We Were in Hogwarts, and We Were Blocked by a Werewolf at the Beginning

Nowadays, many Harry Potter fans are frantically whitewashing James, twisting the cause and effect, saying that it was because Snape was a Death Eater that the dark wizard was targeted by James, and they did not mention bullying at all, only using the word bullying. But in fact, judging from the original work, James is just a pure scumbag, liar and murderer, and is completely unworthy of Lily.

The front was pretty good, but it started to fall apart from the first time through... Originally, it was too long to describe the system and magic concepts. After all, the plot unfolds slowly and is quite interesting. As a result, I started to travel through time to retrieve components. Traveling through the world is not only an unpopular subject, but also garbage politically correct. At the beginning of the time travel, the settings are thrown around wildly, and the pure background of the story is only one chapter. Then several girls (who I personally feel are a bit slutty) described back and forth... The result of the community component is similar to that of the chat group. They basically talk about women, naked women, and women speak... The plot is basically a pig's foot mechanical deity, and then a bunch of girls describe all kinds of spicy things and lick the male protagonist... After the time travel, I skipped and read it, and it felt like the author was a different person...

Come, the author, read with me I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I don't watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I won't play games, Not hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherish time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, and being refined into steel, worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am the keyboard in the dark and the guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding every day and every night.

This introduction makes people have no desire to read further. Slytherin puts profit first, not elegance. Ravenclaw pursues wisdom and knowledge, and grades are not the criterion that defines intellectual curiosity. As for Hufflepuffs, your so-called gossiping comes from watching the episode of Chamber of Secrets. After Harry exposed his Parseltongue, several Hufflepuffs gossiped about him, but don't you know that after the truth was revealed, those Hufflepuffs found Harry and sincerely apologized to him? Not to mention Gryffindor, courage and fearlessness will indeed bring trouble, but they are not afraid of challenges.

Damn, I thought I could read Harry Potter later, but it turned out that I was overthinking it. Qiao Feng used Avada Kedavra, right? That's not how the Demonic Transformation of Tianlong was changed. Your book is hopeless, it's just a piece of shit.

There are too many explanations about the system and other secondary devices. Most of the space is devoted to the protagonist's self-pleasure. The plot doesn't advance at all, and pits are dug in the early stages. Most of the plot is also written very vaguely. I have absolutely no intention of continuing to read.

The author writes very well, keep up the good work! ! ! ! !

The writing is very messy, and there are too many games. Not everyone has played the Hogwarts game. Secondly, please write the characters according to the original book, including their appearance. If you write according to the game, it is poisonous. The other worlds chosen are also speechless =_=, and the character of the protagonist is inexplicable, a little childish and brainless. Anyway, he is not a likable protagonist.

Forget it, the protagonist's broken system is a bit messy, but does it require 400 chapters to clear Harry Potter with such a powerful cheat? 100 Chapters are considered too long. Wouldn't it be better for you to finish writing about other worlds early?

There was still a sense of expectation in the early stage, but in the later period after the diary was written, the feeling was gone and I was just confused.