Fight to Break: Zixiao Thunder Emperor

I finally found a protagonist who wrote about other attributes, but it turned out that the alchemist was so stupid that he had to make medicine to death, or he was born with fire and wood attributes. Those with pure fire attributes needed to make medicine, water attributes also practiced, poison attributes also needed to be made, and the thunder attribute also said to make medicine. If you don't make medicine, you will die, and the book will not be written.

I came up with a poetic feed out of nowhere. If you don't know how to write about emotions, don't write about so many women. You will be scared when you see a woman. Like a stallion, right? Then he said how much he loves him so much. Then he saw someone having sex with one another. It was so disgusting. At first he said he loved this girl so much, but then he turned around and found another one. Or don't say such things. Even if it is empty after opening, there is still a quantity. ***When you meet a girl in the original novel, you just go to her, right? Two or three are fine, but four or five at once is not enough. Keep adding more.

It's outrageous. A guest room in Qingshan Town costs 1,000 gold coins a night. It's really outrageous. A first-level magic core only costs 400 gold coins, and even a mercenary group with several people may not be able to produce it in a month (probability). The configuration of the original Xiao Yan Young Patriarch only cost 20 gold coins a month, and it would take 4 years to save enough to live in it for one day... If you really don't know something, don't write it blindly. Just write it down and stay for one night. Bullshit data is the easiest way to get slapped in the face.

It's the Xiao family again, it's no fun to wear them all.

It is very similar to the original work, with nothing new. It goes to Canaan College and grabs fire energy. It just walks the same path that Xiao Yan has walked. It is exactly the same. Except for the first few chapters, the rest is very boring, and there is no fighting. It is all about soul power. Even if there are multiple female protagonists, they still frown at every turn, acting like they are invincible in the world, and they fall in love with each other at every turn. In Yun Yun's original novel, it was because she took medicine, and Medusa was because she was already in the car. If they were all so casual, there would be Taoist priests all over the place.

First of all, the idea is a good idea and cannot be denied, but the protagonist and even the author have not figured out a key issue: how to clearly define his position. The protagonist definitely wants to be the Dou Emperor, which is understandable. After all, after traveling through time, there will always be some fantasies about putting one's eyes above the top. This is true, and having Golden Finger will only encourage this trend. But the problem is that Dou Qi Continent is a limited-time dungeon. As long as something goes wrong, Xiao Yan or the protagonist of this book can easily lose everything if he fails to keep up. Therefore, you must not casually compete for the opportunities and plot of Xiao Yan, the original protagonist. Many plots and opportunities are the key to the success of each stuck point, which indirectly leads to the subsequent success of the stuck soul emperor breaking through the fighting emperor. This is critical. Because the growth environment of the protagonist in this book is uncontrollable, although of course the author's protagonist can develop however he wants. However, the protagonist should not do anything too outrageous. Because the protagonist doesn't know whether he will be stuck in a certain realm for a long time for some reason during his cultivation. The situation of an unlucky guy like Hai Bodong is not an exception, or he just can't find a key thing. As a result, it is difficult to improve quickly. For example, what should I do if I practice Fen Jue but can't find the strange fire? For another example, the protagonist is so unlucky that he is trapped in a certain ruins or space. What should I do if I can't get out alive (Xiao Chen, Blood Axe, Taixu Ancient Dragon Emperor)? If there is a system or something, then you have a way out. The novel is quite satisfactory but somewhat rounded. But the protagonist has no system. Although he has a golden finger, he relies solely on himself for the rest. So the protagonist must take the blame for the bad consequences caused by Xiao Yan's plot and chance. This is absolutely true. For example, Gu Xun'er, she is a very important role in Xiao Yan's growth. She has assumed ideals and beliefs (persisted many times because of Gu Xun'er's identity issue), provided key props (Emperor Seal Jue, etc.), Answered key questions (pointed out the ancient jade, etc.), And obtained key opportunities (Xiao Yan would not even think about it without Gu Xun'er in the tomb quota, and Jing). Lotus Demon Fire), she is needed to unlock key plots (Zhongzhou's many rescues, etc.). The author now assigns Gu Xun'er to the protagonist. So once the protagonist has some delays and fails to grow to the appropriate realm and strength in time, Xiao Yan also fails to grow due to the lack of various key factors, the problem of the Soul Emperor will immediately explode. People can be selfish and self-centered. Even the dark spots are no problem. Many opportunities are there in Dou Qi Continent, almost within reach. But you must never be so conceited that you don't consider the consequences and only consider your own comfort.

I never expected that the protagonist, Gold Finger, would have to fight against Yan Yan. He was still at the peak of his strength as a Dou Wang. He went to great lengths to improve his strength and boldly gave it a go in order to eliminate Yan in three years. He knew that the Yunlan Sect's supplementary supply of Anti-Inflammation allowed him to use Qinglian's Heart Fire. I don't know what the meaning of this plot is. Is it interesting? It's almost the same as the original work, but I changed the backstage, conquered Yun Yun, and wrote it purely as a nanny. Qing Lin is also not the protagonist. Anti-inflammation makes the protagonist wipe his butt. The first part is OK, but the later part is really bad. Without anti-inflammation, can this book be written? Moreover, Nan Yanran really likes anti-inflammatory drugs again. I really laughed to death. It's a cp, right? There is really no need to write so many plots. The latter part is just a nanny. The first part of sending anti-inflammatory fire is just a deal. It is very reasonable, but the second part is unreasonable. There is no benefit to the nanny. It is to help the anti-inflammatory to find face, or to give the protagonist a chance to show off. I have discovered that Douluo plays an abstract style, and Dou Po plays a dog-licking style, which is also contrary to nature.

***, I suddenly lost my memory and was speechless.

Brother, you have banned people from talking and deleting comments. Don't talk about books. Yuanli Dou Qi Continent doesn't exist at all. How can you become an ancestral realm? . .

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