
Mortal: Grandmaster Li Huayuan
About This Novel
Funny + funny + group portrait + layout, non-serious and suffering ordinary people flow, focusing on a light and funny, the content is reasonably imaginable. Stack your armor in advance: respect the original work, don't refer to anime, don't grab the little green bottle, don't sleep with Nangong, light harem, don't be a holy mother, don't lick the old devil, the old devil is a tool. ... "Cultivating immortals, there are three things I don't want to do!" Li Huayuan, a great master who is upright and personable, said: "First, I don't want to practice hard! I've already cultivated to become an immortal and I'm still exhausted from the work. Why should I become an immortal?!" "Secondly, I won't practice if you're obscene and underdeveloped! I cultivate to become an immortal just to make a name for myself. I won't do good deeds without leaving my name behind!" "Third, I won't practice without my disciples. What's so awesome about my master? My disciples are awesome only when they are awesome!" After finishing speaking, all the monks who participated in the first monk's ascension ceremony were shocked, while a group of star-eyed disciples headed by Han Li were taking notes! ... This is the legendary story of the great master Li Huayuan, so stay tuned!
What Readers Think
Rating
Community(0)
Official(20)Scraped 7d ago
The author thought he wrote it very funny, but in fact it looked very embarrassing.
Cao, Kunkun, Mengmeng, I'm disgusted to death, ****
This is the most trashy mortal fanfic I have ever read, bar none. It's even more rubbish than those cool articles. The articles about cultivating immortals are not funny articles, they are not funny articles, they are still pretty good.
You have established a master system, but you are not very good yourself, how can you teach others? In fantasy immortality novels where power comes to oneself, you give things to others casually
It reads like a street kid. The author may want to write something funny, but every sentence is written like this. Doesn't it feel inconsistent with the painting style of cultivating immortals?
There's no magic weapon, it's just rubbish
Is this introduction serious? Do you want to make a joke in the mortal world? You might as well create an original world.
In more than ten chapters, the poison will be amplified and the foundation will be built slowly.
Purely disgusting, I wrote a few words👎👎👎👎👎
What kind of chicken crawling stuff are you writing about? If a fan can write so poorly, you should go to a factory! 👎👎👎
Rating
Community(0)
Official(20)Scraped 7d ago
The author thought he wrote it very funny, but in fact it looked very embarrassing.
Cao, Kunkun, Mengmeng, I'm disgusted to death, ****
This is the most trashy mortal fanfic I have ever read, bar none. It's even more rubbish than those cool articles. The articles about cultivating immortals are not funny articles, they are not funny articles, they are still pretty good.
You have established a master system, but you are not very good yourself, how can you teach others? In fantasy immortality novels where power comes to oneself, you give things to others casually
It reads like a street kid. The author may want to write something funny, but every sentence is written like this. Doesn't it feel inconsistent with the painting style of cultivating immortals?
There's no magic weapon, it's just rubbish
Is this introduction serious? Do you want to make a joke in the mortal world? You might as well create an original world.
In more than ten chapters, the poison will be amplified and the foundation will be built slowly.
Purely disgusting, I wrote a few words👎👎👎👎👎
What kind of chicken crawling stuff are you writing about? If a fan can write so poorly, you should go to a factory! 👎👎👎









