Mortal: Dressed as Han Li, They All Feel Wrong

Looking at the update time, I can only say that it is a novel that spans time and space.

Now that you have become Han Li, don't live up to this identity. Accept the regrets in the original work and those who have emotional entanglements with Han Li if you can, but don't be too outrageous and accept everything. As long as you write well, we will support you🤘😫

It looks good, I hope the plot is detailed and interesting

Saw the latest, overall it's okay. Although there are some flaws. But it's much better than many fanfics, and I haven't seen any big logical holes so far. This is also the first time I have read this type of mortal fanfic. The plot and other aspects have to be controlled by the author himself. When it comes to mortal fan fiction, you have to write your own fun points without losing too much of the texture of the original work. I can only say that now that I have seen it, I personally feel that the pace of the plot is a little faster, and there are still some plots that have not been foreshadowed, such as those 500-year-old Huang Jingzhi that Han Li took to exchange for treasures. Bei, there should be some description and foreshadowing in the previous article, otherwise it will be easy to be confused at first glance. For example, when training them in kindergarten, insert some plots from the past life, saying that a thousand years is still too eye-catching after all, and lower it a little, about 500 years, which is just right. It is better to provide an explanation of dozens of words, which can improve the reader's reading experience. However, this book is still a well-written new book. Worthy of encouragement. If there are any big poisonous points in the later stage, I will make a follow-up review.

Let Nangong Wan, Fairy Ningshuang, Dong Xuan'er, Hong Fu, and Yinyue be the heroines, and Wang Ling and Mei Ning be the heroines. In the mortal travel notes, if the time traveler does not accept beauty, it is useless.

This book is much better than the previous one, update soon

Work hard to update. Work hard to update. Work hard to update.

It's rare to travel through time and become Han Li! The most worrying thing now is that the author has stopped updating. If the author sees it, please give me a reply!

It's okay, I've read 4 chapters so far, but there is a common problem in this kind of novel, that is, the protagonist is stupid, I don't know, they are all reborn or awakened, and the memory and other things are very deliberate, but I still can't see the superficial meaning.

The start was unreasonable. Han Li's share of the Immortal Ascension Order's Foundation Establishment Pills was actually taken by disciples of the wind-type alien spiritual roots. Wasn't it a descendant of a family with three spiritual roots?