Mortal: I Just Formed a Pill, and the System Told Me to Be Careful About Mr. Mo
by Charcoal Grilled Chicken Wings
About This Novel
[Congratulations to the host for turning eight years old and successfully binding the mortal cultivation system! Lu Yang looked at the light screen in front of him, and the corner of his mouth twitched: "Eight years old? System, I'm afraid your head was squeezed by the door. I have already formed a pill. How can you be eight years old? " [Mission: Mr. Mo has evil intentions and wants to take away you or senior brother Han Li. Stay alive! "Oh, a scumbag who can't touch even the Qi Refining Stage? As soon as he has the idea of seizing the body, I can suppress it with just a breath of my breath." [Mission: Save Zhang Tie from becoming a puppet! "It's a pity for Zhang Tie, I can just save him." [Mission: Team up with Han Li and Li Feiyu to destroy the Wild Wolf Gang! [Mission: Defeat Master Jinguang and shock the Qixuan Sect! ... "Brother of the Danjie period, will I play house with you? Even if I jump from the flying sword, I will still--" [Task rewards: Complete Qingyuan Sword Technique, Jiuqu Lingshen Dan, Brahma Saint's True Demon Art, Tongtian Lingbao, True Dragon Essence and Blood, Immortal Weapon...] Lu Yang instantly performed a Sichuan opera face change, smiling broadly: "System, you are really good at judging people!" "That's right, I, Lu Yang, have just turned eight years old. It's a good time for me to 'nurture'!" Touching his chin as he thought about the future, Lu Yang couldn't hold back the curve of his mouth: "If you let me become an immortal and live forever, even if I have Mei Ning on my left and Song Yu on my right, I am willing to do so!" ... Lu Yang, a time traveler, is familiar with the plot, and with a not-so-smart system, he crushes Han Li all the way, taking Han Li away, and earns exciting rewards to make up for the regrets of the original work. -- As a cultivator, you should be relaxed and happy.
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Official(115)Scraped 2d ago
If you look at a mortal, you are in a harem, and you can't walk around when you see a woman.
I don't know what to think. Look at all the mortals in the harem. You must know that these low-level monks have a lifespan limit. Even if you want to open a harem, you can go to the spirit world. Wouldn't it be good to find beauties above the Void Refining Realm to have a harem? There is no life limit yet. In the mortal world, except for a few women, almost none of them can ascend. What's the point of coming? And according to the fact that the protagonist has a system plug-in, it is estimated that it will only take two to three hundred years to soar. The longest time will not exceed a thousand years. Are you watching these women grow old and ugly one by one? You can think about the time when you transformed into a god. These women have become old women, and you still have sex with them? Do you feel it? Dong Xuan'er writes so long. Dong Xuan'er only formed the elixir when Han Li was in the late Nascent Soul stage. I was so pissed off when I transformed into a god.
I didn't expect that I would be old that month in the end.
Nangong Wan accepted it, but Xin Ruyin fulfilled her and Qi Yunxiao's wish, absolutely. Really, no matter what genre this book is, it still has to fulfill CP...
An undeniably bad book
The plot is extremely slow. It looks like an old lady's foot wrap, smelly and long. All the tasks issued by the system are like being a nanny. Why not just change your real name to Han Li's Guardian? Write an emotional scene and leave the three in and three out. Do you want me to do it? Do you want me to do it? Do you want me to do it? Are you just kidding me?
I've read more than 190 chapters, and I haven't broken through to the Nascent Soul yet. It's getting more and more sloppy as it goes on. It's all women talking about love every day. I've written almost 200 chapters, but I haven't broken through any major realms. This is slower than the story of a mortal cultivating immortality. It's an urban harem story cloaked in fantasy.
There is too much nonsense, and even a small thing can draw a lot of attention. I don't know if it's annoying to you or not, but it's annoying me to death. He thought about this and that every day, but in the end he remained motionless. It's like my legs are broken.
Cultivation of immortals is all about understanding thoughts. Now that the system is in hand, why can't we find more female protagonists? You can become stronger even while lying down
I really want to block these sexual repressions and scribblings when I was young, it makes me sick and I want to vomit.
