jump around with a little bit of strength. He looks like I am the best in the world. However, wherever he goes, there are people stronger than him. He can make any Weiya kneel down. Wherever he goes, he feels aggrieved. He still wants to kill this or that (they are all much stronger than him and cannot be killed). Everyone else, all brainless. I vomited.

My suggestion is don't worry about Madonna, perverts, etc., Just watch it without thinking. Let's not talk about the protagonist first. Apart from the female characters, all the male supporting characters have their intelligence reduced. All the passers-by have their intelligence reduced. The consciousness in the foundation-building stage is just like nothing at all. They still use their eyes to see people. The inner disciples of the elders of the sect must be alerted as soon as they meet the protagonist. If they take action early, not only kill the protagonist, they can also cripple the protagonist, right? Just don't take action, just watch the show and get killed. I wonder if elementary school students playing Honor of Kings understand these principles, right? Author, please don't talk about the dark wind. You are simply wearing the dark wind and writing mindless white articles. Blindly emphasizing how ruthless the protagonist is, is this a dark style? As for decisive killing? Isn't that normal? Are immortal cultivators who do not kill decisively still just the kind of brainless people you wrote about? Is this also called a dark flow? Then any qi cultivator in any mortal cultivating novel can be darker than the person in your book. What about the protagonist? A few decades in the previous life, a hundred years in this life. Have more than a hundred years of life experience been fed to the dog? As stupid as a pig. Besides, what kind of novel is this? A novel about cultivating immortals! Take a look at the combat power setting of the Qi-training and foundation-building monks you wrote. It's better to change it to external strength and internal strength. The internal strength warriors in Chen Beixuan's world can kill the normal-minded foundation-building monks here, not to mention that the villains in your novels are all smart. Even you, the emperor, can be killed by the mortal Ancestor of the Pill Formation, right?

The character of the protagonist is very suitable to me

The first part was pretty good, but the second part left me speechless. The cultivation level was abolished, men were killed and women were killed along the way. The system looked like nothing, dozens of pictures didn't appear, and I didn't even know what the author was writing? What do you want to express?

It's not good-looking. He always fights at higher levels and is led by the system. He doesn't know or believes what others say about the realm of the protagonist. He doesn't consider whether the enemy has a trump card. He always rejects strong men with high realms. He always has special expressions. Is there no strong man who can steal the chance to be the protagonist? The protagonist in Tianyin Pavilion is like a fool who keeps wandering and never dies.

The first chapter was okay. After the death of the protagonist in more than 100 chapters, he was no longer alone after being resurrected and rebuilt. He started to clean up his innocence. After being injured and fainting, he woke up and lay on the bed of a beautiful woman. Then he was fed medicine by the woman. The woman started to worry about others when she didn't come back after being out for a day. It was no longer the kind of villain story that killed decisively and only used people.