Genshin Impact: The Cat-Eared Boy’s Journey Through Teyvat

Hi everyone, this is Qianying Huanmeng. I'm a hopelessly lazy person, and I also have a job, but to get full attendance bonus, I've changed to two updates a day, totaling 4000+ words. Any more than that is impossible. Although I work the night shift and am not very busy, there are still a lot of things to do in the latter half of the night, so I have no choice.

While the plot wasn't chaotic at the beginning, the author's writing had too many timelines, and each timeline was described too briefly. This lack of sufficient build-up resulted in less emotionally impactful emotional moments. Furthermore, many plot points were glossed over, causing even fast readers to become confused and unable to follow the story.

Sometimes, reading this work feels like reading someone else's chaotic diary, or a fragmented history—it's perplexing. There's no romance, and the protagonist inexplicably becomes Barbatos's partner (even though he looks so submissive). I think the author's writing needs improvement, and this story definitely needs revision.

Wow, a new book! I'm bookmarking it. Keep up the good work, author!

Keep going, we can wait five years, just don't forget to come back.

Reading this book feels like the author discovered while writing that a part of the draft was lost, and not wanting to rewrite it, simply modified the later parts of the plot and added it in.

This book's title should include "crossover anime," although I was a bit confused while reading it.

Well written! Keep it up!

I want to raise a cat as cute as the main character, so I'll still give it five stars 😅

Don't be discouraged, just keep writing and you'll feel better. I feel good