Crossover: After I Transformed, Their Eyes Looked Different

I've imagined a character who, in a way, is the world's "immune system." They either get killed, making their "body" weaker, or they become "immune," absorbing new power systems to grow stronger. The character's encounters with monsters also represent the world's pursuit of evolution.

It was alright; at least I read all the available chapters in one go.

Oh, it was a transformation! I thought it was a transformation.

The battle content seems a bit too high. The synopsis doesn't suggest it's purely about combat; so far it's just about someone fighting monsters and saving the day. That's how this kind of story is supposed to be written, that's true, but you can't rely solely on that. Without other elements to add variety, it gets boring quickly.

The plots are all too similar: monster spawns, equipment drops, rescuing girls, fighting, eating, bumping into girls, chatting. You should at least give it some flair! You should at least develop a balance between action and romance. The romance storyline just got the old band introduced, and then Shocker's name only appears in the action storyline.

The description mentions a band; it can't be Toyokawa Shoko's group, right? I feel like aside from boat enthusiasts and body fetishists, not many people would like them.

So far, it's written alright, but it's a bit too formulaic, like a monster-slaying machine. We can wait and see; I'm looking forward to seeing more from Shinjo Akane.

I noticed that most Rider equipment is provided by the system, but some Riders have special circumstances where they can use it without it. For example, Kabuto can borrow it from the future. Kuuga and Agito can unlock their final forms simply by meeting certain mental and physical requirements. Den-O's train should also be usable by those in the past, even if the future version unlocks it.

Judging from this transformation, the protagonist is probably going to help his teammates, so there shouldn't be any plot points like the belt being stolen. I've read a book where the belt was stolen and the protagonist was attacked and taunted, which was disgusting. But in this book, the system can just take it back directly. In my previous book, they even forgot the belt-taking setting to include that plot point.

I think you could consider more diverse ways for the main characters and heroines to interact, and appropriately reduce the repetitive "check-in" encounters with them. Currently, these routines involve pointless conversations followed by separation, which really feel like checking off a list. I was interested in the first conversation after rescuing someone and then coincidentally meeting them, but the subsequent repeated "check-in" encounters have become really uninteresting (at least with my numerous conversations with Kawasaki Saki, I basically skip them at a glance). This repetitive and meaningless interaction is severely eroding my personal interest in the book.