What?! Master, Why Didn't You Say So Earlier!

This is my first book. I know there are many things in front of it that have not been written yet. I hope you can give me a little more time and I will try my best to revise it. I am not a person who writes delicately. I just enjoy writing because my hands are itchy. Since some friends read it, I will definitely continue writing. In fact, I originally wanted to create a male protagonist who struggled internally, but I couldn't write it 🤦, so I started to really change it. Everyone has also read the introduction. I feel that ordinary life is the true portrayal of a relationship that grows step by step. Only small surprises and memorable things in life can create a relationship. Anyway, I am very satisfied with the shaping of the heroine. It just needs to be done step by step. Just like what I wrote in the book, nothing is achieved overnight. [Holds face] As for all kinds of mysteries and difficulties, they are all for the sake of feelings. I don't like to read those kinds of cool articles, so I can't write those kind of cool articles. As for giving out sweets, I'm sure you'll know how to do it. I hope everyone can bear with me and give me more suggestions. [Covering face] Stand at attention when you're spanked. If you write poorly, you have to correct it.

It's still very unpleasant to watch. I killed myself and said curses. But now I'm relieved.

It's still very good, and the author is very persuasive. I've actually followed dozens of chapters. Now it's more than 60 chapters. It can be seen that the author has buried some foreshadowings, including the dark energy of Li Ji's previous life, the secrets of Li Ziyu's two swords, and Immortal Wuji who seems to know a lot of truth. I vaguely feel that someone is behind the plot. At present, it mainly revolves around the master's pursuit of his husband. The master realizes that he should seize the moment and make up for the regrets of his previous life (in his previous life, he only focused on Li Ji's future problems, worked behind closed doors, paid too little attention to his disciples, and was embarrassed to speak out what he buried in his heart. The misunderstanding with Li Ji deepened and became a stranger). Li Ji was confused by the master's big change and the discrepancy between the secret realm and the memory of the previous life (actually this was the master's original attitude, but he just kept it in his heart) and realized the correct direction of part of the plot. There is a feeling that the chess game is gradually becoming clearer. The sugar is gone, so I won't eat the knife.

The daily writing is very good, and I like the writing style very much. The one flaw is that the male protagonist's emotional line in the early stage is a bit strange and not handled well. After seeing the 100,000 words, it gradually gets better. I hope the author can write the daily part well later, and let the male and female protagonists open their hearts through some short stories and copies.

It feels like the male protagonist is like a little girl

Very supportive, although I don't know if it's good or not, listen!

The writing is very good, not as cookie-cutter as other works in Tomato, but I guess some children who like to read mindless harem stories won't be able to stand it 🙂

The writing is really good, the main plot is laid out step by step, and it is quite in-depth. It is considered a masterpiece. I hope the author can stick to it. It is also a good article to practice with.

Don't do anything stupid?

It's very beautiful, and the author has improved it a lot.