HP: The Crown of Glory

I wrote this book as soon as I got excited. Fiya is my favorite baby. She is not a good person or a righteous person in the worldly sense. Instead, she is more in line with the position of an evil villain in the traditional novel template. But I just like her very much. I think this is the real her. Based on her nature, she will do these things. No matter what the world is like, I just want her to be good. The plot in my writing will revolve around her. All the good things in the world in the book will be dedicated to her. (PS Readers who like predators and GGAD should be careful. Although I don't want to criticize the CP, although they did not die in the main text of this book, the endings are not very good. Carrots and vegetables have their own preferences. I am even a die-hard fan of GGAD, but due to Feiya's character and plot development, their tragic ending is inevitable. If you can't accept it, you can exit. Don't scold Feiya, I will give them a happy ending in the extra chapter. After all, they are all my favorite original characters)

I really like the pull [admiration] between the heroine and Tom, but I'm just going to give you a small hint (actually I don't think it counts, it's just a small point of my own). When I was in school, I felt that between the heroine and Tom, the heroine was always giving way to Tom, giving him money to teach him principles and guide him. I just felt that the heroine was a bit weak in the early relationship between the two of them? Maybe it's because I don't like the feeling of the heroine giving benefits to Tom. I prefer the model of giving something in return. The author seems to have realized this later, and the subsequent plot has also improved in this aspect. Although on the surface it still seems to be a little in that direction, but based on the information in the introduction, it seems that the heroine did this on purpose. She wanted to use Tom to achieve her own goals, right? [Thinking] It feels a bit like dog training literature. The heroine is the one who leads the rope, and Tom is the unstable mad dog who may go crazy and bite people at any time. [Adoration] It seems that the author likes this kind of dog hunting literature? It can be seen from the side story of the parent group in the parallel world [Shy] Overall, this novel is okay, very enjoyable! The author will update soon!

It's okay so far. It's like a collision of order and chaos between the male and female protagonists, full of tension. In the early stage, Olivia invested in Riddle, but Riddle wanted to backfire after he grew up. The emotional line between the two developed rapidly here. But I personally think that the heroine is a bit weak at the moment. She is like the "financial master" behind him. The heroine provides resources for Riddle to grow rapidly, lets him try and make mistakes, and "step by step" teaches him to become a qualified leader. I can understand that it is said to be training competitors. Riddle is a bit like the "Phoenix Man" [facepalm] (Riddle still has a lot of resources in the original work, and the missing ones are made up by the female protagonist, and he also has the guidance of "experienced people" to avoid some of the setbacks in the original work.) As soon as he started to gain momentum, he wanted to conquer and control the female protagonist. This is very Voldemort, and I can understand it. At present, I am emotionally invested in the film, saying that I regard the heroine as a partner on the road to eternal life. This will be very rare if the character is not destroyed in the later stage. In short, I can understand each other from different standpoints, but I personally prefer the female protagonist. Now I personally think that the female protagonist is weak. Currently in the history of Riddle's rise, Olivia only has the advantage in terms of resources and vision. Her talent and strength can be regarded as evenly matched (shown in the article) , and due to the outbreak of World War II, resources were greatly reduced) I hope that the female protagonist will have the right to speak in the later stage, and 51% will be able to accept it. It must not be counterattacked😦I don't want the kind of "love" that is controlled by others😦What I want is at least an equal match. If you move me, your muscles and bones will be broken, and your vitality will be greatly damaged. Wait and see for a while [Salute]

In fact, the author's writing is okay, and the setting is also great. When reading the Harry Potter series of books, I have always had a different feeling about the character of Tom Riddle. But I think the author doesn't need to use excessive descriptions or excessive rhetorical techniques. It's really tiring for people to read, but actually the author's writing is fine. But it just feels like a bouquet of flowers with too many branches and leaves, making this bouquet too complicated.

I've read about a dozen chapters. The writing is pretty good. The heroine is very smart, but I haven't seen her psychological activities. Tom has written a lot. As a result, when I watched it, I felt that the heroine was like a cold and hard weapon, very powerful, but not resonant. And I always think that she is only in the first grade, 11 years old, but she behaves like an adult. It may also be caused by her lack of mental activity. I can only see her external performance. Maybe I'm not the audience for genius cute kids... I think children still need to have some childish qualities.

The writing is pretty good, but I don't think it's too OOC (maybe it's because I don't know Riddle well) The male and female protagonists get along very naturally, and they don't fall in love immediately. Even their relationship has not developed yet, and there is just a feeling of meeting a match. It's natural and I think it looks pretty good. The heroine is very powerful, and the fact that the heroine is in Ravenclaw is really novel. It stands to reason that the heroine might enter Slytherin, but the author made it very reasonable. By the way, I have to add that there is BL in it, but there is not much plot. It seems to be a close relative of the heroine or something. I don't know much about the relationship between the heroine and them, and I don't feel that the heroine's parents are a normal couple. It feels like there is no communication between the two of them.

