I Am Immortal

The further you go, the more rubbish you get. Although you have checked a lot of information and every article is well-founded, it is yours. How should I put it, it feels like the fusion of force and force is not perfect enough. Looking back, it even has the spiritual flavor of Lord of Mysteries. You can reverse the word and change it to another word, but the core is still the same, which makes people look very awkward. Of course, I'm not saying you plagiarized or anything like that. I don't even know which one of you published it first, but I feel that it does have this flavor that makes me feel very awkward. Although this book does have solid information, I have to give it up now. And judging from the title of this book, you are on the path to immortality, you are a cultivator, and your weapons are for killing Buddhas and emperors. Do you think this name is appropriate? Author, I really feel that you are not suitable for this subject matter, really. In addition, when you write about the Xuanjia Army and Jinzhou, it feels like you are trying to write something tragic and tragic. Just go back and forth about that thing once or twice. You may still feel that way afterward, and you will feel tired or even disgusted. It feels like you are forcing yourself to write about the tragedy. Finally, I would like to give the author a suggestion. If you really want to write about cultivating immortality, I think you can write something bland and bland. Don't write about fighting. Don't insist on writing it. Although it is very dramatic, I really feel that your writing is inappropriate. The writing of the fighting scene cannot be said to be average, it can only be said to be poor. However, the feeling of cultivating immortality in front of you is really good. I think you can try this.

The protagonist went to the Dragon Clan to borrow the seal and then turned around and gave it to the Monster Clan. The Dragon Saint went to give a lot of reasons. Later, when he met Canglong who borrowed his seal, he didn't even say a word. He even boasted that he didn't deceive himself. You swore that you were borrowing it with your own efforts. You were so obviously deceiving yourself and others.

Like He Lan Ke Qi Yuan, I don't know if it is written by the same author. The understanding of Taoism is profound, connotative, and broad in knowledge. It is very appetizing.

Damn, I always thought I was watching it because there was no heroine. It was also said elsewhere that there was no heroine. But it turned out that there was a couple near the end. I was speechless!

What kind of protagonist with great suffering and deep hatred, super talent, countless opportunities, upgraded revenge, pretense and slap in the face, and bad tricks. The word longevity is mentioned at the beginning and completely lost in the middle. I really want to give it one star. But the author's character portrayal is pretty good, but the plot is really hard to describe in one sentence, and it gets even worse towards the end. Two stars. If you're bored and pass the time, you can look at the front. It's a different thing.

I have been reading this book for almost 15 days. I am writing this book review simply because I was bored with the recent chapters. Lao Yan's books always have delicate brushwork, three-dimensional and full characters, and high-level ideas. There is no doubt that this book has an indescribable fairy spirit from the first volume to the beginning of the second volume. It is well written and can be regarded as the best among Xianxia in the same period. The potential to become a god is not small. Unfortunately, with the recent updates, even I, as a reader who has followed the story from behind the scenes to now, have begun to be unable to bear it. I can't say anything, but I feel a huge sense of gap. And I feel like I have been forcibly subdued by the author. Bu Chai's recently updated evaluation: 5 stars, a classical fairy who can definitely become a god. Recent update: 4 stars, still need to wait and see, otherwise if Lao Yan really gets excited about writing, the entire outline will collapse.

The early stage is quite attractive, but later it is about borrowing from various classics and chewing on the words. If others want to read ancient classics, why should they come to you? Cultivation is also written in a mysterious and mysterious way.

The further I read, the more I felt uncomfortable, making me want to spit out my blood, but the first part was really good and I couldn't bear to give up. Hey, I can only come here to vent.

The beginning of the writing is very good. Finally, there is a book that can check the yin and yang, know life, know the dependence of two days, the cultivation is the integration of the cultivator and the heaven and the earth, the cultivation of the law can have both life and life, instead of being aggressive and murderous. There are many books about cultivating immortals. They all say that cultivating immortals is against the will of heaven, that my destiny is determined by me and not by heaven. Either you kill me or I will destroy you all day long. The dogs have eaten me while cultivating my mind and nature. They make me feel numb. They spread wrong ideas and practice wrong theories. As long as you check the information carefully and go to Taoist lectures, there will be no such outrageous words. I like the author very much and hope to continue writing.

Congratulations to God Xuantian, Qingwei Tianzun, and the Central Zhenwu Dangmo Great Emperor!