Daily Life After Transmigrating to Arknights

The setting of the novel is quite novel, and it is considered relatively good among Tomato's boat tour fans, but I personally think it is difficult to write a novel well from the perspective of a grassroots operator. For now, I feel that the protagonist has a strong sense of supporting role. Although the original plot and description are indispensable, it should not be too much. Currently, the protagonist is basically assigned the same number of scenes as Amiya and others, but I feel that the protagonist should account for at least 70%. Also, I personally feel that the control of details is not very good, the places that should be ignited cannot be ignited, and some parts are a bit awkward (maybe it is my personal reason) [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh], if possible, it will be better to arrange a little knife for the protagonist (really just a little) [eat melon] [evil laugh][eat melon], overall it is very good, the author, please give it a try, I believe it will be popular [like] (personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it, civilized buildings [evil laugh][eerent laugh][eer laugh]) It's too short and weak. The author will update it quickly and give you five stars to give you motivation [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

This book is very good. It goes straight to the subject without any delay, giving the viewer a clean and neat feeling. However, because it goes straight to the subject, some details are less described, which results in a vague and stiff feeling when reading. However, it has no impact if you don't feel it carefully. I hope the author can find a good balance between details and the whole. In terms of character creation, I haven't seen many chapters (the author will update it soon [laughing]), so I dare not make any comments. However, the characters basically match the performance in the game, and there is no deviation from the character design at present. To sum up: it is an eye-catching book in the same series, with a few minor problems that are not a problem. It is a very good book and a good start. I hope the author can stick to it. (I really don't want to see a good book suddenly eunuch anymore [crying])

It's good to read. I hope the author can write an Ark novel where the heroine is Kelsey [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] I hope the author will stop sending it

You can see its beauty from the high score of 9.3. Let me tell you my opinion. The writing is very good, the emotions are delicate, and the characters are not broken. The protagonist is really a model worker [covering his face], trying his best to save people, and recruiting talents everywhere The plot is smooth and compact, and the number of words is endless (but isn't this daily life?) Not invincible, but barely enough. It can be strengthened appropriately. Moreover, the protagonist's physique is suitable for krypton life. He won't die later, right? There are many words and very interesting to read. Summary: Warri Valley's

Among the fanfics of Arknights that I have read, this one feels pretty good. Let's talk about the shortcomings first. I gave it four stars and deducted one star in terms of the use of some basic settings and early plots. Especially in the early plots, some logic is lacking. Also, not obeying orders is a taboo on the battlefield. Especially when the protagonist just arrived and doesn't know how to use weapons or Origin Stone skills, it's a bit too reckless to go ahead with a lonesome bravery and tactical planning. Then there are the advantages. From a dialectical point of view, the aggressiveness can also be regarded as an advantage. The protagonist wanted to save Yi Nanping, and at least he did a good job. Misha survived with broken bones, Faust and Mephistopheles were captured alive, the Frost Star Patriots and the Snow Monster team also obtained the inhibitor of ore disease, and the protagonist did not hesitate to persuade the patriots to resist fate. Fighting with them also allowed Rhode Island to gain their trust and help. Overall, the plot direction is very good, and as the protagonist's strength increases and his teammates' trust in him increases, the logic of many places can withstand scrutiny. The method the protagonist uses to save these people is also unexpected, at least I have not thought of it. I don't know how the subsequent plot will develop, but I am still looking forward to it. I also hope that the difficulties in other event plots can also be saved (is the requirement a bit too high?)

It's good! It's pretty good among Ark fan fictions. Even in the category of two-dimensional, it's okay, but the quantity is too small. So beautiful The group portrait is also well written. It's also good if it's written personally Well shaped

Very good! [Like] [Love] [Like] The battle process and psychological description are very good. The only thing I'm curious about is whether the protagonist will become a villain in the later stages (a very dangerous kind)? I hope the author can say something. [Laughing]

That's the style! ! I've had enough of knives and stuff in the game! ! This type of book is so appealing to me! ! Come on, author, I will keep chasing this book. I hope you won't send it away [Like]

I like it very much, and I will always support it as long as it ends [sending my heart]

I finished reading it in one go. It's not bad. Come on, author [laughter][laughter]