Mortal's Beginning Spirit Beast Mountain

The hook is too small, so I can't say it is small. I can only say that it opens and presses at the same time. The hook is similar to Han Li's, with different functions. The talent is also a useless pseudo-spiritual root. Basically, these small hooks like to lick Han Li. He licked Han Li again and established a good relationship with Han Li. I really don't know what the use is of establishing a good relationship with a person like Han Li. Those who can fight are not needed, but those who cannot be defeated cannot expect help and at most they will be hunted down together. Why do you want to be friends with such a person who always protects you? In the early stage of Han Li's life, there was at most one Sky Palm Bottle, and the skills could be obtained elsewhere, and there couldn't be some small opportunities? It seems too rubbish to have to argue with Han Lila, and the main character is always jealous. Can the author use words to say, jealous Han Yunzhi, his brother has such a good sister, what right do you have to be jealous? Have you seen that Brother Ren is kind to her? You are jealous, you have such a bad character, We can't write without Han Li, right? Every plot has to be with Han Li. To be honest, mortals really can't stand it. Anyone who doesn't speed up the growth of the elixir will lick it to death. Various opportunities give the protagonist half a share to Han Li, and they can go on adventures together, or make various transactions, just like a nanny. It's not an exaggeration for a protagonist like Han Li to kill him directly at the beginning. Why are there so many licking dogs? Except for Tang San, the protagonist is generally not considered a water person, but he is torturing anyway. The other protagonists are either licking or licking. Can't you write downplaying and killing? Things like anti-inflammatory are diluted, Han Li is selfish and quick to kill, and Tang San is torturing and playing. The difference between Tang San and Han Li is that Tang San clearly has bodyguards in the early stage, but the risk is really not that big. Han Li is most vulnerable without bodyguards in the early stage. This kind of risk is big, and he is stubborn. There is not much difference between the two personalities. As long as Tang San kills casually after the early stage, Han Li must always be on guard if he doesn't kill him.

Hello author, I have also seen other comments about the protagonist's magic weapon. I recommend that for beast control, it is better to build a tower. The tower is called the Four Elephant Beast Control Tower. The tower is nine floors high and has 12 rooms on each floor. The room can hold a monster beast and a group of them. This tower can cure monster beasts. That bead is called the Dinghai Divine Bead: I think the functions that the Dinghai Pearl can introduce are: it can emit five-color divine light, has the power of the four seas, can store spiritual energy and restore mana, can bind people, seal, create a space inside that cannot be inhabited by people, but can plant elixirs or store goods, and there is also a four-sea array, a total of 36 beads. A crown of golden clouds can be refined on the top of the head, which can ward off inner demons, and a clear heart can be used for defense. On the body, a purple ribbon with eight trigrams can be refined, a magic rope is tied around the waist, wind-chasing shoes, a bloodthirsty knife, and a ten thousand soul sail can be worn on the feet. There are 365 swords made from swords, and there are twelve special swords with sword spirits: Sword Spirits: Two Sword Spirits in the Legend of Yulong Xiuxian, Sword Mother from the Sword, Ruby from the Ancient Sword Legend, Once upon a time there was a mountain of spiritual swords: Kunshan Sword Spirit, Xian Ni's Shuang'er, Chixiao of the Weapon Spirit, Chaoya in the Fantasy City, Zhu Xian's Lu Xueqi, Zhu Xian's Golden Ping'er, Youji, and Xiaobai. There is also the Xuan Ming Needle. There can also be other ones such as the top ten artifacts of Huaqiangu or the reduced version of the jade purifying bottle, etc. For monsters, it is better to adopt a double-pupiled mouse to evolve into a treasure-hunting mouse, and a fox, whose names are Bai Feng Jiu Bai Qian Bai Ling (fairy version), and the maid, the nine sisters in Tiantian Youxi 2, By the way, it's better to take a Kun and build a city on Kun's back, Tianxing City. Kun can grow, and Kun can also cooperate with the Unreturning Inkstone to fly around the world. Female protagonists: Ling Yuling, Zi Ling, Mei Ning, Mrs. Wen, Wen Siyue, Yuan Yao, Yan Li, Song Yu, Liu Yu, Mu Peiling, Shi Die, Yinyue, etc. And the protagonist of the cauldron can start to collect immortal grass from the human world, the spiritual world, the underworld, and grow it himself. Materials like iron can be enlarged with the cauldron and grow little by little in the ground. I hope the author can reply. ※ By the way, Cheng Tiankun and Lu Luo of the Luoyun Sect, if they can't do it for a while, and Shi Die's father, Ling Yuling's parents, who can't be transformed into gods, the protagonist can refine Yilu Dan, Shouyuan Dan, and for medicinal materials, Han Li can help find thousand-year medicinal materials. All medicinal materials are good for health and increasing lifespan. If the protagonist strengthens one pill, it can add 800 years.

If you don't know how to write the plot behind this, can you just settle it down? Obviously the plot is still very smooth, but after the mine plot, I feel that the quality has plummeted. It turned out to be a bad plot, which made me extremely embarrassed. Moreover, after the protagonist traveled through time, he planned to sneak across the Chaos Star Sea after the war, but in the end he returned to the battlefield because of that plot. I really don't understand, what is the meaning of this plot? It was just a fake alchemy period to help me practice a half-finished magic weapon, and I also plagiarized the plot of Wind Thunder Wings and Nanlong Hou being attacked. It was a half-finished magic weapon. It was not even a magic weapon. It was too late to escape. You still took that thing away. It was not a particularly powerful thing. You had to have people chasing you desperately, right? It was like an ancient treasure. I was so embarrassed when you saw it. At that time, I really felt that I couldn't stand the plot anymore, so be it.

Come on, all the pills were formed in Chapter 96, and now there are more than 220 of them. I vomited them in the early stages of the statement. I have to be like a fool and the protagonist's level is stuck.

Why does the author like to write the enemy as the weapon spirit of his magic weapon so much?

The writing is really ordinary. I was rushing around and crawling, and I traveled through time in vain.

Old Demon Han did not call the wrong name. The purpose of writing a fanfic about a mortal is to see if I can rob him of the opportunity. As for making friends, it's not necessary at all. The protagonists of any other book can make friends, but not this one.

How should I put it? The writing style is very average, my language skills are not very good, and I feel like I can't read it well. The mortal next door, I am the Patriarch of the Demonic Way. The writing style is really good. The author can learn from it.

If you have money at the beginning, don't buy Tianleizi and high-priced elementary talismans. It's so refreshing to directly cover the fire. There is no shortage of money anyway, and the blood comes out in a mess. In the original book, it was almost ten years and you went to the mining area after four years of seclusion. It's really outrageous. You have always been concerned about whether Han Li will die without him. It's really disgusting. You are garbage. The best thing to do is to directly build the foundation and successfully find a way to get the Dayan Jue and the demon clan skills, then go to the Xi Country or find the teleportation array in advance and give it to Xin Ruyin. After all, she is not only short of elixirs but also money. You can run to the Luan Xing Sea in advance and rely on your golden fingers to pile up the spiritual stones. If you insist on pulling Han Lizhen, he will be speechless.

The plot is generally okay, the writing is generally okay, but there are too many little bits and pieces, and it always deliberately creates hatred.