Arknights, Feel! My Pain!

There are many typos, suggesting the author is a literary youth. The protagonist is corrupted by fate (the author), and the author is suspected to be a literary youth.

Why not describe the big, fat fish's appearance more? From your descriptions, before Chapter 3 I thought it was a standard male appearance. If you're going to go for a cross-dressing route, then go for it! The reason Deepseek's anthropomorphic character is so popular is because she's cute, right? The big one is elegant, the small one is adorable. Looking at your protagonist, I feel like it's a man throwing a tantrum rather than a cute whale girl. The point isn't the protagonist's inherent attributes, but rather how others react to him.

Author, generally speaking, Deepsea Hunters aren't recognized by people on land. Their affairs are classified. Even if they were, the distinguishing feature of a Deepsea Hunter is their silver hair #(you know what I mean).

I haven't read the rest yet, so why would the omnic have blood for people to test for Originium crystals? Even if they did, shouldn't it be coolant?

The subject matter is indeed good, but... It seems that the only thing worth praising is the subject matter. You could say that the moment the protagonist opens his mouth, it makes you lose the desire to continue watching, which is a real shame.

All I can say is that if you write it like this, you can simply delete the entire Lungmen section without any impact.

How could something like this make the list? It's utterly awful, Shuke.

Is the protagonist cursed with some kind of bad luck? Both of his closest children are dead. I guessed Eva would die the first time she appeared, and she really did! I'm at my wit's end. Also, the opening plot of "Dragon Gate" was pretty nonsensical; it felt like I hadn't watched it at all. #(Dizzy)

The timing of the plot is off; I suspect the author just got carried away playing with manta rays and wrote it like that. #(Laughing and crying) The Deep Sea Hunter's classified information and the ability to communicate with Agor are simply impossible.

How can this even make the list? Putting everything else aside, I didn't see anything mentioned in the Lungmen section's description; it jumped straight to the Reunion Movement. The Reunion Movement section is nonsensical. If the power system is already off the charts and you still can't save the tragedy, I don't know what you're doing in the Reunion Movement. You couldn't succeed in the original story, but you did now. I don't know what the protagonist's purpose is. Judging from the description, you're trying to write a comedic slice-of-life story. Lungmen is such a great place—the superiors are fiercely competitive, and there's the Penguin Turbulence nearby. Even a casual piece like that would be better than this pretentious, artsy plot. The comments from other authors are all too similar. They're just trying to write something popular after watching the Ursus story but can't seem to get it right. They're suffering from pretentious writing but won't admit it.