I Am the Ancestor of the Xiao Family

Xiao Tiance had just stayed up late to read the novel Dou Po Cang Qiong, and when he woke up again, he had become Xiao Xuan's cousin, the favored son of heaven with extraordinary talents.

Xiao Tiance was a bit unlucky. He traveled through time and became a Fighting Saint. Before he started walking sideways, he learned that he was knocked down by the Soul Emperor in a sneak attack and took away the Pure Lotus Demon Fire.

There are many typos, the protagonist's character is contradictory (the character is complex and multi-faceted, but the conflicting points of character are not well handled), and the characterization technique is still relatively green. It is understandable that fan fiction authors want to maintain the general direction of the original plot while also writing new ideas, but this requires a certain degree of flexibility in the background settings of the original story. For example, Xiao Xuan's desire to draw the Emperor's blood in an attempt to break through the Dou Emperor can be completely explained by the psychology of seeking Taoism. Is this more appropriate than the explanation of "Because I am Xiao Xuan, so I..."? In addition, the arrangement of the protagonist and the development of the plot are not inconsistent. Xiao Yan's story takes place thousands of years after Xiao Xuan's death, and there is plenty of time to adjust the plot line (it doesn't even require much explanation). At the same time, Xiao Xuan, as a fighting saint, has a long lifespan, so there is no need to be in such a hurry.

She knew clearly that Xiao Xuan would fail to break through, but she still wanted to give him the blood of herself and the whole family. She just pretended to be moved by his charm and courage. It was so vicious. There were a lot of bloody plots in it that I won't even mention. I really don't know how it got such a high rating.

Have you read the original Dou Po before traveling through time? Isn't this just disgusting? It would be better not to add this sentence. The psychological description of the characters is too bad, and the dialogue between the characters is also bad enough. It is really too poisonous. It would be fine if your protagonist character was someone who has never read the original Doupo and has traveled through time. It has to be like this

I just watched it. I haven't watched Dou Po Cang Qiong for so long. I still remember that it is impossible to break through Dou Di due to lack of source energy. I really can't figure out why I didn't tell Xiao Xuan and just told myself. I saw the record left by the Huangquan Dou Sheng in ancient books, saying that the world lacks source energy and it is impossible to break through to the Dou Emperor. As long as Xiao Xuan does not break through the Dou Emperor Soul Clan and cannot destroy the Xiao Clan, he will not have to die. Then later on, if the protagonist breaks through to the peak of the Nine-Star Dou Sheng, won't the Xiao family be invincible? When the time comes, I will give up the ancient emperor jade. Collect them, open the Cave of Tuoshe Ancient Emperor, and then inherit the inheritance of Tuoshe Ancient Emperor. Resolve blood depletion. Isn't this perfect?

I really don't know what the author is thinking. The beginning of the book is about Dou Po traveling through time and becoming an ancestor of the Xiao family, under the banner of helping Xiao Yan and helping the Xiao family. The early stage was okay, a qualified ancestor of the Xiao family rescued the Xiao family from danger and rose again. What are you writing later? You are hesitant to death. You are obviously invincible in the world, and you still hesitate to destroy someone. Don't you know what it takes to get people to read this book? I can write Xiao Yan like this, I want to destroy the ancient clan and dig a hole to bury Xiao Yan. No matter how Xiao Yan is written by Dodou, he will not give up the inheritance of the ancient emperor. This book is about the author's own obscenity. It is better to go through the past and take Xiao Yan's path to become an emperor. It is better to directly cheat and become invincible than you. There are so many ink pits. You help Xiao Yan and then take away his luck, and blame Xiao Yan for having no sense of family honor. I really can't stand it. To sum it up, the male protagonist feels good about himself. He is written as a thoughtful person who thinks before and behind the scenes. In fact, he is a self-centered person. He wants to be arrogant but not arrogant. If the label is changed, it would be acceptable. But since you are in the book With Xiao Yan, you can't change the character of the character. Xiao Yan in Tudou's novel is not a villain, but he is definitely not a good person. In your novel, Xiao Yan is almost like a licking dog. It's disgusting [emo t=default,20/], if you can call the author, it is estimated that none of the contents of the call can be released***

It feels quite disgusting. Although the protagonist has an enigmatic appearance and is not a stud, it gave people a good feeling in the early stage, but the more I watch, the more I feel it stinks. They say it is for the benefit of the family, but in reality it is all personal preference. Xiao Yan's attitude toward those confidantes is also licking, especially towards Gu Xun'er, who tolerated her many times and passed on the ancient emperor to others. He also found an excuse for himself that after his ascension, the Xiao clan could not suppress the mainland. He laughed to death. Since he was afraid that others would snatch the ancient emperor's inheritance, he might as well give it away along with Xiao Qing's emperor's origin. Anyway, he alone could not suppress the mainland. Without the ancient emperor's inheritance, wouldn't there be the emperor's origin? Why is the origin of the emperor not afraid of being coveted? To put it bluntly, the author just borrows the characters in the book to satisfy his own preferences. It really stinks. The protagonist talks about being abstinent and not close to women. This is probably the character the author wants to set for himself in reality. In fact, it can be seen from his attitude that he is a pervert.

I knew at the beginning that the mainland had no Origin Qi but didn't tell Xiao Xuan. There are various logical issues later. Please don't mess with the logic in Shuangwen. It's all confusing. If the logic is wrong, it looks too twisted.

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