A Mortal's Story of Immortal Cultivation: I Also Have a Heavenly Palm Vase

This is the worst book I have ever read. The main character's brain circuit is very abnormal. He is neither cautious, decisive, nor heroic. I only read it, and I couldn't read it after ten chapters. First of all, his father sent him so much money and left a letter, which made people feel very poisonous, and there was no explanation of the family later on. Second, if you want to learn medical skills, even if your excuse is a little better and more natural, that's fine! Just say that you want to learn more, have more skills than you can handle, and want to contribute to the sect. Damn it, uncle, you are using this stupid excuse to lie to a seven-year-old! Also, when experimenting with your own spiritual roots, if you try a metallic technique, you should not try it. You should try it all over again to determine which of your spiritual roots is the most prominent. If you don't choose the most prominent spiritual root to practice the technique, you can just copy the protagonist's technique if you want! If you can get started with the metal technique, you can start it immediately. You can compare it and get the vial. Don't you know how to start farming as soon as possible? You can also prepare some medicinal materials when practicing martial arts! I think the most helpful thing is to practice the horizontal training method properly. After all, the power of non-physical monks among mortals is really small, which will also help you save your life in the early stage. As for Master Jinguang, you can take a pre-emptive strike and go directly to the Wild Wolf Gang to kill him. Even if you don't kill him, you can at least give him in advance. Say hello to the entrusted girl, or protect her in advance, or transfer her. You have to have a hero to save the beauty at a critical moment, and leave without explaining clearly to others. You know from the beginning that you want to become an immortal, so don't delay others, or you can choose like Li Feiyu! You don't say you have a good relationship with Han Li, but you want to maintain a peaceful state with him. If you make him suspicious of you for no reason, can you be any more unnatural? And even if you are very eager to learn Han Li's medical skills, Han Li will not doubt anything about you! Then, as a time traveler, you find that the plot of the Mohist family has changed. Shouldn't you be vigilant? Not to mention secret observation, even if you are a coward and just run away, I can understand it. You went to a banquet and found something wrong with the pills. Without saying a word, you threw them on the ground. Could you be more obvious? You are looking for trouble! Either take care of it or don't care, you just threw the pills on the ground in front of your face, and it ended as if nothing happened. You are really more disgusting than Zhang Wuji, and it should be a relatively safe period in Qixuanmen. You have practiced to the fourth level of Qi Refining in a month, and you are not satisfied. In order to pass the test, you smashed your Dantian and vomited blood. You are afraid that your cultivation path will be too smooth in the future, right? I'm afraid there won't be any hidden wounds, right? You have a powerful enemy that forces you to break through as soon as possible, right? I just read these few chapters, and I can't stand the rest. I believe there must be more holes and poisonous points in the later ones. As a veteran bookworm, I would like to give the author a suggestion. First of all, read the original work carefully, clarify various settings and timings, and avoid bugs. Or you can tell the story from the beginning that you directly create it, or you can tell the protagonist that he has not finished the plot! You need to be clear about the protagonist's character. You can refer to Han Li's character. It may not be exactly the same, but there are a few that you must learn from! For example, if you keep a low profile, Xiaowei is a weak person but wants to carry a huge treasure. Why do you still act so careless every day? Let nature take its course and be low-key, rather than deliberately being unnaturally low-key. This is a different kind of high-profile. Secondly, decisiveness. The character's personality is muddled and contradictory. Even if he has a loser mentality, I suggest you arrange a few events as soon as possible to let him complete his ideological transformation. Reading novels is just for a cool word, not for you to write simple cool articles, but you should not write too disgustingly.

The author should just write about female videos. She is so holy. From the beginning, you should know the law of the jungle.

It's a garbage book, full of loopholes. The main character wanders around and doesn't know what to do. When he sees a woman, he uses his lower body to think about problems. It's just a theme about cultivating immortals so that he won't be unable to walk when he sees a woman. He really can't figure out that there are no women in the mortal world. He pretends to be cool with a merchant when he buys something. He's not careful. If he really doesn't know how to write, he can just write a fantasy novel. Don't write a mortal fanfic. Basically all the characters in this book have online IQs, and you make them look like a fantasy novel.

It's super embarrassing to watch.

I want to ask a question, if this kind of book has already been signed, won't it be considered a breach of contract? ? No fine? ?

The protagonist is very lucky and is not dead yet

I really can't stand the progress anymore, and the three Tainan drums are also drunk, so I say goodbye.

The Legend of Idiot, The Legend of Idiot Cultivating Immortality is also a wonderful flower.

I have never seen such a rubbish book. The author should quit.

It's very confusing. Other people's skills come with magic such as controlling objects and the Five Elements. The protagonist's skills also come with turning palms into swords and martial arts skills? Other people's skills open the sea of ​​consciousness on the fourth level. When the protagonist arrives at Jiayuan City, he is on the tenth level and has not yet opened the sea of ​​knowledge. Others' fighting skills are all about spells flying around. The protagonist's fighting skills are to get beaten and then walk up on his feet to kill people. The key is that others have magic weapons, but they only use them once? The writing is okay, and the plot is poor.