Lord of the Manor in the Elf World

Personally, I still like such unique Pokémon writing. Now that I see it on the shelves, I will briefly share my personal opinions. First of all, it is a medieval elven story. It is very unreasonable for the protagonist to forcefully apply elven information from thousands of years later. First of all, there is the issue of elf moves. The author emphasizes that the national elf army does not use moves, but the elves encountered in the wild will use moves to fight. So, does the entire country have a halo of intelligence reduction? Will both humans and elves descend? Definitely not. For example, in the special chapter, Yaro knows the power of wave guides. He can teach other people and elves to use the power of wave guides. It is because of this talent that he has become a famous hero. However, in later generations, wave guides have become a type of skill among elves, so most medieval elves do not know how to use wave guides. How to use attribute abilities? On the battlefield, there are mostly tall and strong elves wearing armors to fight. In the wild, most of the elves who can use skills are lord elves. There is no shortage of resources, so the fire attribute can spray fire, and the water attribute can spray water, but it is impossible to refine it to fireballs, spray flames, large-character fire, etc. Returning to the text of this book, survival of elves in the wild is like child's play. They are not hostile to you and are not hostile. Will they save other people and elves? First of all, why do humans and elves cooperate to build the utopian elf world of later generations? You must have experienced suffering before you want to stay away from suffering. Tree fruits are easy to grow and survive, but what if no one cares about them? All species around the world are fighting for resources. Emojis cannot survive without fighting! In the article, after the five foam chinchillas were defeated, they thought they were leaving home with their small backpacks? Does the author think his writing is cute and good? That's all I can say! It's terrible! In this era, blood and war are the main theme, and those who fail in the struggle can only be reduced to food. For the people and elves of this era, this is the law of nature, and it has always been like this! Therefore, the whole world is dark and ignorant. Although humans and elves all have potential consciences, they are driven by the world and have to fight, tired, hesitant, and insensitive! Suddenly a spark appeared in the dark world, warm, bright and full of hope, so people and elves put their faith and strength into the fire, turned it into a torch and then grew into a prairie fire, and finally rose into the night sky and turned into the sun to illuminate the whole world!

So far, I think it's okay. Although it has nothing to do with anime characters, it's much better than those iron-clad protagonists, the flowing bamboo orchid. It's also quite innovative and doesn't have much in common with others. I hope it won't be unfinished. The technology lines in it feel like civilization. I still like to read it.

It feels like the progress after more than 150+ chapters is very strange, not as good as the previous chapters.

There are too many words like "surprise" and "surprise", which may sound a little jarring to listeners, but the other words are fine, after all, this is an old author.

It's just that the protagonist is too arrogant. Slaves are liberated when they say they are liberated. You said that except for Pokémon, everything else is similar to the Middle Ages. Human nature is also the same. Other free people will not doubt why slaves are liberated like them. Furthermore, it is difficult for people to work hard. You must have both sticks and carrots, but at least they must be the same? In this case, slave liberation as a reward for those who work hard is undoubtedly better than this direct liberation method. In the end, such skills will be liberated to stimulate productivity and balance the free people. Furthermore, it is outrageous for the protagonist to start teaching people how to use skills when he is not strong. If he is not in the Pokémon world, not having this panel to check the trust level is undoubtedly a poisonous point. Because people's hearts will change, leaving no countermeasures is the stupidest behavior. Of course, you can also say that in that environment, all available forces must be integrated. The girl still has a mother, and she is also very loyal and will not rebel. But if you don't write it down, it will give people the impression that everything is not prepared, and it will be difficult to collapse. After all, in a world like this, no amount of preparation is too much. It is even better if you teach skills after the hat monster group joins. After all, they are overwhelming in numbers. Even if someone has bad intentions, they can be prepared in advance. But if you teach directly now, it means that if someone rebels, you will not be prepared at all.

This type of Pokémon fan fiction, which is completely divorced from games and anime characters, seems to have a limited audience and a limited number of interested people, and the interactivity is relatively weak.

It feels like most of the Pokémon stories are fan fiction, but they are written in a non-genuine way. Isn't there the kind of Pokémon that can be combined with its own world view?

I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.

The overall plot is a bit strange. It has been dormant for development and strategy, and then suddenly couldn't bear it anymore and directly crushed it with force. This seems that the plot of training the army and own Pokémon in the early stage has become a background, and the logic is not very reasonable.

Why did it evolve in Chapter 196 but not evolve later? Or burning bugs?