
Douluo: Wuhun Ah Yin Reveals Tang San's True Face
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Traveling through Douluo, Su Yun discovered that his martial spirit was actually the Blue Silver Emperor Ah Yin? ! Okay, Tang San, I will definitely reveal your true colors! Su Yun: Sister Yin, actually... A Yin: Xiaoyun, Tang San is not my son, he was taken away! You must help me kill this bastard who stole my son's body! Su Yun:? ? ? Ah Yin: He also has many self-created soul skills and insidious weapons that I have never seen before. You must be careful. Su Yun:? ? ? Ah Yin: But don't worry, although I'm just a martial soul, I've awakened the system, and I will definitely help you become stronger! Su Yun:? ? ? What? What the hell? Am I not the time traveler? Why doesn't the system bind me? ... A few years later, Su Yun stood on top of the empire, holding A Yin in his arms and looking at Tang San below. Tang San: Mom! Ah Yin: Su Yun, help me kill him! Su Yun: Hello, wife!
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Official(194)Scraped 23d ago
Author, is this a harem novel?
Author, is this a harem novel? Can we collect all these characters one by one in the future? Ah Yin, needless to say, has already been confirmed. This Ah Yin is Tang Hao's wife and Tang San's mother. If Xiaowu with her left hand holds Ah Yin with her right hand, Think of Tang San's mother, One is Tang San's wife Moreover, these two people are closely related to the Tang family and his son. And to put it another way, this is mother-in-law and daughter-in-law rice bowl. And if Tang Shenwang is reincarnated, But I saw Xiao Wu and A Yin being held in the arms of the protagonist The King of Tang Shen would probably be furious to death when he saw his beloved and mother falling into the arms of his enemy. Mother-in-law and daughter-in-law rice bowl Hold Xiao Wu on the left and Ah Yin on the right One is Tang Hao's wife One is the wife of Tang Shenwang Think about the relationship between the two, mother-in-law and daughter-in-law, serving the male protagonist together Hey hey hey, the Tang family father and son will probably be mad to death after seeing this.
Who do you like? Who is bad to flirt with? But he wants to flirt with such a disgusting rabbit, betrays the race, eats inside and outside, is unfilial and unworthy of being a mother. What does it do with such a thing? With such a low IQ and a broken vase, his mother rescued him and then went to the human world to fall in love. He had completely forgotten his mother's life and death. What is the difference between him and an animal? Will he go to the God Realm later or betray his race? What does this kind of person want from him? They are simply beasts among beasts. Fortunately, you still like them. The three most disgusting things in Douluo Continent are the old rabbit, Bibi Donghu Liena
That's it
You don't look like a time traveler at all. You don't have any thoughts. You are led by the nose. Which thing do you want to do? Are you being led by others in your life? What is the meaning of such a life?
Brainless writing, but it's not a cool writing, it's a boring writing.
Author, I like your fanfic very much. I entered it based on your introduction at the beginning, but I don't know when, I suddenly found that your fanfic is too frustrating (both broken chapters and few words, as well as the "wisdom" of the Shrek protagonist group and the "ignorance" of the male protagonist's "hidden edge") Even if this isn't a cool article, it's not like this, right? Moreover, there is a system that still issues tasks. Now it has more than 100 chapters and is almost 200. It has only issued a few tasks, a two-step learning method, a technique, a seed, and a skill. [Emot=default,84/] According to this plot development, by the time you hold Ah Yin's waist in front of Tang San as mentioned in your introduction, it will be more than 500 chapters, right?
Systematic and modern people's thinking in this crisis-ridden time does not want to think about how to become stronger, how to intercept opportunities, how to enrich oneself, how to strengthen oneself. I really don't understand why I want to study. Is it because Ah Yin's hundred thousand years of knowledge is not enough, or is he too stupid to follow the original plot? The easiest way to attract hatred is that the little Zha San has a way to kill himself, so what does it have to do with destroying him?
Really speechless
I already knew some of the plot, but I still pretended not to understand, so I directly told Ah Yin that you had traveled through time, and then told her that Tang Hao was with her just because of your soul ring, and that he was the one who brought Wuhun Palace to you. Why else would he ignore you for so many years and lock you in a stone house?
