Mortal, My Wife Nangong Wan!

I said it was not good for you to use the word husband in your article, so you deleted the comment. This proves that you also know that this word will have a bad impact on your book, but you would rather delete the comment than change it. Your brain circuit is really strange.

After seeing a few pictures, I didn't want to watch anymore. What a joke. My husband looked really funny. He didn't use his brain before, just like an idiot, he thought he was very humorous.

1. The angle is tricky and some things are creative. Second, it's purely about plot, and the timeline is confusing. It looked okay at the beginning, but it stretched my hips later on. The reward given by the system is the Great Soul Technique, the Three Thousand Avenues of Immortality, which includes countless techniques, secret techniques, magical powers, alchemy, talisman formations, etc. As a result, nothing was reflected in the hands of the protagonist. I didn't believe that the great soul technique, one of the three thousand avenues, had no way to reshape the body. The most important thing is that the protagonist's strength has always been a mystery. Third, after arriving at the Sea of ​​Chaotic Stars, I couldn't bear to look straight at it, the timeline was in chaos. Whether it is the anime version or the original work, there is a difference of at least 30 years. At this time, Zi Ling was not born yet. As a result, it is the early stage of foundation building when it appears in this book. 6. Can't stand it. I really can't stand it.

Goldfinger is creative, you can check it out

This novel has no imagination at all. It insists on arranging mentally retarded pig's feet to guide Nangong Wan through the original plot. Can you not write it in such a stiff and retarded way?

There are too many plots that don't match the preface and the sequel. What I wrote in the previous chapter will be used directly to set up the next chapter, and there is too much repetitive nonsense, and a plot is repeated over and over again.

Anyone who accepts Nangong Wan will be given a thumbs up.

So this author doesn't listen to the advice of book friends. Although I haven't read it yet, I can find the answer from the comments. Zin Ziziz

Update soon. Wonderful and new realm.

If the protagonist lives in today's society or ancient society and cannot survive more than a year, according to your point of view, the last person to die should be Lan Gongwan (or his children).