Dou Po: Making up a Diary, Xiao Yan Became a Little Fanboy

It's pretty good. Xiao Yan is a nice person, so I can't stand those people who travel through time to harm Xiao Yan, unless it's a girl who travels through time to harm Xiao Yan. Because Xiao Yan is a scumbag emotionally, it's understandable that a woman deliberately teases him, but if a man teases him, he feels like a villain.

Writing a diary to cater to the original characters is fake, embarrassing and uncompetitive. Since the theme is writing a diary, a good direction would be to make magic changes. When exposing the diary, there should be no plot tearing and no forced catering to the characters. The beginning of the diary describes characters such as Xiao Yan, Medusa and the Ten Emperors Formation needed for the invasion of the Thousand Evil Clan. It also focuses on the relationship with the protagonist. The reader's expectations have dropped to the lowest point in this diary description. The following paragraphs of the diary greatly describe the interpersonal relationships and living conditions of the original characters. It is a failure! Writing a diary should be interesting and should be thoughtful. For example (in the diary at the beginning of the novel) it is written that the main battlefield of Zhongzhou fell, and the protagonist followed the defeated army to retreat to southern Xinjiang to build a defense line relying on the endless mountains. The story is about embarrassment, rivers of blood, and mountains of corpses and seas of blood (except for the diary, the first look at the original characters). It can be used as a storybook. To find it interesting, it mainly plants the seeds of wanting to read it again. (Diary 2) It writes about the sinking of the Western Continent and the loss of contact with the Northern Continent. The protagonist investigates the news with others. It turns out that the ancient emperor's cave has been opened, Xiao Yan obtained the treasure, and the enemy from the outside appears for the first time, chasing and fleeing the Northern Continent (Diary 2). The original character's heart is agitated when he first glimpses the unknown, and the diary is full of things in the future. Everyone who has a diary feels that they have done something great, and everyone hides their stupidity to seek benefits (3... In this way, there are two world lines, the present and the future, and the author can write three paragraphs with the power of his pen. For example, the template writer of the author's first paragraph should stop the loss and change the flow in time to accumulate popularity. For example, in the follow-up (in the diary), instead of detailing the interpersonal relationships, change the major events and change the main line in time (taking eternal life as the main line and the world as the center to highlight the preciousness of life) For example, the origin of the Black Shadow Corps can be written (this is the product of the immortality experiment of the supreme figure in the world). The rebirth of the protagonist can be written (the awakening of a special physique to predict the future, or the time-retrospection immortality experiment: the protagonist Shou Jin transfers his memory back to his birth, just like time on the elevator. Before, it was just a time memory delay, mainly for people with diaries to believe). Why the alien demon emperor invaded (it can be to refine medicine, refine a world into a pill, immortality medicine, isn't the specialty of Dou Qi Continent is practicing medicine) Dou Qi Continent serves as the foundation, and the Great Thousand World is the center of the magic reform. In Tudou's world view, there is only immortality. The Supreme Saint can only live for tens of thousands of years. His name in the sky is like the emperor who is in harmony with the heart of the sky. Eternal life is definitely the unchanging theme in this world view. I'm changing your profile In the vast world, planes gather, thousands of races stand, and heroes gather. The legend of the endless world pursues the ethereal journey of eternal life. War Emperor of the West, the mystery of bloodline is that the human body is just the carrier of bloodline. I am the source of bloodline. You are my descendant. What is resurrected in your body is my consciousness. Thousands of tombs in the Northern Wasteland, death is immortal, people die as ghosts, ghosts die as ghosts, ghosts die as hope, hope for death is disaster, die again as a small thing, die again as... How to maintain the memory of self in death after death You can transform into the consciousness of an insect swarm, you can ascend mechanically, you can seize the world... But the world is full of rotting flesh and blood, and the rotten machinery will lead to decay. Is immortality really possible?

To give the author some knowledge on chemistry, nuclear wastewater is water used for washing and cooling in nuclear power plants. It does not directly contact nuclear pollution and contains only a small amount of radioactivity. It can usually be discharged into the sea after simple treatment such as (precipitation, filtration, ion exchange, evaporation and concentration, etc.). Nuclear sewage is water that comes into direct contact with pollution and will undergo a series of complicated treatments before being discharged into the sea. The hazards of nuclear wastewater and nuclear sewage are almost the same as the difference between laxatives and cyanide. It is better to change the introduction to sewage.