If you want to read a cool novel, you can go out and turn right. The protagonist was chased away by the enemy many times, and was beaten unconscious, and was almost killed. After passing the divine test, he was forcefully interrogated several times by Qian Daoliu; If you want to see them all, those who are decisive in accepting girls can go out and turn right. Although the protagonist flirts with girls at the beginning, it is just holding hands. The first time he actually accepts girls is more than 250 chapters in the second half. The protagonist has not felt it for the first time because the protagonist is unconscious again. Bibi Dong takes the initiative. In the end, the protagonist's wives are Bibi Dong, A Yin, Qian Renxue, Hu Liena, Zhu Zhuqing, and Xiao Wu; If you want to see a decisive killing, you can go out and turn right. When the protagonist sees the enemy, he will make all kinds of nonsense, saying that you can't leave if you only have this little strength, that he is nothing to be afraid of, and that you will deal with him sooner or later.
It's really difficult for Douluo authors nowadays
There is almost no author who wants to write about Douluo who will not be criticized. 1- Stallion type, I was criticized for writing a little bit here and a little bit there, and then there were a lot of comments saying that I wanted a single female protagonist. Sometimes I wonder if this book is not suitable, so I should change it. I have to say it, but it's not that the writing is not good and the plot is not good, but I simply don't like the way this book is written. 2- It's a type that doesn't put too much emphasis on the setting, but the plot is just fine. It's very common for this kind of book to have a good plot, but without exception they all talk about how the setting here is, and the setting there, but the author has not ruined the character design. Many Douluo settings are a mess. It would be very time-consuming for the author to go through the settings and remember them firmly in the mind. If you have this time, you might as well write more plots, as long as the basic settings are not broken, but there are a lot of trolls who just want to find faults. Isn't it enough to make it enjoyable and comfortable to watch? 3-Authors who particularly care about what readers say This type of review can be said to have messy things in your mind and then keep outputting with the setting set. This kind of author has perfect settings and characters except for the poor plot. This kind of lack of soul. Why do so many people now feel like this and output the setting set? All because of some useless things. You can criticize the author for improving his writing skills, or for criticizing the plot, but you can't say that you don't like a certain character, but you have to read the book in the hope that it will appear in the book, and then complain about the author, or the book does not write enough about the characters you want, and you criticize it, really. This is not necessary. Even if you hate this character, the author must also consider the audience. It is not easy for the author to write anything. It is better to exclude the complicated settings and leave the basic settings to let your mind write. Why do Douluo and Dou Po books rarely break 9.0? I cannot deny that there is one Partly because the author can't control his writing skills, but what makes me even more angry is that writing a book and getting scolded is actually not interesting to me, right? When I see people copying plots one by one, I feel that there are fewer and fewer fans. I wonder if there are any masters writing this type of books.
In fact, the poisonous point is very obvious 1. He is obviously a time traveler but he has no system and cannot do whatever he wants in an invincible and refreshing way. 2. Ah Yin is extremely hostile to Tang San. The protagonist also has a lot of knowledge and ideas, but it is strange that it does not arouse suspicion or malice. 3. Even if it is taught by A Yin himself, the Blue Silver Emperor martial spirit is relatively useless and weak in itself. In addition, A Yin himself may not know as much about the Douluo world as the protagonist. Its only function is to make up for the protagonist's training details that cannot be seen in the novel and to use the system for the protagonist. 4. The system is not in the hands of the protagonist. Although A Yin is hostile to Tang San, he still likes Tang Hao. Even if Tang Hao knows about Tang San's soul travel, he has no reason to join forces with the protagonist. To sum up: Hanging is too weak. What is not yours is not yours after all. Only when it is in your own hands can you be sure. It's not that it would be more realistic to describe Master Tang San as scheming. You've written such a bad person without any brains, and the plot is so brainless that I really can't stand it. You might as well write an invincible and enjoyable article... The Blue Silver Emperor has some advantages as a martial spirit, but it is really not that exciting and makes people uninterested. One is that it has the opportunity to conquer Ah Yin, which may make Xiao Wu naturally fond of it. It may also be an affinity for plants, so conquering the fairy grass is relatively simple. But looking at it this way, it's just a chance, and it's not really exciting at all. Looking through the catalog, I found that I had taken Ju Douluo to the Ice and Fire Eyes. At this time, I started to be brainless again. I didn't know how to collect fairy grass, and I needed Ju Douluo's help. Why was I trying to steal someone else's opportunity? You have no strength and no background. Why should a Titled Douluo give you fairy grass? Giving you one or two plants is an act of benevolence. Tang San's use of kindness and poison Douluo is more intelligent than this. The protagonist himself has no strength and no ideas, and the plot is also based on the defense. If you say it is a cool article, it is not good, and if you say it is brainless, it makes Master Tang San look very bad. The protagonist has been unable to kill him and can only be suppressed. However, the protagonist has no brains and the plot has no brains. It is purely disgusting to readers and neither fish nor fowl.
