Let You Make a Game, What the Hell is Pokemon?

Update quickly, Hakimi! ! ! There are only two chapters on the shelves. Others thought we looked down upon them when they saw it. Each of you here has one chapter.

There are always some errors. Error in moves. Can the bubble light be chaotic? Also, even the Alliance can't find the protagonist's name. You, a villain, can know the protagonist's name, right? Didn't you say that the system can protect him? Protected a lonely person. Low-level errors always occur.

The first 80 chapters are very good and don't drag on. The more you read later, the more uncomfortable you feel. First of all, describe the emotions in a simple way so that everyone can understand it; others describe the shock in detail because it is original, and readers can take it in if they are confused; you, a little pillar god, is shocked here, but it is really hard to relate to it, and it is very uncomfortable to watch; If you don't know how to write about high-intensity fighting, don't write about it. These chapters of Thunder God Pillar are very uncomfortable to read; What we are looking at is the subject matter. Let's remember it. I would like to watch it if it's a normal plot. Don't describe it randomly. It will lose points.

It's okay at the beginning, but it's ridiculous at the end. Some chapters can even be skipped without affecting the viewing.

No, you are too smart. If you are like this all the time, how can you ask for a monthly pass in the future? You can read the novel just by looking at the name.

Too watery, a waste of my money. It was okay at first, but as I got to the back I felt more watery. After listening to it, I ended up listening to it inexplicably. The price is expensive. There isn't much information in there.

Originally, it would be quite interesting to release a Pokémon game in the Pokémon world so that major regions can learn about Pokémon and villain organizations in other regions. But the author's writing style is so poor that he often forgets what he has written before and writes it again after a few chapters. It's easy to say that the main character has a small role, after all, the game is to educate players about Pokémon; it doesn't matter if the ordinary players are written as novices, after all, not everyone has a full understanding of the ecological habits of Pokémon in other regions; but is it too fake that the regional champion and Pokémon Doctor are still in the initial stage of Pokémon's characteristic forms? If you say that the protagonist travels through his own parallel world, and Pokémon has just arrived, then it is not a big problem if you write like this, but your world is obviously the world of Pokémon. Even if you say that this is a parallel world of Pokémon, the popularity of basic knowledge of Pokémon should not be universal. It is normal for ordinary people not to recognize rare Pokémon such as phantom beasts or fossil Pokémon, and it is acceptable for regional champions and Pokémon doctors not to know about them. But you can't write those ordinary Pokémon the same as them. Even the regional champion and the Pokémon Doctor only have a preliminary understanding of ordinary Pokémon. What's the difference between this and pioneering? Generally speaking, the subject matter is good, but what the author wrote is really bad, which is why I gave it two stars instead of one star. If any book friend sees a book with similar themes and good looks, please share it, thank you.

Tai Shui plot, the price is not cheap

It was quite novel at first, but after more than 50 chapters, it became boring. There were fewer scenes for the protagonist, but there were really many scenes for Sirona, and there were many more plots to subdue intelligence. The more I read, the more disappointed I became.

There are too many mistakes in the settings. At least take a look in the illustrated book. For example, the small marsupials of the mega marsupial are separated from the pouch. For example, the reason why the branchial ichthyosaur looks so weird is because researchers randomly assembled the fossils.