The harem is a failure. When I write about the harem protagonist, I look like a diaosi.

I seem to remember that in the original work, Xiao Yan always knelt down to worship when he became a disciple. Look at how the little fairy clothes are sold. Damn it, it's just like a joke. Whatever you say, I will temporarily believe you and worship you as my teacher.

The novel is becoming more and more complicated as the novel is written, Medusa is a straight 9 color... There is no plot at the bottom of the Nine Netherworld Python Pond, and it is even more outrageous that she directly fights the emperor to fight the master... Can she upgrade even if she changes her bloodline? Zi Yan relies on the energy of the Dragon King's Origin Fruit to level up. Once you reach a good level, you will skip a level. The plot becomes more and more deviated from the original work. What can a fighting spirit Xiao Yan do when he goes to Zhongzhou? What opportunity can Zhongzhou give him? Is it stronger than Canaan Academy's inner fire? Regardless of Xun'er, does the plot of Canaan Academy disappear? Why don't you get 100 Dou Wang Dan and Dou Sheng Dan instead of 100 Dou Zong Dan and Dou Sheng Dan? Is this how to speed up the plot and directly fight against the Saints and Soul-Destroying Tribes? Is this diary still compiled for 100 years? ? The male protagonist doesn't even see himself practicing and just relies on the system all day long. There are not many people who are not satisfied even after fighting the emperor and still dislike the diary guide. What's the use of people who practice like this? Isn't it really better for the system to just let you clear Dou Di? Accepting the little doctor Xian Yafei as his disciple did not teach me anything. She did her own thing all day long and had little interaction with others. She was lustful but not bold. She wanted to have a harem but didn't dare to write it in her diary. It was really hypocritical. If you don't practice hard and go to Zhongzhou, but instead think about fighting, you can predict what the subsequent plot will be. Unify the northwest and march into the Black Corner Region, right? Then I met Zi Yan at Canaan College and became a master before going to Zhongzhou. Anyway, I was counting on the system to help me upgrade. This progress is waiting for you to fight the Saint. I'm afraid Xiao Yan is not the only Dou King. The original book said that myrrh can increase the level in the Fighting Qi stage. The foundation-building spirit liquid studied by Yao Lao only accelerates the absorption. If you want to improve Xiao Yan, you can directly upgrade the Fighting Qi to the Fighter. All kinds of nonsense are really speechless.

It's a very good book. I hope this book won't be a eunuch. Come on, the author, I wish you will write better and better.

I have a hunch that this kind of book is destined not to be long. I was so embarrassed watching it, I was having fun and blowing myself up there.

It feels like the novel will become useless if you keep writing like this. Useless passerby characters can also be included in the diary. You have to know that the protagonist is a man who wants to become the Dou Emperor. The only way to defeat the emperor is to inherit the Tuoshe Ancient Emperor. But if you want to pass on the inheritance, you must practice Fenjue. So if the system does not give the original emperor Qi, then the first person to become emperor must be Xiao Yan who practices Fenjue. What is the significance of the presence of someone who can help Xiao Yan in your diary? What's the point of a passerby like Liu Qing appearing in your diary? Don't write too much about the content of the diary compared to the content of other passerby characters. It's just water text. After writing so many chapters, Xiao Yan still has a fighting spirit. The original plot has just started and the diary setting was not written at the beginning. Characters with diaries should not have 3 stable appearances every time after the strategy is completed. Isn't it good to have 3 characters appear every time the protagonist breaks through a big realm? If you keep writing like this, there will be thousands of people with diaries later, right? Is it possible that all kinds of passerby characters can help Xiao Yan break through the strange demons such as Dou Emperor? ?

What is written is simply a piece of shit, since Medusa doesn't even know what realm Dou Zun is? Are you kidding me? Who else told you that there are only four empires in the northwest continent? These are just the ones that appear in the original work, at least there are more than a hundred. If you still have Douzong, you can be honored on the Northwest Road? Are you kidding me about this too? Don't even think about it without Dou Sheng. Moreover, this author is really hungry. He wants to die every night, and he desperately wants to lick Jia Xingtian. He is really convinced. If you have a harem, can't you have some high-quality ones? It's just random writing, the most rubbish Dou Po fan I've ever seen🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