Harry Potter: The Return of the Shadows

It's so beautiful. The heroine is a cold and ruthless chess player. She is extremely powerful in stirring up the storm. She is like BKing. It's so exciting to watch. The author's writing style is quite good [Like] Hurry up and give me some orthopedics. I love orthopedics. Although Theodore is also very good, I love Riddle's powerful, paranoid and morbid love even more.

First of all, the writing is passable, on the upper side of tomato. Secondly, the protagonist is well portrayed and has distinct characteristics, and the supporting characters currently have no OOC. The content is watchable, the plot development is currently not delayed or delayed, and the update progress is normal. At present, overall, 8.5 Is no problem. It is a new book with potential (I am considering buying the stock and will continue to pursue it). In the end, stability is the most important thing. It doesn't matter if you delay or take time off. Writing is always the first priority. Secondly, the plot must be stable (many HP fans are unstable in the middle and late stages and can easily make people give up). Also, when the number of words goes up, it will be seen by more people, so it will have traffic, ratings and comments (there are still few people reading it now). Anyway, keep working hard.

Fried chicken is good! ! The plot is very novel! ! It's not enough to watch. The heroine is really crazy and sassy. A lot of her psychology is a bit like Tom's. It's the first time I've experienced Tom's psychology so clearly in person! ! ! !

I like the character of the heroine, and I hope it won't be too bad in the future. Although I don't know yet whether the heroine is red or black, I also look forward to a perfect ending that suits her. Please give it your best.

It's really good to read. It's one of the few books that is not in the same camp as the Savior. It's pure Slytherin. The heroine is cold-blooded, rational and calm. I really love it.

The heroine is a truly evil person, probably the type of Jiang Yuyan. In addition to killing all the characters in the book, including the double-agent dean, the heroine has no ill intentions towards them, but her different stances will hinder her progress. The heroine established a new order and bloodbathed the magic world. That was all, and she transformed herself into a salvation organization. From a person with an undistinguished family background, an unknown person, and even being ostracized and bullied, he gradually tested his ability and skills to reach the top of the pyramid, and became a person that everyone looked up to. It was really cool. The character is not particularly OOC. If I have to say it, I think Voldemort is OOC. It's not that the soul cutting has made him stupid. I feel that he has no intention. So far, the only non-negative perspective of Voldemort is "Can the diary help me pass newts". This book directly changes the connection and destiny of the two people from the original setting. It is open, and overall it is within the acceptable range. It's quite good to read. I can write 100 articles about Lightning Protection. In short, I'm not an evil person. I can read it if I don't have a filter to save anyone in the book.

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The author writes well! But I have to say that 🦴 capsules are the best! ! Double strength ➕ blood and soul come from the same origin, life and death are one 🟰 No one can love you more than me [crying] [crying] Tom's role is a bit lacking, woo hoo

Love this article very much The character of the heroine is really a breath of fresh air in the novel. I really like this type of heroine Directly sent to five stars

The fried chicken looks great! The heroine is the kind of madman who is calm, rational and elegant! Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good! Author, I support you! Come on, come on, come on! Besides. Please give me more updates. The author is great [asking for updates] [laughing evilly] [shy]