Fighting is Broken, but the Heroine Script

Fighting is Broken, but the Heroine Script

by Faded Immortal

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3.3Mwords1,294chapters
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Ch. 1294The New Book is Here "after Ascension, Become a Magical Girl
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About This Novel

Yaowan failed in the time-travel battle, thinking that in order to avoid the tragedy of the entire clan being killed by the Soul Clan, she embarked on a happy life of holding the lap of the future Emperor Yan and plucking the wool. I just found that there were hundreds of millions of small changes in myself. Forget it, Yaowan closed his eyes and gritted his teeth. If plan A doesn't work, then start plan B! It's just that they couldn't laugh anymore. Xun'er: Obviously... It was me who came first! (Le Ziwen)

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Book Friends 20230213382_be25mo ago

To be honest, Xiao Yan took too much. Although Xiao Yan was a bit of a flirt, he didn't fall in love with anyone. Xiao Yan has a modern view of society. The two characters in the original work had no choice but to take responsibility to the end, and the third person was determined not to. Why are you like the male protagonist of Japanese comics, you come and go without any resistance, and you don't let anyone go. This is a heroine script. The heroine is the first protagonist, and Xiao Yan is the second protagonist. No one likes to see the first protagonist being raped repeatedly. Just forget about the little medical fairy and treat it as a regret, but if Xiao Yan treats everyone like this, then his love will turn into a pervert. Readers are not tolerant enough for every harem Also, this is a heroine script. You must not write "The soul penetrates Xiao Yan, but this Dou Po seems to be different." The first protagonist and the second protagonist must be clearly distinguished. Readers will subconsciously bring their perspective to the first protagonist. Don't downplay the heroine just because you like Xiao Yan. Remember, it was the heroine who allowed Xiao Yan to open the harem, not Xiao Yan who opened the harem and chose the heroine. The heroine is not one of Xiao Yan's harem, but other people are allowed to be added after the heroine approves. There is a big difference between the two. Don't write the heroine as an accessory, and don't write it as the status of the original author Xiao Xun'er. It was she who gave Xiao Yan a chance, not Xiao Yan who chose her after he became stronger. In short, I hope the author will take a look at it. I don't want to see it change later.

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Ai Aizi Does Not Eat Grass28mo ago

I'm speechless. It's not good for the heroine to be alone. Marry Xiao Yan? Do you show this to boys?

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Fairy, Small27mo ago

Niubi, changed marriages, and helped Xiao Yan acquire women... Do you want to help Xiao Yan enrich his harem... And get a lot of sisters. Then marry Xiao Yan together

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Lancer_cE20mo ago

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Book Friends 20231027981_cb24mo ago

Some people feel that they are slaves because they are slaves, and some people feel that they are masters because they are slaves. But I have never seen anyone who is a master but wants to be a slave to others. The author is too outrageous. She has traveled through time and is still a young lady but wants to be a slave to others.

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Antler My_ac21mo ago

Married into a promiscuous relationship and was harem-challenged, highly poisonous, quick to retreat

Needless to say, the first book I read at the starting point next door shattered my outlook on life and almost left me with a psychological shadow. The reason why I gave it two stars is because I really like the writing and setting. Unfortunately, the plot was too disgusting. It was like a pot of delicious soup with a lot of ** in it. It was disgusting to eat and a pity to abandon. In fact, when I found this book before, I was happy and lucky. After all, I liked the setting and writing of this book. Huan, according to normal people's thinking, it must be a 1v1 couple or single forever. I can accept both. If I can finish the book like this, it can be regarded as a masterpiece among Dou Po fandoms. But the author doesn't know what madness is going on. Forget about changing marriages. After all, there are almost no explicit mentions. At most, it is a self-deception that the heroine has always been a girl in her past and present lives. But author, how did you write such a plot that ruins the three views of the heroine cuckolding herself? I really doubt the author's mental state when he wrote this book. How good a book was ruined by the author like this? Or do all the books in Qidian have these three views? I also particularly admire those who can still see in. I am also confused whether it is because of the three views or whether they are immune to all poisons. Anyway, I quit first. I sincerely advise those who have normal views and poor anti-drug ability not to come in. I also hope that the author will return to normal as soon as possible.

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hfdk27mo ago

I don't care if the heroine is married, it would be in vain if there is a male protagonist.

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Yuanshi Tianzun21mo ago

It's a rubbish book. I thought about it and decided it would be five stars. I can't be the one to take the history. Anyway, no matter how many 2 or 1 stars I get, the rating won't be lowered. Marrying people in the harem is a novel about self-love. Don't tell me to replace Xiao Yan. If I want to be Xiao Yan, why don't I read a fanfic in which Xiao Yan is the protagonist? If you want to become a child, just say so.

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寓世,独孤文远_ad24mo ago

Who knows, my family, how come someone writes a video about marrying a man and marrying a man, what a mullet, 🦐a girl, the mullet is dead

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2638324mo ago

A product of self-obsession by a female author

Can you believe that she married into a harem? What kind of male videos do you want to watch? You might as well give it to King Tang Shen next door for free. At least Xiao Wu can kill him even if he scratches his skin, but you are actually helping to open the harem with anti-inflammatory drugs. This is a combination of meat and vegetables. Aren't you tired from work? Do you want to enjoy a fulfilling feeling and experience the thrill of pioneering?

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