The protagonist is like an idiot. I have never seen SB's
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Official(194)Scraped 23d ago
Author, is this a harem novel?
Author, is this a harem novel? Can we collect all these characters one by one in the future? Ah Yin, needless to say, has already been confirmed. This Ah Yin is Tang Hao's wife and Tang San's mother. If Xiaowu with her left hand holds Ah Yin with her right hand, Think of Tang San's mother, One is Tang San's wife Moreover, these two people are closely related to the Tang family and his son. And to put it another way, this is mother-in-law and daughter-in-law rice bowl. And if Tang Shenwang is reincarnated, But I saw Xiao Wu and A Yin being held in the arms of the protagonist The King of Tang Shen would probably be furious to death when he saw his beloved and mother falling into the arms of his enemy. Mother-in-law and daughter-in-law rice bowl Hold Xiao Wu on the left and Ah Yin on the right One is Tang Hao's wife One is the wife of Tang Shenwang Think about the relationship between the two, mother-in-law and daughter-in-law, serving the male protagonist together Hey hey hey, the Tang family father and son will probably be mad to death after seeing this.
Who do you like? Who is bad to flirt with? But he wants to flirt with such a disgusting rabbit, betrays the race, eats inside and outside, is unfilial and unworthy of being a mother. What does it do with such a thing? With such a low IQ and a broken vase, his mother rescued him and then went to the human world to fall in love. He had completely forgotten his mother's life and death. What is the difference between him and an animal? Will he go to the God Realm later or betray his race? What does this kind of person want from him? They are simply beasts among beasts. Fortunately, you still like them. The three most disgusting things in Douluo Continent are the old rabbit, Bibi Donghu Liena
That's it
You don't look like a time traveler at all. You don't have any thoughts. You are led by the nose. Which thing do you want to do? Are you being led by others in your life? What is the meaning of such a life?
Brainless writing, but it's not a cool writing, it's a boring writing.
Author, I like your fanfic very much. I entered it based on your introduction at the beginning, but I don't know when, I suddenly found that your fanfic is too frustrating (both broken chapters and few words, as well as the "wisdom" of the Shrek protagonist group and the "ignorance" of the male protagonist's "hidden edge") Even if this isn't a cool article, it's not like this, right? Moreover, there is a system that still issues tasks. Now it has more than 100 chapters and is almost 200. It has only issued a few tasks, a two-step learning method, a technique, a seed, and a skill. [Emot=default,84/] According to this plot development, by the time you hold Ah Yin's waist in front of Tang San as mentioned in your introduction, it will be more than 500 chapters, right?
Systematic and modern people's thinking in this crisis-ridden time does not want to think about how to become stronger, how to intercept opportunities, how to enrich oneself, how to strengthen oneself. I really don't understand why I want to study. Is it because Ah Yin's hundred thousand years of knowledge is not enough, or is he too stupid to follow the original plot? The easiest way to attract hatred is that the little Zha San has a way to kill himself, so what does it have to do with destroying him?
Really speechless
I already knew some of the plot, but I still pretended not to understand, so I directly told Ah Yin that you had traveled through time, and then told her that Tang Hao was with her just because of your soul ring, and that he was the one who brought Wuhun Palace to you. Why else would he ignore you for so many years and lock you in a stone house?
If you want to read a cool novel, you can go out and turn right. The protagonist was chased away by the enemy many times, and was beaten unconscious, and was almost killed. After passing the divine test, he was forcefully interrogated several times by Qian Daoliu; If you want to see them all, those who are decisive in accepting girls can go out and turn right. Although the protagonist flirts with girls at the beginning, it is just holding hands. The first time he actually accepts girls is more than 250 chapters in the second half. The protagonist has not felt it for the first time because the protagonist is unconscious again. Bibi Dong takes the initiative. In the end, the protagonist's wives are Bibi Dong, A Yin, Qian Renxue, Hu Liena, Zhu Zhuqing, and Xiao Wu; If you want to see a decisive killing, you can go out and turn right. When the protagonist sees the enemy, he will make all kinds of nonsense, saying that you can't leave if you only have this little strength, that he is nothing to be afraid of, and that you will deal with him sooner or later.
