Elf: This Trainer Just Wants to Become an Immortal

The author really put on the skin of Pokémon and wrote some very disgusting things for people who like Pokémon.

The more I write, the more outrageous it becomes. I feel like I can't stand it anymore. You are a cultivator of immortality! ! ! As a result, you have cultivated to the point where you can't even feel other people's malice, and you still pretend not to understand anything. Are you treating others as if your life has been in vain for most of your life? Cultivation of all kinds of immortality! ! You can even see the curse, but in the end you can't even use the simplest beggar's version of clairvoyance! What's the matter, you really like being plotted against, don't you? I feel like the protagonist becomes more and more ridiculous as he writes about it. He doesn't know anything at all, so he just thinks he knows it and others don't. I'm convinced.

It makes me a little sick that you wrote about this woman in the first place, but also her exclusive breeder

The main character is too drawn out. And there are still many such talents. So the protagonist is completely pushed into the mud. You need to know what a hundred arts of cultivating immortality are, and what a great master once localized is. The person at the top of an industry is like a sword master. Even if he doesn't know how to use a sword, it would only take him a day or two to learn it again. Even if he is blocked by knowledge, he can still use his remaining knowledge to show you what it means to be a real grand master. You are completely treating the world of immortality as rubbish.

It felt ok before there was any charge. It's especially strange after charging. There is always some intellectual content appearing. There is also a protagonist who is said to be a cultivator, but it is a bit like an urban novel. The protagonist has been suppressed, all kinds of conspiracies, and troublesome things come to the protagonist. The current rating is 8.7, Which seems to be too high.

It's not that you can't watch it, but it should be more enjoyable. Doesn't cultivating immortals and various arts improve your cultivation? Refining alchemy, refining Gu formations, etc., And also likes to give unique things to others, which cannot widen the gap between the same levels. There are so many poisonous points.

The author's plug-in is weak because of the world's reasons! If the worst spiritual root in the world of cultivating immortals is the Five Elements Miscellaneous Spiritual Root, then his qualification is the 18th Series Super Miscellaneous Spiritual Root. The most obvious consequence of the 18th series of super hybrid spiritual roots is that he has only entered the first level of Qi training after practicing seriously for 10 years. In the world of cultivating immortals, this is just an introduction. I definitely don't have any hope of cultivating immortality and immortality, so I'd better just farm and maintain my health honestly. Instead of hoping that the 18-series super hybrid spiritual roots can cultivate immortality and live forever, it is better to pray that one day you can meet Xerneas and let him bless you with eternal life. After all, the probability is much greater than the probability of immortality by cultivating oneself.

The writing becomes more and more like SB, with many typos

Author, your writing is good. The protagonist is a real treasure-giver boy. He gives away everything, even the spiritual farming skills for cultivating immortals. Do you know that this is too poisonous? The protagonist has to take the risk of life and death to repay a small favor for others. Is this true for you? All the opportunities you get are "lent" to others, and you don't have any of them. No, you keep one, and you don't maintain the uniqueness of the protagonist at all. I can give anything away, I can change the protagonist, can I change it, otherwise the protagonist is just a boy who gives money, someone else's plug-in, and he has seen so many mythical beasts and is still at the first level of Qi training. Even if the blue bar is long, it's not like this. Really, the cultivation level will not increase at all. To be honest, I am optimistic about the author's book so I typed so many words. Let the protagonist not be plotted by so many people or leave all the benefits to the protagonist. Which aristocratic family does not have any, this is okay! The protagonist had better be more forceful and take the initiative. Don't be forced to do it at every turn. It's so frustrating to watch.

I haven't been able to see any of the women since they came out