Boy Mom in the Pokémon World

There are too many restrictions, and the mystery theme is only found in the early chapters, but is completely gone in the later chapters.

If you want to use other skills, you have to change them, and it takes several hours.

The time-travelers arranged by you, the author, are all related households, so you wrote it to a person in the dormitory. The previous One Piece book had lower bunk beds, and this one has upper bunk beds.

I got to the end and took a look at it... I'm not going to give any ratings, it's not easy, but to be honest, I had to say a few words about how poisonous I was after reading so many chapters, otherwise it would really hurt my psychology. Mystery + Pokémon, the setting is novel and imaginative, but it's okay if Mystery and Mystery are not clearly written. Except for Picoxi and Gengar, Pokémon has no character memory points at all, and there is no description that is particularly flat. It is equivalent to writing a "setting" when you first conquer it, then ignoring it, and then reasoning. I didn't explain the reasoning clearly. I ate the second creation of Junsha's power that I added. The entire Kogoro bombing incident seemed to me like pure water and was dead. That's all. You even sewed a Pokémon foot basket. I don't even understand the meaning of your foot basket. To show that the protagonist is very open-minded and cares about Pokémon's hobbies? Then you can just write it as a background board? This football basketball rule was created by you. Now that we are talking about secondary creations, oh, your secondary creations are enough to write a single book on beast control. What else are you writing about Pokémon? You have already gone off topic! ? Others add secondary creation settings just to make it easier for them to write plots. But you have almost forgotten what you wrote when you created second creations. Not only does the wide coverage of secondary creations offend a large number of readers with different points of interest, but it is also inconvenient for you to write what you want to do? When others go down the net, some have large meshes and some have small meshes. When you get there, you just throw the rope down. If you don't change these old habits, you will still pounce on them if you open them again...

The 4 skills are a poisonous point. Although they can be replaced in a few hours, you will die several times early in the wild. Having skills and not using them are two different things. There is also the poisonous point of Leaf Stone. The properties of the stone will be useless in a few days, and the shelf life is only a few days? It is possible that timely items cost hundreds of thousands at such a low price?

The first part was about Secret Goldfinger and Pokémon. It was quite interesting. The readers were biased in this aspect, but later they were all biased towards Conan. Before this part, readers didn't like it and left. Those who like Conan will not read this book. To sum up, it's what you asked for.

There are too many elements, too many mixtures, it's neither fish nor fowl.

The content is quite good. I don't know why the rating is so low. The various stitchings are also very reasonable. But there are too many settings in the early stage and it can be annoying. You can just jump to the end.

It's okay, but the main plot in the early stage is a bit unclear. It basically revolves around Conan. In fact, I don't really like writing this way. Although I can accept the linkage with Conan, it feels like too much, which makes me feel bored and has no motivation to continue reading. I hope to return to the main plot soon! Brothers who like Conan and elves can give it a try🌝

Author, if you sew these, you might as well sew the full-time master competitive system into it. Teams of three people, 3V3 limited to eight-skill fixed arena competition, 5V5 unlimited skills one-on-one competition, 6v6 limited to four-team competition, direct competitive competition