Kantai Collection Crossover: My Talent Surpasses Yours

Black Bullet, this world owes us heavenly fire and floods. Please go and wipe out those bastards!

The author should play to their strengths and avoid their weaknesses. Whether it's the power system design, the fight scene descriptions, or the talent design, they're all too difficult to describe. Just be vague; don't be inflexible, or the reading experience will be terrible.

Something seems off. Why didn't the main character's ship girls develop corresponding time-travel and return devices? The reason given to introduce the protagonist's world travel is too far-fetched. It would be better to use the reasoning to quickly become stronger and defeat unknown higher-dimensional enemies than to have the protagonist constantly traveling between worlds.

As for me, since I already have ship girls, I feel like there's something off about this "divinely bestowed attribute." I need my ship girls to figure it out for me; I won't dare use it until I understand it. #(Funny)

Let's hurry up and find our ship girl wives. It's really tough keeping them stranded in other worlds. The "find them" strategy isn't very popular anymore, and it's prone to backfiring. Bringing them back first, and then sending them to other worlds later isn't out of the question.

Well, having read up to chapter 21 so far, the overall plot seems fine, but there are quite a few minor issues. These accumulate and significantly impact the overall reading experience, hence my complaint. First of all, let me clarify that the author has done a great job of avoiding sensitive topics; you can tell that they have made a conscious effort to do so, so don't worry about that. Then, I'd like to mention two main issues I've noticed up to chapter 21. One point is that the author repeatedly depicts other characters finding the ship girls around the protagonist attractive and developing feelings for them. First, there's a description of the JoJo's Bizarre Adventure protagonist group having some frivolous thoughts after seeing the ship girls, and then the protagonist expressing regret after they're described as his wives. Later, Kira Yoshikage takes a liking to the ship girls around the protagonist and wants their hands to be his new girlfriend. To be honest, this writing style reminds me of online novels from over a decade ago—a very old-fashioned style of writing and plot devices that are rarely seen nowadays. Especially given that this book's initial tone is that of an invincible harem wish-fulfillment story, this kind of writing only makes readers feel uncomfortable, and nowadays it can be considered a minor flaw. Secondly, the battle with Yoshikage Kira was rather drawn-out and tedious. It lacked both excitement and any sense of strategic maneuvering or clever design. It felt like he was simply an opponent easily defeated by a concentrated attack from the ship girls, yet the three main characters held back, resulting in a prolonged fight that nearly dragged in innocent bystanders. The fight itself was unsightly and somewhat idiotic. Of course, it's clear the author intended to depict the protagonist's Stand awakening or something similar. However, making the ship girls hold back for this purpose just felt like excessive dragging. Furthermore, given the harem setting, this isn't something readers would particularly care about. It's a bit of a case of putting the cart before the horse and missing the point.

Love Live!, Lycoris, Valkyrie Drive, Queen's Blade, Bikini Warrior, Wolfenstein, Valkyria Chronicles, Witch's Revenge Night, Dead Rising, Resident Evil (game version).

The tags don't seem to indicate many female leads, so it's not a story without a female lead, is it? There are clearly ship girls involved.

Another ship girl reunion? A recurring theme? This is such an old story, nothing new.

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