The Eerie Origami Man: A Big Shot in the Underworld

Indeed, the Lazy God is invincible in a sense.

Many words are redundant. For example, you know that the protagonist is not strong enough to be a powerful paper man, but you don't need to repeat it all the time. Does it seem to make the readers fools? Do I have to watch you repeat it for a long time? You have written a long paragraph about something that can be covered in one sentence. Can you please stop fussing about it? You can just make a paper figure in two chapters, but you have to postpone it to five chapters.

Back then, no one was as hot as you when I watched Zhetian. You are suffering from the second disease of the kitchen. You have a three-part disease.

I feel so embarrassed when I look at it, I force the big tail wolf

Finally there was an evil god, Dark Shuangwen, it was ruined just like that

Paperman uses a gun, Weird uses a modern army. So special,

Why don't you talk to me on the same level? Comment

I was speechless, the name of the protagonist was repeated dozens of times. It's endless and makes everyone upset when they hear it.

The man who came back to earth from hell As long as you keep writing, you will definitely become popular if you don't use the knife, and even if you use the knife, you can also use resurrection to achieve a perfect ending. Of course, I still want to see all kinds of unpopular modules, such as Pokémon and Kamen Rider. These modules are basically not written in novels.

The writing is pretty good, but the character of the others is too bad.