A great and weird piece of work. Overall, the writing is mature and the plot is perfect and logical. However, there are always some rough details that should not appear in a work of this level, some common problems in fan fiction such as "nobles" and "chiefs", as well as potions and spells that have not been invented in the current timeline, exams with all students watching, Sirius' OOC and other low-level errors. I felt so disconnected while reading it. While I felt it was great, I also wondered whether the author had actually read the original work. Overall I'd give it five stars.

2026.7.7 Finished spreading flowers Ophelia Phineas Manners x Tom Riddle The mastermind behind the scenes has a sense of déjà vu. It has been a long time since I saw such a clear-cut "evil girl" literature. It is very "capitalist", realistic and skinny. The main focus is on investment in Voldemort. Some people may think that the heroine is too supportive of Voldemort, but I feel that the heroine regards Voldemort as a "pet" and an "executor" shaped by her own hands. He is usually willing to spend resources on Voldemort, and he also "pampers" Voldemort and allows him to have his own little ideas. A powerful man would occasionally look at his little puppy and think of it as a way to pass the time. But once the core is involved, Voldemort will be suppressed mercilessly. It was very refreshing. My favorite part was when Voldemort came back from the forest. After being disfigured, Ophelia did not indulge in love and immediately gave Voldemort a slap in the face, and then took measures to suppress Voldemort to death. In the end, Ophelia's capitalist power won a great victory and adopted Harry as a high-class cow horse, but the final heir was the daughter of Ophelia and Tom. Snape also became a poor cow and horse.

It's a nice book that retains Tom Riddle's nature without being particularly crazy. But there are still flaws (imperfections in my eyes) Maybe I'm not tied yet? So currently I only evaluate a potion invented by Riddle in their third grade: before the point where the wizard cannot mobilize any magic power within an hour. ⚠️Since the heroine entered school, all the treatment given by the church to Riddle is basically free, or the value exchange is not perfect. But whenever Riddle gives something to the heroine, the heroine will give him a just and reasonable exchange result. It is very uncomfortable to watch. It feels that the heroine is helping the poor. The key is to really help her. ⚠️Looking at the introduction, this book should be about stronger men and stronger women. The female protagonist is the mastermind behind the scenes, but no one is perfect. The female protagonist has the most basic family affection. She will be irrational when facing her relatives. As a result, she should have been ranked first at the end of the third grade, but lost to Riddle by two points. This is normal. After all, she cannot always be the first. But the heroine is in a weak position during this period The empire Riddle built seemed indestructible and grew stronger. Even whenever someone wants to destroy it, the heroine will join hands with him to curb this idea, or kill the chicken to scare the monkeys, but the heroine's empire appears weak. During World War II, civilization collapsed, the empire was destroyed, everything turned into a bubble, and the barbarism presided over by Riddle prevailed, and Riddle often gave birth to a feeling that the heroine is his possession: "No one can bully you without my permission." In other words, only I can touch you, and no one else can do it unless they have my permission. This kind of possessiveness may be very offensive, but when the heroine is supposed to be the superior one, it is very unpleasant. It is obviously a story about the queen and the little wolf, but the little wolf always wants to take away everything from the queen. The queen has been conniving, and the little wolf has really become the alpha wolf, with the capital to compete, and even the intention to overtake. I think the heroine introduced in the introduction is the mastermind behind it. Is there any discrepancy? The queen who is supposed to be in control has a weakness that allows the wolf to take advantage of it. ? Of course I didn't see the later part, maybe it will change later? ? If the author sees it, I hope the author can help get the subsequent plot back on track (of course, if there is nothing wrong with it, I hope the author can tell me about it so that I can continue to read it better. Thank you) The wolf should submit to the queen. He can have strength, but he cannot surpass the superior, let alone have the intention of overtaking the superior. (If the wolf has the strength to overtake the Queen, then if he doesn't think about it, it is just his temporary pity. Even if the Queen has his handle, he can always overtake as long as he wants to overtake and recharge his batteries. What I want is ⚠️absolute surrender⚠️, which has no chance, and is not the kind where I bow my head and give up my seat to you.) This may be more enjoyable and more in line with the introduction. Thank you for reading my thoughts @Potato leader

To be honest, it was a bit boring at first, maybe because it was described from Tom's perspective, and the heroine was like a cold, empty shell. But as I watched, I didn't know at what point she started to grow a soul. I began to see her ideals, her ambitions, her unyieldingness. She seemed to suddenly become a living person, with toughness, weakness, and the complicity between her and Tom. The feeling is very frustrating, especially the one in the latest chapter that said "I won't wear a collar, even if it's gold" and rejected Tom very forcefully. This is also a source of realism for me. The heroine will not always follow Tom Riddle. There is warmth and confrontation between the two people, and it is not very OOC. The author's writing style is also good (≧∇≦*). In short, this book gets better and better as I read it. The more I wrote, the more exciting it became. The author listened to his advice. He said that the introduction was not very good before, but he immediately changed it. The heroine was not angry and felt so happy. Baby Feiya continued to be ambitious, ruthless, sober and calm, and finally got everything.