Master, Did You Give Your Disciple a Love Curse Today?

I accept any criticism, but please, dear readers, please be merciful and if you deserve the curse words, don't do it. This can be regarded as the first book I have completed in the true sense. I know there are many shortcomings, and I will make changes based on my experience in the future. Negative reviews of one star, two stars, and three stars are all acceptable, but please do not attack personally. This is the most basic politeness issue. I hope my book reviews are clean.

The first Master and Disciple book, Miao Jiang found it very novel and very curious. He first started watching the TV series "Gu" when he was very young. His first impression was that it was not bad. It was only after he grew up and learned some things that he understood. I can only say that there are many similar things like Gu, and they may not have a good reputation. I hope that more people will publicize and tell the world about the double-edged sword in the future. Things are not always bad or evil.

The whole book is full of mysterious attractions for a Han Chinese like me. There are gods, humans and beasts in ancient Miao songs, as well as evil poisons that appear in fantasy novels. The mysterious southern Xinjiang has been passed by in some novels with very little pen and ink, but here you will definitely see a different southern Xinjiang story. This book is not a group favorite or a strong woman. The whole text is very Buddhist. The heroine at the beginning is at the top of the world. She doesn't have to worry about being abused. She lives in seclusion and waits for the arrival of the destined person. This book is good because the author writes well and is thoughtful. However, I still have to complain a little. There are too many wrong words and typos. Some words become funny when used incorrectly, creating a certain comedy effect 😂 It affects reading a little~ Each character setting is great, distinct and three-dimensional, the action, language, environment and plot direction are all just right, without any surprises. In fact, there is a part in the middle that smells like male porn. I also thought about whether I should abandon the article, but after thinking about it, I didn't step on my line for the time being. I like the style of the author so much that I couldn't bear to abandon it. So I insisted on reading. Then I saw that the author did not follow the male style of writing. I am glad that I did not abandon the article. (￣￣) Hehehe~ The article is not long, but the essence is condensed~ The whole text is not watery, and it is clearly written with care. So~ Friends who are passing by, don't miss it~🎈 Finally, I would like to thank the author for his hard work in writing the article~ 🌸🌸 Show flowers, spread flowers~ 🌸🌸 🍃🍂🌾🍃🍂🌾🍃🍂

I love this book so much. Unlike other books that are cliche, this book is novel and interesting. The author needs to work hard and update!

Although I am a science major, I like history, and I think some of the content you wrote is similar to some histories I have read, and some legends are also similar. You really put your heart into it. So come on (´-ω-`)

The writing style is very good. This novel is very good. This novel is very fresh. It is different from other novels. I am tired of reading other novels with old sayings. I have never read this novel before, it's quite a novelty! Continue to work hard to write this novel, Dada (✺^▽^)✺. I quite like the freshness of this novel.

Author, I think you can make your writing a little easier to understand. I don't mean that your writing is bad, but people nowadays may prefer concise and clear language. Your selection of materials is very good and the language is very profound. But maybe everyone likes simple language. I think you may change the way of describing the language a little (just a personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it)

Ganluo&&Xuanyuan Chiling ✧(≖ ◡ ≖✿) It feels pretty good (ω< )★Keep up the good work, author! ! ! ! ! ! ☆ * . ☆ . ∧＿∧∩* ☆ * ☆ (∀)/ . . ⊂ ノ* ☆ ☆ * (つ ノ .☆ (ノ

It can be seen that the author really wrote it with great care. As a debut novel, this book is really good. However, this book is not in the same style as Shuangwen. It feels like a very light and gentle feeling, and a lovely and pleasant life. I hope that the author will not change his original intention of writing and always stick to his own style. I cried a little after reading Chapter 0. I remembered that when I was in junior high school, I had conceived a story that I really wanted to write, but I didn't have that kind of writing style, so a lot of the inspiration was written down on paper and lost over time. . It's very sad, Qingmei, you have to persevere. Reading your words is like seeing the me who I once was if I persevered in writing.

The book is very interesting. It is probably different from the kind of counter-attack and slap-in-the-face novels that everyone likes to read nowadays, so few people read it. However, the author's writing style is good and the content of the article is also very good. It is a book worth reading. After all, love is the best when it is plain and plain. All the reluctance is left to the elders. Son, the young emperor thought that the master did not want him anymore, but it turned out that the master exchanged his life for another chance, so the two of them also loved each other in the previous life, but the apprentice became the emperor, and the master could no longer appear in the apprentice's world due to the rules of heaven and earth.