It's really difficult for Douluo authors nowadays
There is almost no author who wants to write about Douluo who will not be criticized. 1- Stallion type, I was criticized for writing a little bit here and a little bit there, and then there were a lot of comments saying that I wanted a single female protagonist. Sometimes I wonder if this book is not suitable, so I should change it. I have to say it, but it's not that the writing is not good and the plot is not good, but I simply don't like the way this book is written. 2- It's a type that doesn't put too much emphasis on the setting, but the plot is just fine. It's very common for this kind of book to have a good plot, but without exception they all talk about how the setting here is, and the setting there, but the author has not ruined the character design. Many Douluo settings are a mess. It would be very time-consuming for the author to go through the settings and remember them firmly in the mind. If you have this time, you might as well write more plots, as long as the basic settings are not broken, but there are a lot of trolls who just want to find faults. Isn't it enough to make it enjoyable and comfortable to watch? 3-Authors who particularly care about what readers say This type of review can be said to have messy things in your mind and then keep outputting with the setting set. This kind of author has perfect settings and characters except for the poor plot. This kind of lack of soul. Why do so many people now feel like this and output the setting set? All because of some useless things. You can criticize the author for improving his writing skills, or for criticizing the plot, but you can't say that you don't like a certain character, but you have to read the book in the hope that it will appear in the book, and then complain about the author, or the book does not write enough about the characters you want, and you criticize it, really. This is not necessary. Even if you hate this character, the author must also consider the audience. It is not easy for the author to write anything. It is better to exclude the complicated settings and leave the basic settings to let your mind write. Why do Douluo and Dou Po books rarely break 9.0? I cannot deny that there is one Partly because the author can't control his writing skills, but what makes me even more angry is that writing a book and getting scolded is actually not interesting to me, right? When I see people copying plots one by one, I feel that there are fewer and fewer fans. I wonder if there are any masters writing this type of books.
In fact, the poisonous point is very obvious 1. He is obviously a time traveler but he has no system and cannot do whatever he wants in an invincible and refreshing way. 2. Ah Yin is extremely hostile to Tang San. The protagonist also has a lot of knowledge and ideas, but it is strange that it does not arouse suspicion or malice. 3. Even if it is taught by A Yin himself, the Blue Silver Emperor martial spirit is relatively useless and weak in itself. In addition, A Yin himself may not know as much about the Douluo world as the protagonist. Its only function is to make up for the protagonist's training details that cannot be seen in the novel and to use the system for the protagonist. 4. The system is not in the hands of the protagonist. Although A Yin is hostile to Tang San, he still likes Tang Hao. Even if Tang Hao knows about Tang San's soul travel, he has no reason to join forces with the protagonist. To sum up: Hanging is too weak. What is not yours is not yours after all. Only when it is in your own hands can you be sure. It's not that it would be more realistic to describe Master Tang San as scheming. You've written such a bad person without any brains, and the plot is so brainless that I really can't stand it. You might as well write an invincible and enjoyable article... The Blue Silver Emperor has some advantages as a martial spirit, but it is really not that exciting and makes people uninterested. One is that it has the opportunity to conquer Ah Yin, which may make Xiao Wu naturally fond of it. It may also be an affinity for plants, so conquering the fairy grass is relatively simple. But looking at it this way, it's just a chance, and it's not really exciting at all. Looking through the catalog, I found that I had taken Ju Douluo to the Ice and Fire Eyes. At this time, I started to be brainless again. I didn't know how to collect fairy grass, and I needed Ju Douluo's help. Why was I trying to steal someone else's opportunity? You have no strength and no background. Why should a Titled Douluo give you fairy grass? Giving you one or two plants is an act of benevolence. Tang San's use of kindness and poison Douluo is more intelligent than this. The protagonist himself has no strength and no ideas, and the plot is also based on the defense. If you say it is a cool article, it is not good, and if you say it is brainless, it makes Master Tang San look very bad. The protagonist has been unable to kill him and can only be suppressed. However, the protagonist has no brains and the plot has no brains. It is purely disgusting to readers and neither fish nor fowl.
The protagonist is like an idiot. I have never seen SB's











