Mortal Brother Lu

When I saw the plot of the Bloody Forbidden Land, it was so toxic that I couldn't stand it. In the illusion that even Xiang Zhili was affected, Han Li was fine during his Qi training period. . The protagonist wants to take Xiang Zhili and Nangong Wan to the center of the forbidden land to find an opportunity. I can accept it. Both of them are useful, so why should Han Li be taken there? Just because Han Li has a map in his hand? Stop being funny, okay? ? Which of the seven major sects doesn't have a map of this place? Is there anything that Xiang Zhili's god-level consciousness can't find, and Han Li still needs a map to provide directions? In the middle of the process, he made various tricks, asking Han Li to collect a large number of elixirs, but he didn't even pick a single elixir when his own father needed it to save his life! , After finding the inheritance from the spiritual world in the center of the forbidden land, the protagonist left. Xiang Zhili coveted this inheritance, and ended up sending treasures that even the god-forming monks coveted to Nangong Wan and Han Li, and obediently sent them out of the central area of the forbidden land safely. Doesn't Xiang Zhili know how to kill people and silence them? , You must know that the only thing he has done for hundreds of years is to find a way to ascend to the spiritual world. Now that he has found a way, the result is no confidentiality at all. Is this reasonable? In the original book, Xiang Zhili didn't kill anyone in the Bloody Forbidden Land, but he was very decisive in killing. But here he becomes a virgin? He also gave Nangong Wan the Six Ding Liujia magic talisman. I'm so drunk! . Seriously, the plot is so stupid! . I summarized it. The protagonist of this book is the reincarnation of the Emperor of Heaven. He has suffered all kinds of hardships here. Han Li is the reincarnation of the Taoist ancestor. Not only does the protagonist dare not touch him, he will do everything possible to kneel down and lick him if there is any benefit. Xiang Zhili is the reincarnation of the Holy Mother. As long as the plot is different from the original work, Xiang Laomo is doing all kinds of magic to keep the general direction of the original plot unchanged! The benefits of protecting Han Li can only be more, not less!

To be honest, I really don't understand what you are writing. What's the use of always writing irrelevant plots?

There is no smell of mortal flow at all

There are very few mortal fans, so I gave it five stars. I hope it won't be an eunuch, but I really can't understand the protagonist who survived two tribulations during his Qi training period. . . Also, the main character is a bit perverted when she goes out dressed as a woman.

The writing style in Mortal Tongwen is relatively good, but what you wrote really made me a little confused. You also didn't write about the protagonist in several consecutive pictures, and you always wrote about supporting roles. This is really uncomfortable. You wrote too few roles for the protagonist. What we mainly look at is the protagonist, how he grows up, and how he cheats, instead of looking at the supporting characters. I did several scenes in a row without the protagonist, and it was really, alas!

It seems that there are more than a hundred chapters, and the next dozens of chapters are not about the protagonist, but about the foreshadowing of others.

Why is the protagonist planning to become a virgin bitch later? Author, you need to know that what you are writing is a biography of a mortal cultivating immortality. OK?

I want to ask, what are you writing in the first few pictures? I didn't even understand it, it was beyond the plot. Brother, what you are writing is a biography of a mortal cultivating immortality. It is best to basically follow the plot. You wrote the first few pictures outside, I don't know how you wrote them.

It's so hard to write about so many insignificant characters, and I've read more than a dozen chapters. Where's the protagonist, and what's the title of the chapter, The Three Character Classic? You're still flirting, your writing is so bad, and you're showing off your few writing skills

A good mortal cultivating immortality has been written into a prehistoric novel, with specious concepts and random alterations and writings. Since you write like an author, don't take advantage of the popularity of mortals.