Film and TV: Turning Fiction Into Reality, Making Up a Chat Group From the Start

You're always showing off, but you're not advancing the plot at all. Go improve your own abilities! The world has changed. You're useless, just writing about women. Can't you live without women? Do you think this site is still from decades ago? You think writing a novel about women will make you famous? Times have changed, adults. Now people are looking for plot, not women.

It's poorly written, with terrible prose and too many typos. There are no clear boundaries between different parts of the story, and the plot keeps changing as it goes on.

What a waste of such a great idea!

The mastermind behind it all, since no one is dying. The entire mountain crashed down, and the protagonist somehow managed to control it so it didn't hurt anyone—that's so surreal. I don't even want to read anymore after seeing this.

Well, to be honest, the main storyline hasn't started yet. It's either chasing girls or on my way to chase girls, or I'm being chased by girls. None of the themes or anything like that have been unlocked.

Hurry up, I want to see how Qi Tongwei handles the exposure of his superpowers! Stop dawdling, or your book will ever get better!

There are too many stories about women. It's not that I can't have a harem, it's that I want to see grand scenes, not this piecemeal approach of talking about plans and then suddenly switching back to the women. I wouldn't mind if you wrote a grand scene and then switched back to the women, but you write a grand scene and I'm finally getting to the main course, and then you jump to the women's…

They opened dozens of parlors, and all they saw were women; it was as if they hadn't seen a woman in ages.

Why are there so many typos when I'm just starting to write?

The author's plot is pretty good, just please don't write too much content in a half-and-half way. Also, I hope there will be fewer typos. And when is Song Qian going to get pregnant? Get her pregnant soon!