Qingmeixiandao

The author just found out that many chapters have been blocked, and he felt a little depressed for a moment. To be honest, the author has always felt that his three views are very upright. There are also books that were not even signed before, but were sealed immediately!

The atmosphere of this book is completely different from the intrigues, intrigues, and hostility in the popular fairy novels. On the contrary, it is a kind of light and tranquility that is refreshing, with some characteristics of our traditional culture. And some of the darkness in this overall atmosphere is just right, adding some realism to the book. This book gives people the feeling of real immortality. However, the world system of this book is a bit confusing, the laws of the dynasty, the various schools of thought, etc. Are not fully explained, the plot is also a bit too simple, and the general structure is not enough. I hope the author will continue to work hard and come on.

As a bookworm for many years, I am now more and more fond of books and have new ideas. What is more annoying is the kind that starts with the strongest martial arts in ancient times, the strongest immortal weapon in the three realms, the strongest physique in all eternity, etc. This kind of is simply boring. It is the strongest at the beginning, and the protagonist has too little room for his own creation. It's the best thing to do throughout the whole process. Apart from having a good time, there's nothing that can make readers feel happy from the bottom of their hearts. To be honest, this book has a lot of shortcomings. The characterization of the characters and the description of the cultivation environment are too narrow. The protagonist feels like a three-point-one-one-off-the-line college entrance examination. Whether in the world or in heaven, the scene is too monotonous; secondly, the characteristics of the protagonist's skills are not obvious, and his main The Tao has not specifically said whether it is water and wood, life and death, or a combination of the three. But for this, there is only a dead wood fairy light, a slightly ordinary fairy method, the most powerful starlight divine water, three thousand striking water, Tianhe water, and the most important thing is the stars. The Dao is not the Dao of water, and it is not the major Dao. However, throughout the book, the magical powers of the minor Dao are always stronger than those of the major. The minor magical powers have never been particularly strong. I don't understand how the protagonist can defeat others without using the Starlight Divine Water during the competition; There are divisions of cultivation realms. I feel that every time the protagonist is promoted, there is nothing special about each realm. It has always been that I am a tree and I can just keep growing. The visualization picture has always been a tree, a few stars, and a body of water, so there is no big change. Also, the description of the disciples is too simple. I don't even know why his disciple Wuyou has the same three disasters as the protagonist. I don't know what characteristics he has besides his small magical powers. His natal weapon doesn't have a big role. It's not obvious what his path is. Since I want to write about disciples It is necessary to spend some pen and ink to carefully describe the two important disciples; the protagonist has no adventure of his own except going to the battlefield. Every time he creates a skill, he only has one or two jade slips for reference. How can he have the background to create a skill? The logic does not make sense, even if he is talented, it does not make sense. In the end, although this book has many shortcomings, I still finished reading it, because recently I like the kind of immortality cultivation that involves a mountain, a person, and a deck chair. This concept of immortality is not bad, and the plug-in of this book is the innate true spirit. It may be because I have read more ancient novels. The identity of the protagonist is innate and he is relatively top-notch, so this cheat is quite normal, because I said before that I don't like the type where the beginning is the strongest, but there are still many people writing this kind of cool articles. I look forward to the author's subsequent changes and progress. Overall, the writing is not outstanding but there are no major problems. This is just my true opinion. Please forgive me for any inappropriate words!

The protagonist is a water god in the prehistoric world. With his magical powers and prehistoric skills, he is currently invincible in this world. The emotional scene is a very positive start. Unlike many books, the protagonist is not about life or death. In order to match the protagonist's word count, I feel that the author should add many mythical stories, plots, factors like Chen Dong did in the novel of Xianxia. The feeling is grand and weird, so that I will have the aftertaste of reading it again. After reading the current book, I feel that it is not suitable for old bookworms, it is very comfortable and similar to those born in the 1980s. . . That similar feeling is food. Come on author, I hope to become a god in the future

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The officialdom is too serious, too worldly, and there are many emotions and even distracting thoughts, which is not in line with the purity and inaction of the classical immortals.

Regarding the age of the eighth princess, not long after the old emperor died at the age of 198, how did the protagonist judge that the eighth princess was about 200 years old? I was confused when I saw it. It was the first time I saw the judgment of how many years older a daughter is than her father under normal circumstances.

An ordinary person's life is written about cultivating immortals. After hundreds of chapters, he is still a younger brother. He can't even beat an outside disciple of a small sect. The whole book talks directly about life and not about cultivation. It is a complete prose. It is so rubbish that it is used as a cool document. It is a waste of everyone's time.

I wish you all a happy new year, good health and immortality!

Author, do you still want to write "Qingmei Xiandao 2"? I first hope you can try writing