I, Shi Jian, the Thunder Mage: From the Start, I Unleash Fury in Western Hunan

Isn't this just copying the original anime? By the way, I would like to add some insights of my own. Why do you have the nerve to say that it is your own original work?

Don't hide your strength. What kind of strength can the protagonist hide in front of the heroine? He doesn't openly talk about Hanako during the expedition. Furthermore, he has already collected Hanako. If he doesn't take it back to his family and raise it, it is his own woman. Besides, what if Hanako was killed by a passing exorcist?

Azathoth is conscious? Do you know what the god of blindness and stupidity is?

Now we start to suppress the protagonist's realm. Normally, the choice after each simulation is to improve the realm of memory and strength. Now there is no realm improvement, and it starts with artistic conception and the like. Others are at the sixth or seventh level of the temple. The last choice of the protagonist's simulator is temple baptism. Then your simulator is not as good as a temple.

**, There is no sense of immersion at all, and the writing style is also poor, just like a patchwork of things.

Can't you break through the realm by cultivating yourself? So many good things are of no use at all? Can't the merit be reduced by using it?

I thought it was King Kong's Skull Island, but I was disappointed.

I just like Slam Dunk fandom, I love Lingnan! Author, please update!

Shuangcheng Heihuawen I hope readers will comment.

Author, I gave you a few small flowers, a reward of 200 yuan, and a random few-month ticket. Well, I have always felt that there is a song I want to see you. It is very suitable for the story of the hedgehog girl. I want you to add it to your story. If it is really not suitable, forget it.