My Own Swordsman: From the Start, I Have Hu Yifei Wrapped Around My Finger

The writing is getting worse and worse. There are too many scenes involving the female lead and other men, and even the interactions between the female lead and her girlfriend are not well done.

Honestly, the protagonist poking the guy's ear with the key was a bit much. Breaking legs or arms is fine, but things like ears and eyes are best left unwritten.

Front row, front row! When you're filming the multiple births, don't forget this show!

Author, don't just focus on the female leads! What about the supporting actresses? Those minor female supporting characters are quite pretty too.

You're really going downhill. You might as well have written a better book. The protagonist is like a jerk, the police are dead, he beats people to a pulp over the slightest argument, and nobody cares. You've completely lost your mind writing a wish-fulfillment novel.

The male protagonist just wanted to give those girls a home.

Damn, fanfiction can be this bad, getting worse and worse. It's unbelievable. If you're just writing filler without a plot, that's one thing, but how much plot and characters have you even written? It's really going downhill.

That's right, we really need to go back to *Love Apartment*. I only got to chapter 300 of the high school version before I gave up. I've reread both *Love Apartment* books multiple times, and you're only just starting a new one? Hurry up and update, or I'll get some razor blades!

I've ordered the whole thing. This one feels more natural than the one set in the school, maybe because the Love Apartment opening makes it more relatable. It's not chaotic. My only request is that they don't send the Heavenly Child Granny flowers anymore. I don't want them, but please don't send them either. I quite like that kind of thing; it feels like a Love Apartment version of Xia Mi.

The protagonist's personality at the beginning of this book feels a bit like the Dragon King Wen from the old days—a bit too aggressive and not as likable as the protagonists in the previous books. Hopefully, he won't become too aggressive later on, considering it's an urban novel.