He's Underage? Well, I'm Mentally Ill!

Well, I can feel that the overall structure is relatively complete. Plot The protagonist [Patient] starts his career as a time traveler and has a low-level status. He grows up through lessons and experience, and then finally encounters an insurmountable problem - Wu Tianyu's vendetta. The upper position violently attacks the lower position. There is no way to solve it in a short time. Then activate the cheat finger - change the picture! Wu Ze, a brothel girl from a parallel world. First, help Wu Ze solve the incident and get the first reward [Turn disease into skill], which is to inflict various injuries of the same level on himself, return to the original world and kill his accomplices to blame Wu Tianyu, and then enter the short-term main line to take the Holy Exam. System In terms of occupations, well, they are very simple, including workers, patients, cremators, Internet celebrities, etc. Continuous fun, convenient for blending themes and some abstract work. Then there is the hierarchy from one to nine, and the level of the profession itself. Now only the first to second levels and the middle and lower ranks are exposed. It can be said that there are many foreshadowings and great potential, and it is not easy to get the bottom line (laughs, of course it depends on the author). Map The first one is of course the main character's initial map, Zhuang Village outside Baidi City, which must be a little bit funny (laughs). It occupies a small area with year-round ice and snow. Most of the villagers have similar ignorant cognition to normal, and have good contact with the protagonist. As the protagonist's temporary residence, it is close to a school for disabled people. Then there is the disabled school. As the name suggests, it is more or less full of problem children, who are normal in the 80s, but it can also be said to be the base camp of the protagonist, which has appeal to some people. Then there is Baidi City, a noble territory. Mortals are not allowed to enter. The dignitaries live inside, and strong soldiers and generals guard the outside. There is not much description, I just feel that it is strong on the outside but weak in any case. The protagonist wants to destroy the whole city, but he thinks it is still difficult. After all, there are three pounds of nails in the rotten ship, and his team is a mob. He must have at least three levels of hard power to make a big fuss, otherwise it will be just a small fight. Finally, there is Wu Ze's brothel, a small space that moves around, a place where garbage gathers, and a place where the world view first appears. Doubts The entire plot line is obviously extreme (the protagonist faces a vendetta), with fierce contradictions and obvious conflicts, but many parts are blurred. Some points are puzzling (for example, one is the tacit cooperation between the protagonist and Wu Ze, and Wednesday's just-in-time rescue, and the Madam's belief are a little less polished) The order is abnormal (karma and divine punishment seems too extreme? It seems that only 10% can pass outside the city) Then there is too much separation in cognition (city residents, city guards, Wu Tianyu, the protagonist, Wednesday and the disabled dean. The twelve passes of the Holy Exam are all completely different. I even think that these seven have at least five time travelers😓)

The convenience is too late, the first plot is too uncomfortable, many readers just leave after watching it, but the second part is really exciting (the plot is not flawed, mainly because it is too painful, the protagonist in the first part really endures the humiliation)

Tomato is a rare masterpiece. Some small details were not done well in the early stage, but the writing became more and more fluent later. The author must be an old bookworm, and I saw the shadow of many books. Daogui's dual perspective and some world views, some of the mysterious battle systems may also be borrowed, and then there is the chapter name of the Dragon Clan, and finally the acting style of the Immortal Lord. They are all quite good. They have echoes of other books and some of the author's own ideas. It's a pity.

It feels unique, the setting is quite interesting, and it fits the description very well. It's too dark, and the protagonist is too miserable, but sometimes it's a bit humorous? It's just too short and not enough to look at. Keep it up first.

I may be a little weird, but I really like the character of the protagonist. To be honest, this kind of character is very popular in a slum with a cyber background! And the protagonist has made it clear early on that he is a bad guy. I can understand other people scolding him in the comments. After all, he is a bad guy. Anyway, I really like this novel! Everything is for oneself, completely bad! One word: cool! The author wrote it very well, please update it! ! !

The writing is very good, that's the character of the protagonist. Tell me, isn't this protagonist a villain? It's cold-blooded enough, I like it. Anyway, it feels like it's seamed, but it's not so obvious. The world view is sealed quite well, and what does the protagonist say? It's a bit shocking to me that he's going to kill me. I haven't seen such a protagonist in a long time But I'm a little worried about the review power Overall, a sufficiently innovative cold-blooded novel

There shouldn't be too much inner drama, and when there is no benefit, you shouldn't think so much about others, like the part where you want to kill the stinky girl, I feel better if there isn't any.

Today, when tomatoes are so homogenized, I finally found another book that allows me to catch up on updates in one go.

Under so many uniformly brilliant novels, this kind of dark but absolutely rational and intellectual novel is really attractive, and the scene in the back where the disabled classmates send the protagonist to take the holy examination is really enthusiastic and touching.

I knew at an early age that things were going to be difficult