Myth: Dragon King

Chapter 5: Killing a crocodile, saying that eating crocodiles is cannibalism, refining flesh and blood is a demonic way, and will be killed by humans. Based on this logic, if your book becomes popular, I will delete all reading software.

I found that as soon as I went to Sanjiang, there was a sudden wave of squirting. Come on, I will build a squirting floor specifically for you. You can squirt as much as you want here. I will treat you well😁.

It's too verbose, writing about upgrading, how to cultivate, how to practice, how Qi works, how the protagonist changes, and a lot of feelings. Things that can be explained in one or two chapters have to be written in ten or twenty chapters. For example, if you write about a protagonist eating, how to cook, what ingredients to use, how much oil, how much salt, how good the color and aroma are, and then how the protagonist moves the stool, what his mood is like, what the weather is like, and then there is a lot of verbosity, all of which are parallel imports.

Check what you are doing when writing. Don't act like a fool.

Why don't you become a vegetarian? It's just pretentious. You can also understand Dongfu people's writing. Why sb?

It's a bad batch. I've never read a novel worse than this. The key point is that it's still a 9.

If you read it without thinking, just pretend I didn't say it. If you read it with a little thought, the first three chapters will blow you away. If you don't believe me, go in and read the chapter reviews.

You are already a creature that wants to transform into a dragon. You only have the fifth level of Qi training. Big brother, the fifth level of Qi training is the lowest level. A mortal can only reach this level in three to five months. *** It has been hundreds of years since you have only reached this level. I am speechless. If you give me a primordial spirit or a transformed spirit, I think it's okay, but if you give me a qi training, don't you think it's a bit low-level? Also, this damn rating is too damn weird. A novel like this is so rubbish and it can still reach eight points.

Hurry up and give the protagonist a title, don't call him Jade Dragon Dragon Lord, it's so out of character! This Dragon Lord, Dragon Lord, is called a bitch! For example, Nezha, the great god of the Three Altars of Haihui, and Yang Jian's Qingyuan Miaodao True Lord, sound like the real god of heaven with a strong personality and honorable title. You, the Jade Dragon Lord, are really out of the ordinary! It didn't matter that you were weak before, but now that your status is so high, this name is too cheap!

Why write a Chinese Ghost Story? It's superfluous and confusing. I hate the kind of stuff that's brought into other novels.