It doesn't matter if you write about the harem, you have to write it well anyway. Before, you were not close to women and your will was as strong as iron. As soon as the system received the account, a demon came over and said that you wanted to open a harem and be close to women. In the end, you called Hong Fu to break the formation. You and Dong Xuan'er were flirting there, and they caught a glimpse. I just blush, am I blind after so many years of spiritual consciousness? There is also this broken system, which promulgates a lot of tasks. In the end, the protagonist does not follow the requirements and completes it at the highest level of perfection. Not once or twice. You might as well just give him the Taoist cultivation level and do the hammer task.
It's boring to watch
1. As a time traveler, knowing the plot is already a great advantage. 2. There is also a system. It is not invincible, and it is actually a mentally retarded system. There is no challenge at all. 3. The time traveler is a pervert. He traveled ahead of time and formed a pill. Isn't this just taking advantage of Han Li? If you have any of these three points, you can prosper as a mortal, but the difficulty is different. You actually have all three points, which is not interesting at all. It is an invincible and brainless article.
Speechless, there is an elixir to treat a sprained foot. You need to take off your shoes to treat it, but it is still Qi training. A diaosi.
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Official(115)Scraped 2d ago
If you look at a mortal, you are in a harem, and you can't walk around when you see a woman.
I don't know what to think. Look at all the mortals in the harem. You must know that these low-level monks have a lifespan limit. Even if you want to open a harem, you can go to the spirit world. Wouldn't it be good to find beauties above the Void Refining Realm to have a harem? There is no life limit yet. In the mortal world, except for a few women, almost none of them can ascend. What's the point of coming? And according to the fact that the protagonist has a system plug-in, it is estimated that it will only take two to three hundred years to soar. The longest time will not exceed a thousand years. Are you watching these women grow old and ugly one by one? You can think about the time when you transformed into a god. These women have become old women, and you still have sex with them? Do you feel it? Dong Xuan'er writes so long. Dong Xuan'er only formed the elixir when Han Li was in the late Nascent Soul stage. I was so pissed off when I transformed into a god.
I didn't expect that I would be old that month in the end.
Nangong Wan accepted it, but Xin Ruyin fulfilled her and Qi Yunxiao's wish, absolutely. Really, no matter what genre this book is, it still has to fulfill CP...
An undeniably bad book
The plot is extremely slow. It looks like an old lady's foot wrap, smelly and long. All the tasks issued by the system are like being a nanny. Why not just change your real name to Han Li's Guardian? Write an emotional scene and leave the three in and three out. Do you want me to do it? Do you want me to do it? Do you want me to do it? Are you just kidding me?
I've read more than 190 chapters, and I haven't broken through to the Nascent Soul yet. It's getting more and more sloppy as it goes on. It's all women talking about love every day. I've written almost 200 chapters, but I haven't broken through any major realms. This is slower than the story of a mortal cultivating immortality. It's an urban harem story cloaked in fantasy.
There is too much nonsense, and even a small thing can draw a lot of attention. I don't know if it's annoying to you or not, but it's annoying me to death. He thought about this and that every day, but in the end he remained motionless. It's like my legs are broken.
Cultivation of immortals is all about understanding thoughts. Now that the system is in hand, why can't we find more female protagonists? You can become stronger even while lying down
I really want to block these sexual repressions and scribblings when I was young, it makes me sick and I want to vomit.
It doesn't matter if you write about the harem, you have to write it well anyway. Before, you were not close to women and your will was as strong as iron. As soon as the system received the account, a demon came over and said that you wanted to open a harem and be close to women. In the end, you called Hong Fu to break the formation. You and Dong Xuan'er were flirting there, and they caught a glimpse. I just blush, am I blind after so many years of spiritual consciousness? There is also this broken system, which promulgates a lot of tasks. In the end, the protagonist does not follow the requirements and completes it at the highest level of perfection. Not once or twice. You might as well just give him the Taoist cultivation level and do the hammer task.
It's boring to watch
1. As a time traveler, knowing the plot is already a great advantage. 2. There is also a system. It is not invincible, and it is actually a mentally retarded system. There is no challenge at all. 3. The time traveler is a pervert. He traveled ahead of time and formed a pill. Isn't this just taking advantage of Han Li? If you have any of these three points, you can prosper as a mortal, but the difficulty is different. You actually have all three points, which is not interesting at all. It is an invincible and brainless article.
Speechless, there is an elixir to treat a sprained foot. You need to take off your shoes to treat it, but it is still Qi training. A diaosi.
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