I Got Half in the Divorce in Brain Leaf City

Why are you all criticizing Carmen? Did she start a war, kill an elderly mother, drive people insane, cause bloodshed in the city, instill despair, disrupt the functioning of society, break up families, cause deaths, bring companies to the brink of bankruptcy, or make people lose themselves?

Duma: If it were a 300 million twist, would you win? Duma: He'll die (Agni wry smile. Jpg)

My assessment is that it shouldn't be like the later stages of the previous book, where everyone knew the protagonist was amazing, and all the major events were caused by the protagonist being hampered by a bunch of restrictions. The reason the beginning of the previous book was so captivating was precisely because it disregarded the limitations of the crappy city and allowed the protagonist to freely express their will. I hope it doesn't repeat the same mistakes.

Seriously, what is this? The first few chapters are full of weird character names and nonsensical settings. It's giving me a headache. And can the writing style be improved? It feels like reading a diary. #(Dizzy)

When will you confess your feelings to the Angry Servant, the Queen of Hatred, the Greedy King, the Knight of Despair, Angela, the Last Bird, White Night, Lock Mom, Red Sister, and Ain?

This time, the name "Night-Shining Red Light" isn't as nice as "Lead Gray Melody."

These first eight chapters are not only nonsensical but also incredibly boring. To put it nicely, they're well-paced; to put it bluntly, it's just jumping from one topic to another without finishing the previous one. Just when the emotional build-up is about to begin, it jumps to the next place again. What kind of cyberpunk story is this? #(Blue and sad)

It's really hard to look at. Urban fiction is so hard to get into! Do I have to finish the entire trilogy before I'm even considered reading it? For those of us who haven't played the games, we just can't understand what it's about. Who is this person? Who is that person? No, that's not how fanfiction works. When you write fanfiction, you should start with the simplest, most easily understood plot points. Then you can gradually develop the world-building. No one starts by assuming they already know everything! It's really too difficult for someone who doesn't know anything about it to get into the series; the audience is limited to a small group of people (those who know the names and the plot).

It feels more sentimental than the previous one? For someone who hasn't read the game, it's actually easier to imagine. I didn't know Sayo was a character from the original work at first, but I found out later. Kogane's character design is really distinctive. I hope you can work harder on this one; the previous bus arc really lacked tension.

Teacher Lead Gray, please let us fall in love with nails and hammers one more time. #(Cute)